adeadeyera:


Even though I know that your warped mind wouldn't still comprehend, lemme attempt to lay it bare.

Errors like syntax, punctuations and typos are commonplace in drafts.
However, tenses and grammar errors are proof that you have to work on your writing skills.

But since you want to prove to idiots like you that you can write (the Nigerian way), you're here exhibiting idiocy, proving nonsense.

Doesn't change the fact that you're an idiot, though.

webhead:
another dumb post to prove how little you know about the subject at hand.

Errors, regardless of what form--- like Grammer, syntax, punctuation etc--- are all errors. and they all appear in a d[b]arft[/b].

infact, Grammer and tense errors are the first two of which great writers admit to neglecting when writing said draft.

but I'm sure you won't still understand me. or should I use smaller words, since what I'm saying seems to be incomprehensible to you.

adeadeyera:


Say no more.
Stay put at being an idiot.
You can never be a writer.

webhead:
why should a mouse tell a lion that he isn't a lion.

the fact that you don't know know what a draft entails proves that you are just an average guy who owns a phone with a keyboard.

I don't need your validation to become a writer: I am already one.

maybe not a great one ---Yet--- but I am better than you.

adeadeyera:


Your abjectness is visible to all, yet you can't see it.
A 'writer' who can't spell GRAMMAR and DRAFT, and yet wants to prove what point?
Bush meat!

webhead:
continuing to argue with you is pointless and unproductive.

I literally have a first draft to complete tommorow, so going through the previous threads to show you your Grammer and syntax errors is a waste of time.

to be honest, maybe I shouldn't have insulted you, after you First insulted me.

but I hope you can swallow your seemingly unbreakable pride and learn.

adeadeyera:


Admittance of your idiocy is important here.
Until you do, my zero tolerance stance for stupidity is being visited on you, full swing.

You're an idiot.

webhead:
you are apathetically hilarious.

adeadeyera:


Who cares?
Wannabe know-it, ode ni e.

webhead:
you are apathetically hilarious.

Astra101:




Hey guys, stand up let's share the grace in fellowship...op has done the closing prayer.

May we rise

Astra101:




Hey guys, stand up let's share the grace in fellowship...op has done the closing prayer.

May we rise

webhead:
No closure until Mr adeadeyera admits his naivety!!

adeadeyera:

You're actually the unsophisticated here. The IDIOT.

webhead:
at least I know what a first draft is, unlike you who can argue till the second coming, even when you truly don't know anything.

Josefsom:
Oga abeg komplete d story na or send me a link to read d komplete part abeg
Thanks 4 d write up,d story make sence wella

adeadeyera:


You're a wannabe.
You don't know jacksh!t and you think you do. You're an unfortunate dumbo.
Irredeemable!

webhead:
I would have taken this post to heart, but i remembered that the person who typed this has been blindly arguing with me for a few days.

dude, are you sure you know what Google is ?

just type in "what is a first draft " and everything is settled.

oh, wait I almost forgot: even if you saw that I am right, you won't admit--- because of your pride-induced attention seeking.

peacock!

adeadeyera:


I don't have to prove to you that I know what a draft is.
What you have to prove to me and others following is whether you're not an idiot.
However, nothing in all the exchanges suggest otherwise, IDIOT!

webhead:
God!

so, your still proud to be wrong!

you know what a first draft is, yet you elucidate it incorrectly.

only two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former--- Albert Einstein.

adeadeyera:


Oh! Your idiocy has assumed an all high dimension. Of course, of monumental proportion.
So, I inferred that I didn't know what a draft is?
From stupidity to idiocy and now to plain madness.
You need serious help o.
You don kolo!

webhead:
you moved from not comprehending simple sentences to being proud that you are wrong--- and back to not understanding simple sentences again!

you said you need not to prove to me that you know what a draft is and now I am telling you that you don't know what it is, judging by all the abominable explanations that you have been given about the subject.

or should I use pidgin?

u dey craze?

Patrioticbreed9:
@adeadayera and @webhead biko make una take am easy with dis una big big engrishes o i just dey laugh since.. @adeadayera just as @webhead said this is just a first draft, on a normal it was suposed to be on a papper and not nairaland but i just decided to post it hear insted.. when i post the story on my blog i will copy and paste it here on nairaland it here.. @adeadayera na my padi you be na abi no be desame estate we dey again.. @webhead i cut cap for you na baba you be.. abeg make una stop the insult..

Patrioticbreed9:
@adeadayera and @webhead biko make una take am easy with dis una big big engrishes o i just dey laugh since.. @adeadayera just as @webhead said this is just a first draft, on a normal it was suposed to be on a papper and not nairaland but i just decided to post it hear insted.. when i post the story on my blog i will copy and paste it here on nairaland it here.. @adeadayera na my padi you be na abi no be desame estate we dey again.. @webhead i cut cap for you na baba you be.. abeg make una stop the insult..

adeadeyera:


I have time for fools like this, leave am.
I made it abundantly clear early on that it was all cruise but not with this demented wannabe writer.

webhead:
Liar!

you had childishly insulted the op, before you said "it's a cruise" due to all the backlash you received from nairalanders.

Now I've discovered what your biggest problem is: it's not your lack of knowledge or pride; it's your obsession of finding other's faults.

I am 100 percent sure that you stared at my post for more than 30 mins before finding my typo ( which I am proud of)

whenever I see a typo of mine, it makes me humble because i remember that I'm still human, even though I write exceptionally beautiful sentences every day.

online4business:


Guy kudos to you, make this a habit write write write but if you want to let people keep reading you've to edit edit and edit your write up so that it'll be easy for people to read.

@adeadeyera please encourage him, do you know why millions of Nigeria never read books guy na naija be this oooo maybe you've been out of the shore's of this shithole


However if he has edited his writing it'll take more time to post his story so he decided to fire aim and shot.

Good Writing is the most difficult skill in the world
Gary c halbert world's greatest copywriter of all time.


Op to improve your writing please read
The element of style by stunk and white. less than 100 pages you can read it in a week.

Also 100 ways to improve your writing by Gary povost.

I save the best of the best for last

On writing well: a memoirs of the craft by Stephen king

it should be on every writers desk. note the good stuff is after his childhood story so you can skip it.


This will be the most important book about how to write.
your writing carreer will improve with a garrantee.

2021 might be a tough year but it depends on what you do with your time.

My new year resolution.

I've decide to upload 7 books every. Month on my kdp account still bezos pay well before starting a blog and kick start my copywriting carreer.


Ps. I hate punctuating my write up on nairaland it's a waste of time.

Crunchyg3:

Hi I have a question for you, can I have your contact so we can talk on whatsapp