Yea we da killa clique betta respect
diss my spit man you gon regret
tryin to get money hustlin on da block
puffin weed wit my gs while im cuffin da glock
talkin junk den i use it
watch ya mouth faw i lose it
tryin to get rich tryin to get paid
how can u do this on minimum wage
have dreams of bein seen on da night screen
my words are heard to be enlightening
to help brothas out who are in my shoes
think i don't undastand well kid i do
just grab my hand let me be yaw guide
heres a free pass out da hood come catch da free ride
climb inside see da big life show u what us pimps and crips live like
livin high livin large i had a dream at 15 i could touch the stars
well now i can now i do always rememba you can do anything ya want to


please tell me what u think by responding

yeah, that was great but, it looks more like a RAP than a POEM.
Cheers

clap 4 ur self, not bad

Yeah its sounds like a rap,its ok though!

A rap is also a poem!

By and large,a rap is a poem.I was actually stuck with the definition of poetry within the bounds of literature and i felt rap didn't fit in.Poetry is basically a rhythmic expression of human imagination n experience.So a rap fits into d definition.Besides d word rap is believed to be formed from rhythm n poetry.MY BAD!!!

Kool Stuff Jduck.

methinks u shld work mor' on ur stress lines
though, of course, tha groove may dictate da ryhme
remember, 'ah didn't choose rap bt rap chose me'
anyways, here is wht i feel
get ur boot laced and ur grooves aced
for da screens might call 4 u one of these days!

honestly, i think u shld try and produce something even if its a demo. its a good motivator. u r on the right track though