Frankii u no go kil person oh.ur story is sooo good jst dt i read it into d night n a tot occured to me dt i might replay onr of d scene of Rogers in my dreams. o boy come see as my heart dey beat. u did a good job. hope u r good now

barag: Frankii u no go kil person oh.ur story is sooo good jst dt i read it into d night n a tot occured to me dt i might replay onr of d scene of Rogers in my dreams. o boy come see as my heart dey beat. u did a good job. hope u r good now

i am good my brother... glad u like it, i have decided to bury my emotion into a new work... i hope it will b half as good as this. thanx

frank3.16:


i am good my brother... glad u like it, i have decided to bury my emotion into a new work... i hope it will b half as good as this. thanx

wat do u mean by that, the litu i read show is way way bigger,and beta.

Damex333: wat do u mean by that, the litu i read show is way way bigger,and beta.

lol Damexx, now u gat me fired up!!!

frank3.16:


i am good my brother... glad u like it, i have decided to bury my emotion into a new work... i hope it will b half as good as this. thanx

brother ke abeg i'm a lady o....... Jst finished wt cyber lover n i must say its also a good one. u too much

barag:
brother ke abeg i'm a lady o....... Jst finished wt cyber lover n i must say its also a good one. u too much

i am truly sorry for misunderstanding ur gender. do u stay in abj? we could hook up... talk about writing

frank3.16:


i am truly sorry for misunderstanding ur gender. do u stay in abj? we could hook up... talk about writing

nah i stay in lagos

frank3.16:


i am truly sorry for misunderstanding ur gender. do u stay in abj? we could hook up... talk about writing

nah i stay in lagos . so wen is ur nextstory comin up

frank3.16:


i am truly sorry for misunderstanding ur gender. do u stay in abj? we could hook up... talk about writing

nah i stay in lagos.... so wen is ur next story comin up

barag:
nah i stay in lagos.... so wen is ur next story comin up

hopefully by nxt wk monday

Wow!!! Dis is an interestin and intrigin story...its sooo real it got me stuckd wit my fone,and just lik an epic movie...wel doooooone!

Wow. The cyber lover was somtin, but this 1 is somtin else. Oh my. M already havin a crush on you. (muah)

Jumizie13: Wow. The cyber lover was somtin, but this 1 is something else. Oh my. M already havin a crush on you. (muah)

thanks for the kiss, its nice being crushed on by a pretty lady like you...especially after losing my sweet heart to a ghastly motor accident.

well, pls watch out for my next story, "The Religion" i will start posting by Monday. pls ensure you meet me there at the new thread.

thanks,

I love this story, I almost sent an e-slap to sean when he was abt givin roger d bead, I was so scared. This write up is d best I've read so far, it was so real.
Frankie, I'm sorry about ur fiance. I know she's resting in peace.

hi frank. I really enjoyed dis story. but u told us rogers was smallish and sometimes still referred to him as d big man....well,thanks again for dis.I throw way salute to u,..

Frank wonderful job. I loved the story u got me hooked from the beginning to the end. I also love the way u update the thread. It was a wonderful piece. Wie did u get the inspiration from?

zinylizzy: hi frank. I really enjoyed dis story. but u told us rogers was smallish and sometimes still referred to him as d big man....well,thanks again for dis.I throw way salute to u,..

scon-p:
Frank wonderful job. I loved the story u got me hooked from the beginning to the end. I also love the way u update the thread. It was a wonderful piece. Wie did u get the inspiration from?

Thanks... Are pple still reading this stuff? Well I got d inspiration from me, just started writing and boom!! I am making all d connections and fixin d dots.

frank3.16:




Thanks... Are pple still reading this stuff? Well I got d inspiration from me, just started writing and boom!! I am making all d connections and fixin d dots.

that wonderful Boss

Wow! You held me spellbound, as in , seriously. Muaaaaaah, you are the bomb.

thanks Emerald, especially for the kisssssssss

very interesting literary works. Keep it up , make me yearning for more. All ur works are excellent, do keep d flag flying

Just funished readin 'the convenant'

I must confess dat I aven't read a story dis interestin in a long time.

