Promise me forever


When in darkness the winds blow
Will i before your eyes still glow
When things start to move slow
Will your love for me continue to flow


When all your fears turn out to be true
Will your love for me turn blue
When our hearts can't be held together by love's glue
Will i still be the only one on your queue

Today you may seem to be my soul mate
But i need to know what really is my fate
I know the bitterness of the truth is what we hate
But i need to know now before its too late

I know love is not a fight
But is mine worth fighting for with all your might?
Tell me, what happens to your love at danger's first sight
Will you willingly give a fight or certainly take a flight

Can you promise me for better, for worse and for whatever
For richer, for poorer and whenever
In sickness, in health and in whichever
Can you look into my eyes and promise me, your forever?
-AMBERACIOUS POEMS

Nice one and good useage of rhymes!

Thx brother! And i will be pleased to knw my flaws too so i can improve!

We kinda write in a similar style!check ma poems too

Your poems are..... .lips sealed! Obviously i ve alot to learn frm u!