firestar: Here tim goes
with rainbows...

rainbows? I can't see a thing oooooo


@Jodekss
Your poem is very funny
"A witch's a witch be it white or wicked but God is good n great"
"The skeletons buying shining skirts and big boys boxers"
"...Witches...worth buying some booze to celebrate?

These lines eh....I love your use of Alliteration

timpaker:

rainbows? I can't see a thing oooooo


@Jodekss
Your poem is very funny
"A witch's a witch be it white or wicked but God is good n great"
"The skeletons buying shining skirts and big boys boxers"
"...Witches...worth buying some booze to celebrate?

These lines eh....I love your use of Alliteration

Piresg24: To My Bee's knee

Game not with my heart
By your stonewalling art
That we may ourselves have a glee
Of a lasting wet dream
Which shall endure
Like a bristlecone pine.

How your yea made me gay
Having reached our bloom
Should we not enjoy our may?
Bereave me not of this boon
Anon to the partterre let's ooze.

Neither did I had a clue
Nor was I given a cue
That you are as the honey suckle
Could made me missed my orgeat and sherbet
Oh! How your caress imbued on me a salve.

Shall I compare you to the altair?
Cruising into my life in beams and rays
Glossy like a sun bird causing a stare
Sleek to my feel cutesy and fey.

You are the bird of paradise
Finely curved like the cypress vine
You smell so sweet like a fragrant pine
Even sweeter fragrance than the moon flower.

The moon and sun may fail to shine it light!
The ocean may fail to afford us water!
But my love for you shall always glow.

By: Piresg24

timpaker: Ahrghhhhhhhhh! !!
I could hear the echo of my scream
As my eyes glued the creepy beast
I felt my garment of courage tore
Into rags unveiling fears;
I was choked with words of silence
As my breath spoke the language
Only the beast understood - fear!
It sensed it and came closer

My feet suddenly became stiff
Heavy as lead
Quivering like an idiopathic being
I saw it became bigger from the wall
And my eyes too heavy too to remain open...
Taaaah! Taaah!! Taah!!! Came the sound of my saviour
(My brother! My Superman!! Yes indeed!!!)
Life's juice plasters the wall
And I felt some on my lip
Yuck! These roaches...

ayd91:

roaches? Like cockroaches? Roaches fluid? Yuck really. Yuewhjdsjhd yuewhjdsjhd.
Next time use a cond0m.

timpaker:


Heheheheeh. Yes. Like cockroaches.
Disgusting isn't it?
I'm scared of it. In fact, it creeps me and gives me the hibidigibi
But wait oooo. Condom ke?

ayd91:

hey Tim, its for your mouth o.
Cockroaches are fantastic creatures, good for eating and really rich in protein (true stuff).
Just think of them as flying fried meat .

Yuck!!!!!
Good luck with that bro.

ayd91:

hey Tim, its for your mouth o.
Cockroaches are fantastic creatures, good for eating and really rich in protein (true stuff).
Just think of them as flying fried meat .

timpaker:

Yuck!!!!!
Good luck with that bro.

firestar:

Gross.

timpaker: [b]Rondeau

Definition

A rondeau (plural rondeaux) is a form of French poetry with 15 lines written on two rhymes. Variant forms may have 10 or 13 lines. It makes use of refrains, repeated according to a certain stylized pattern. It was customarily regarded as a challenge to arrange for these refrains to contribute to the meaning of the poem in as succinct and poignant a manner as possible. The rondeau consists of thirteen lines of eight syllables, plus two refrains (which are half lines, each of four syllables), employing, altogether, only three rhymes. It has three stanzas and its rhyme scheme is as follows: (1) A A B B A (2) A A B with refrain: C (3) A A B B A with concluding refrain C. The refrain must be identical with the beginning of the first line.

Example

In Timi's Heart, by TimPaker:


In Timi's heart my love is housed
Her blood I swam tipsy, aroused
In the tree of her veins - my name
Her voice, my breath her heart beat same;
Boma, Phils, Jakak were all moused

When the priest had I and her spoused
Then they knew she have had them bounced
For love has never been a game
In Timi's heart

Love comes freely and can't be pounced
Its both a curse and cause espoused,
Her love brought me an envious fame
As a  lover on glorious tame
Just as our union was announced
In Timi's heart[/b]

firestar: Chei.
And he claims he's no sadist.

I'm not oooo

Tosdam:

Nice one timpaker, i will give it a trial to write mine............... hearing Rondeau for the first time, is it same as Rondel..............

Tosdam: Jodekess, so na here life dey abi, anyway i will join u guys.............. Timpaker i dey feel ur work oooooo, right from the nairaland poem competition.

My pen name is Tosdam{aka. justice} am here to learn not to compete with anyone, encourage me pls by highlighting my poem, never mind ur critique cos it do help............................

Tosdam: [b]I CAN’T WALK ALONE

Honey of my life,
Without you my life is bitter,
I never have a sound sleep since seeing you,
Your reply to my proposal weaken my active bone,
Without you I can’t walk alone

My thinking is occupy by you alone,
All I can write after my reading is “I love you”,
Your lovelorn make we wander,
Without you I can’t walk alone.

You I see in my dream,
When I wake up without seeing you, am helpless,
Love made me fool,
Without you I can’t walk alone.

Your blonde made me bite the bit of my fingers,
Belle of my choice,
Without you I can’t walk alone,

Your beauty is a price from God,
It lures me into lust ending in love,
My love for you is never a deceit.

My heart is free for you,
My lobes is calling for yours,
Come and occupy it,
Without you I can’t walk alone.

Age flies like time,
Season harsh on me,
Must I grow grey before you accept my proposal?
The magistrate is awaiting us,
But without you I can’t walk alone.

My ribs are incomplete without you,
Occupy my heart,
Hand my hand,
Support my leg,
And we shall walk together.


[/b]

Tosdam: Jodekess, so na here life dey abi, anyway i will join u guys.............. Timpaker i dey feel ur work oooooo, right from the nairaland poem competition.

My pen name is Tosdam{aka. justice} am here to learn not to compete with anyone, encourage me pls by highlighting my poem, never mind ur critique cos it do help............................

You wrote the above masterpiece and yet you are saying you wanna learn? Mehn, you are very good!
Each of the lines in your poem are alluring, convincing and captivating. I also love the refrain. Btw are you a Liverpool fan?

timpaker:
You wrote the above masterpiece and yet you are saying you wanna learn? Mehn, you are very good!
Each of the lines in your poem are alluring, convincing and captivating. I also love the refrain. Btw are you a Liverpool fan?