What You Do To Me - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| What You Do To Me by Jduck: 3:02am On Apr 12, 2006 |
Lookin in ya eyes is deep pools of desire I can't drop my gaze because my hearts on fire Chills start slowly creepin up my spine fireworks go off when ya lips touch mine One touch of ya skin so tender One hug from u make my soul shiver I love you with all my heart mind and soul My heart is broken only you can make it whole please tell me if you like it or not by replying |
| Re: What You Do To Me by Z4M4eva(f): 1:53pm On Apr 12, 2006 |
Wow!! 'I' like it. Really. Please keep it up  . It's a really nice poem. |
| Re: What You Do To Me by reniks(f): 10:24pm On Apr 12, 2006 |
Its good.It sounds lyrical.With a good tune and more lines,you got yourself a track. |
| Re: What You Do To Me by eveseh(f): 7:37pm On May 07, 2006 |
that's cool |
| Re: What You Do To Me by yatou(f): 2:46pm On May 16, 2006 |
waa i like da poem, keep on writing more for me please  [size=8pt][/size][color=#000099][/color] |
| Re: What You Do To Me by hola2ng(m): 12:19pm On May 23, 2006 |
Rythmic , soulful. Nice read. lovely words. |
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