amicable212:
This is my first attempt at email copywriting. Please I need your honest constructive criticism to know the areas for improvement. Thanks

Subject: The beauty secret no one talks about


Hey Martha,

Do you know that your skin has a memory? In ten, twenty or thirty years from now, your skin will show the results of how it was treated today.


The skin is a very delicate part of the body that enjoys more time, care and pampering.


Every lady wants a glowing skin. A skin that radiates and glitters like the stars guiding the sky and the sun shedding it's illuminous light on earth.


We spend hours in making effort to give the skin a glow .. but then who do we blame when the skin decides to break even?


YOU wake up one morning to find moles of pimples on your forehead or your lips breaking out. Or how bad it seems for a product you use ending up making you look like a WHITE witch looking for her ghost house.


What then do you do?


The thought of scanning through varieties of cosmetic products, confused as to what would go well with the skin can be nerve breaking.


This is a phase every lady detest.


The problem most ladies face is lack of basic cosmetic knowledge. Not knowing the perfect skin product for your unique skin type.


How did I come about this?


Just to let you know, this advice is coming from someone who missed her valedictory service due to bad skin problem. (Yeah....very painful)


Trust me when I say I have had my own fair share of skin care problem. Last year, my skin broke out. I tried different products and recommendations but it became worse. I couldn't muster courage to look people in the eye let alone attend parties.


A friend of mine Amber introduced me to an article on a blog. The article was about products to try out. At first I was pessimistic about it -probably one of those paid promotions.


Kudos to the writer, I was hooked. I had hope for a minute that probably this was it. An e-book was recommended at the end of the article.


To my surprise, it was completely free. It took only one click (LINK) to access the document. After reading through this power packed repository of knowledge, I was overwhelmed.


This e-book:
* breaks down the different skin types to basic level
* Have questions posed to help you know your skin type
* Recommend products that give that radiant skin making it easy to choose without the hectic process


This e-book 'TOP SECRET YOU ARE MISSING TO ACHIEVE THAT JUICY EFFECT'' was the magic wand that did the magic.


Surprisingly, it comes with a beauty skin care product (LINK) at a discount of 20% ( yeah..... unbelievable)


As a lady, we know how good and quality skin care products can be expensive but then good things happen.


This offer is still open till midnight tomorrow. Here is an opportunity to grab this book (LINK).

Amy

cc venzal
foluwadamilare
wordswriter

amicable212:
This is my first attempt at email copywriting. Please I need your honest constructive criticism to know the areas for improvement. Thanks

Subject: The beauty secret no one talks about


Hey Martha,

Do you know that your skin has a memory? In ten, twenty or thirty years from now, your skin will show the results of how it was treated today.


The skin is a very delicate part of the body that enjoys more time, care and pampering.


Every lady wants a glowing skin. A skin that radiates and glitters like the stars guiding the sky and the sun shedding it's illuminous light on earth.


We spend hours in making effort to give the skin a glow .. but then who do we blame when the skin decides to break even?


YOU wake up one morning to find moles of pimples on your forehead or your lips breaking out. Or how bad it seems for a product you use ending up making you look like a WHITE witch looking for her ghost house.


What then do you do?


The thought of scanning through varieties of cosmetic products, confused as to what would go well with the skin can be nerve breaking.


This is a phase every lady detest.


The problem most ladies face is lack of basic cosmetic knowledge. Not knowing the perfect skin product for your unique skin type.


How did I come about this?


Just to let you know, this advice is coming from someone who missed her valedictory service due to bad skin problem. (Yeah....very painful)


Trust me when I say I have had my own fair share of skin care problem. Last year, my skin broke out. I tried different products and recommendations but it became worse. I couldn't muster courage to look people in the eye let alone attend parties.


A friend of mine Amber introduced me to an article on a blog. The article was about products to try out. At first I was pessimistic about it -probably one of those paid promotions.


Kudos to the writer, I was hooked. I had hope for a minute that probably this was it. An e-book was recommended at the end of the article.


To my surprise, it was completely free. It took only one click (LINK) to access the document. After reading through this power packed repository of knowledge, I was overwhelmed.


This e-book:
* breaks down the different skin types to basic level
* Have questions posed to help you know your skin type
* Recommend products that give that radiant skin making it easy to choose without the hectic process


This e-book 'TOP SECRET YOU ARE MISSING TO ACHIEVE THAT JUICY EFFECT'' was the magic wand that did the magic.


Surprisingly, it comes with a beauty skin care product (LINK) at a discount of 20% ( yeah..... unbelievable)


As a lady, we know how good and quality skin care products can be expensive but then good things happen.


This offer is still open till midnight tomorrow. Here is an opportunity to grab this book (LINK).

Amy

cc venzal
foluwadamilare
wordswriter

Foluwadamilare:


Here is the link to the page explaining how to mine reviews:

https://copyhackers. com/2014/10/amazon-review-mining/

Don't forget to remove the space btw 'dot' and 'com'

adsmaster:



Thank you hun!