@frank_ feelin u all d way.

Make I start wit 'the birth' immediately

Just finished reading this novel and i must confess that your d bomb. The character's are so real and even the events. A big thumbs up to you

My best online/e-book story. waitn 4 d write up dat will beat this, sure it cant be in dis generation may be in d 10th generation

My best online/e-book story. waitn 4 d write up dat will beat this, sure it cant be in dis generation may be in d 10th generation to come

Lol @ gendabs... I am starting a new story tomorrow, let's see how it goes, I am working on makin it better than this though. Thanks

Sir Frank, I just read d 1st part of dis story and yet 2 finish d second part. Wow now i get ur points clearly. U are 1 wonderful fellow on Nairaland.
By d way have u seen James Omokwe's Awakening (movie)?.

Wow! Ds s really gr8, i cnt blv dt am stil awake by ds tym of d nyt reading ds, u've done a nyz job, i pray dt God will bless ur handwrk, d sky is ur stepping stone.

Woow!! Just finished reading this.. I must say "frank,you are damn good"..
keep it up man..
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Rogers is ruthless sha.. Lmao!!!
He was so ruthless that i kept laughing at the way he commanded his elders before killing them esp the scene where he killed his grandparents. That particular scene killed me with laughter,despite the fact that it was meant to be tragic..lol.. Thats strange though,cos i couldnt stop laughing...
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Once again,frank,you are a fantastic writer.. Keep the candle of creative writing burning...
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All izz well!

Kslib: Woow!! Just finished reading this.. I must say "frank,you are damn good"..
keep it up man..
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Rogers is ruthless sha.. Lmao!!!
He was so ruthless that i kept laughing at the way he commanded his elders before killing them esp the scene where he killed his grandparents. That particular scene killed me with laughter,despite the fact that it was meant to be tragic..lol.. Thats strange though,cos i couldnt stop laughing...
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Once again,frank,you are a fantastic writer.. Keep the candle of creative writing burning...
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All izz well!

Yessoooo, I never knew that part was funny... Perhaps I will go through it again. Thanx man, glad u enjoyin. U are d best.

frank3.16:


Yessoooo, I never knew that part was funny... Perhaps I will go through it again. Thanx man, glad u enjoyin. U are d best.

No problem,you are welcome.. I loved the story..
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By the way,i'm not sure you'll find it funny sha BUT the scene where he came to finish off his grandparents from the way he entered the house and how he addressed them had me in tears produced by laughter..
To be honest,i also found it strange that i laughed that hard at a scene that was meant to be tragic.. I was laughing for like 15minutes straight..lol
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Maybe it has too do with the fact that the little kid had no respect for his elders or whatever but i found it hilarious.. I also found the way he introduced himself to his victims very hilarious.. He gat no time for bullshit,all he wants is answers..
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I think i've kinda figured out why i laughed that hard at that scene... It was way Rogers approached his victims verbally, before finishing them off Alaogbaga style.lol.
It's because you beautifully painted him as being a 19 old kid,but a ruthless one at that.. I've realized that i wouldnt have laughed as i did if lets say "Rogers wasnt a kid but an adult"....
His ruthlessness not only as a person but also as a kid amazed my subconscious AND my surprise was converted into laughter....
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Lemme tell you something @frank,you are fantastic writer...
Only one idea you infused into the story changed the whole thing.. That idea was how you allowed Rogers to to strike exactly when he turned a teenager..
He was a teenager but yet so ruthless AND that made the readers also fear Rogers just like the characters in the story.. You did an amazing job with the rogers character and i commend you for that.. You sold him well to the readers and i personally, bought it well..

If Rogers had been an Adult,then i dont think the Rogers part would have been interesting the way it eventually turned out to be BUT you made the right decision by allowing him to start causing damage at the age of 19teen. Nice thinking..
Once again,nice one frank....
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All izz well!

How could I have missed dis story ehhh @Frankenstein, u are a maestro bro.... God will endow u with more creativity and knowledge...... Meanwhile am going back to the "secret of the gods" thread, to continue from where I stopped.... Thanx bro, u made my weekend awesome....