Love is a very beautiful feeling. It puts a smile on a face and sometimes brings tears to the eyes. The conceptual understanding of love by Nigerians daily vitalises sex and leaves no room for in-depth poetic expressions. Love is not only about putting a lady to bed, it is about looking in her eyes and confessing what your sexual libido cannot make her realise. Ladies deserve our love and the earlier we realise this, the better for us. Read this poem to that lady you love, re-assure her you aren't all about the pleasure in her body and see if you won't totally win her trust.


You are Mine
You are mine, baby, you are
I keep telling the night sky stars, you are
I stare in your eyes and I'm helpless
You're a glory in disguise
If treasures I dare compare to you
They aren't worth the smile you wear
If it's wealth I dare compare to you
It isn't worth how glad I feel with you
You're a rare gift I stumbled on
The tears in my eyes can say that much
You're my love, my world, my queen
I hope this poem can say that much
You're mine, baby, you are
With you I'm a king indeed.


It's just a trial. Your response will encourage me to write again. Love's beautiful. Show it to that special someone today.

Oooo ncoooh thats sweet. The thought behind the poem is sweet but the poem its self needs more work.

Hmmmmm. The poem get as e be

jami3y:
You're my love, my world, my queen

If the girl come sey im no dey do again,wetin go happen to your world

"More grease to your elbow",O gbiyanju

Your comments are warmly received and appreciated. It was just a topic and poem I wrote in two minutes but your responses are encouraging. Now I have a reason to write more. Thanks!

Write more of wetin? Abeg this one don do

Mynd_44: Write more of wetin? Abeg this one don do

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Lol! I'm sure you long for another #tongue...lol

Can you read correctly?, dont write another one.

Mynd_44: Can you read correctly?, dont write another one.

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I actually thought you were joking. You shouldn't tell me what to do. I write whatever I like, so please