These link you sent was so helpful.

My Gush!

You wouldn't believe am just coming out from a intense study of all the valuable information on that post.

Thank you

How do you smell?

Hello _____,
Someone just walked into a room, and the atmosphere changed because the person smells funny. So I will ask again, how do you smell?
My biggest fear has always been walking into a room, and everyone looks at me in a not so friendly way because I smell bad. I don't know how I would feel.

All my life, I have walked with that consciousness, which made me spend all my money on perfumes, all kinds of perfume.
But I have always had problems because the scent makes me sick(or so I thought). I feel nauseous, light-headed whenever I use perfume, sometimes I throw up.

I had almost given up until I met Sara, who introduced me to ________, everything changed.

The fruity sweet scent of _______ was unlike anything I had ever experienced. It smells so natural, doesn't suffocate or choke,
It smells so good; everyone wants to get their hands on it.

It doesn't leave a stain on your dress; it doesn't fade off after 30 mins, you don't have to bathe with it, with just a little you are set for the day.

A scent that commands attention, now when I walk into a room all I get is smiles and compliments, everyone goes crazy over this perfume, they want to know what I'm using.

Now I know people like me; they like the way I smell, they want to speak to me.
A real confidence boost for me, I'm no longer scared of walking into a room or talking to anyone, I now feel welcomed.

Name, are you still scared, is your confidence still low?
With ______, your story can change like mine.

To get yours now, just click Here.
Follow this link now to get a 20% discount available from now till Friday.

Get your life back with only a click Here


With all the scent in the world
Name.

PS: You can also get it for someone you genuinely care about.

Goalnaldo:
My attempt at relational email. Just one oo


Subject [ WELCOME OYENIYIJK! ]


You need to see how I screamed and banged at my table when I saw that you subscribed to my email list, oyeniyijk.

You would think I just won a million dollar lottery!

I was in the library and I had to stylishly turn around to see if people noticed what I did.

Well, I met the eyes of two beautiful ladies and a gentleman staring at me wondering God knows what.

Not that I care though, my new friendship with you was all that mattered at that very point in time - no apologies.

If there was one thing I believed in, inside that library hall, it was how great our friendship would be. Don't you think so oyeniyijk?

I would like you to save my email address as a contact because over the coming days I'll be writing you valuable information and I don't want them to end up in your spam folder.

CHEERS TO OUR FRIENDSHIP!


Warmest regards


Goalnaldo

Venzal:
How did that gig go, bro?

Olawrites:
Nigerian profile is good, what matter is your delivery and packaging.

MY STORY

I had been on Fiverr for a year without seeing nothing...not until I came across this best thread ever!

Just this morning, I was online on my Fiverr account, a Nigerian client chatted me up ...He was new and looking for an email copywriter to help his affiliate marketing business.

As a fellow Nigerian, he was happy seeing someone who is from his country.

We discussed at length and even exchanged contacts. In the end, we agreed on $110


I noticed, I've been happily doing $5 jobs and getting good reviews, this propelled my profile on Fiverr to visibility.

Let start from $5.


Thank You Venzal, Cutezt, Meklex for the teachings

Never give up on Nigerian profile.

TheSTreetman:
@Venzal1 Venzal. Please can you create a channel in that Telegram group and post your updates. Most people especially me don't like groups that when you're back, you'll be greeted with over 500 messages. Mostly chats while important messages will be hidden from it.

If there's an important question, you can as well use the channel and answer it while tagging the person.

My suggestion though.

adsmaster:


You will be amazed what you will learn from those chat from members of the group that seem useless...

Venzal1:
Sorry everyone...

Anti spambot is killing the momentum of the thread. The constant bans are becoming annoying.

The other day after my last lesson, I got banned for sharing some common subject line formula.

I have now put them into a Google doc file and here's the link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JiDIbJJjhCMKcDR8mYqQb8w5r2FUToBqDQMjfTotVmA/edit?usp=sharing

A lot more is happening on the Telegram group. And I am able to share links without fear of any ban.

You'd do well to join by clicking on the link in the signature of my main profile.

Once you get in, read the pinned post first, then skip into the file section to ger access to files already shared in that group so far.

WHIZKIDEFE:



(my first attempt)


SL: A cure to brokenness and sleeplessness at last!

Hey [name)

Who would’ve thought that financial freedom and cure to sleeplessness could come from a single solution?

Earlier this year, before the coming of the pandemic that held the world to stand still, I was broke and as a result, had difficulty sleeping.

How could I sleep when my thoughts are troubled? I got a minimum of text 2 messages from my landlord, reminding me of my rent expiration.
This did me more harm than good, as I racked my brain for solutions.

I wasn’t as outgoing and lively as I used to because of my financial crisis. My family and friends noticed how withdrawn I was and tried their best to reach out.

Everything little thing annoyed me, so I kept to myself before I transfer aggression to innocent people around me.

I was surviving on the remaining funds on my account all those while when I received a mail of termination from the firm I worked with, citing their inability to continue payment due to the pandemic.

That moment, I lost appetite to eat and felt my world crumbling.

My thoughts ran in different directions, thinking of how I'd come up with my rent and money for upkeep. I decided to search online.

It was during my random surfing of webpages to search for a job that I came across Venzal Wealth Manual (VWM), a solution to my financial crisis. [link]

The VWM contains practical and money-making tips I never knew existed. After reading Venzal Wealth Manual, I applied the first principle in the book with determination and the following week, I earned my first six digits income right from the comfort of my room.

When I received payment for the first job I did online, I jumped up and screamed in excitement, waking my sleeping neighbors in the process.

It was real! I applied another principle from the book and I got another stream of income in a matter of days.

And that was how my story changed. My landlord no longer sends me rent expiration text messages cos I now pay ahead. Thanks to VNM [link)

I could have kept this secret to myself and make a lot from it alone but, that would be selfish of me.

I don’t want you to pass through the hell and hardship I passed through before I found the manual to wealth. [link]

Ever since I came across the Venza Wealth Manual, I have been earning money from the comfort of my home and now sleep peacefully.

I now go out as much as I want, spend more time with my family and friends, and I feel happier than ever. Financial stability is bae!

Before you get a job termination mail as I did, get a copy of Venzal Wealth Manual [link] now and start your journey to financial freedom now.

P.S. First 10 people to purchase the book will get a 40% discount and a free 2gb data subscription on any network.



I just freestyled with this.

Venzal1:
Sorry everyone...

Anti spambot is killing the momentum of the thread. The constant bans are becoming annoying.

The other day after my last lesson, I got banned for sharing some common subject line formula.

I have now put them into a Google doc file and here's the link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JiDIbJJjhCMKcDR8mYqQb8w5r2FUToBqDQMjfTotVmA/edit?usp=sharing

A lot more is happening on the Telegram group. And I am able to share links without fear of any ban.

You'd do well to join by clicking on the link in the signature of my main profile.

Once you get in, read the pinned post first, then skip into the file section to ger access to files already shared in that group so far.

Babygal2020:
Just finished writing Hubspot's Free Email Marketing Certification Exam now, scored 54/60. It was a blast.
If an 8-month pregnant woman could do it, you too can!!!!!

Now time to start practising Email Copywriting.

I have created an Upwork account.

Thank you Venzal and every other person in here!!!!

Zowee10:


Please the link to the hubspot Free email marketing course

WHIZKIDEFE:



Constructive criticism, please.
Cc. Venzal, Venzal1, Foluwadamilare, adsmaster, Wordswriter

Thanks in anticipation

optimistic1234:
Don't say you weren't told.

Hey,
It was 10:30pm one beautiful tuesday. I just got off from work. I was on my way back home.
I was damn hungry, so I wanted to see if my roommates have food at home. My roommates weren't answering their phone. Well, it's too late I guess. I got to my house.

Wow, there were a lot of cars outside. What's going on i murmurd? I can hear music coming from my house… So these guys are throwing a party without telling me. Usually i'm always been informed when birthday parties are organised. This time may be they forgot...Fine.
Now what? We will as well have fun together. I approach my front door.
Me: "Sheriff's department. This is the police. Open up" I hear the music turn off immediately.

Whisper heard, shushes are going on. I'm giggling as this unfolds… My roommate opens the door I rushed in. Hands on the air everyone… I see all of them put their hands up. Some of the girls screamed. Then they realised who it was. We all laughed. I pop a beer. Music started to blaze so high. My first dance move my pant trouser tore. Ahhh!!

The joy to have fun relapsed… everyone couldn't control their laugh including the girls. One of my roommates called John approached me. Why are you still swimming in the ocean of ignorance? Haven't you heard about cuisine men pant/trouser.(link).

P.S.
Have you been embarrassed by inferior pant trouser? How would you feel when you miss that beautiful occasion? Annoyed? Dejected? My guess is as good as yours. Bad alright?
You washed your black pant trouser(normal washing) and it changes to green.. what!!! Is it green or black I ordered?
After washing it frays around the pocket, waist, and leg opening. Sure they might look good but they don't always perform. Some styles are too stylised. Others are made with inferior materials and over priced.

None of these is true about cuisine men pants, handmade with quality materials. It retains it's colours after series of washes. It's a perfect fit for your occasion. Does not bunch up when you lift your arm. Honestly, cuisine has change the way I look. Goes well with all kinds of kicks.
Why break your bank over low grade factory made uncomfortable pant trousers.
Get yous today by clicking (link)
Act now before it's too late. Limited stock available.

Sigh
Me

Please find time to scrutinized this. Venzal et al