zubike01:
Thanks Clemzy




Thanks Damex....

I didn't know Nigerias are ready for mystical conspiracy thrillers

Carry on bro!! We dey by ur syd. . .

zubike01:
Thanks Clemzy




Thanks Damex....

I didn't know Nigerias are ready for mystical conspiracy thrillers

of course nigerians are tired of d love stories and political jargon we are bombarded with everyday...
Abeg do make u update oo

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update d story ooo, what r u waiting for?

DNA1: update d story ooo, what r u waiting for?

Madam i've updated for today oh but don't worry i would still update more later on. Anyway DNA1 who is your favourite character?

hahahaha...that should be Nike..

so...I've been meaning to ask. What inspired u to write this story?

DNA1: so...I've been meaning to ask. What inspired u to write this story?

I had the kasala jass and Nike in my mind but i needed a twist so i brought in tunde it still din't have a good twist so i brought in Ogunshola still dind't go well so i brought in the secret and it became perfect.Truth be told my main source of inspiration are davince code the whole secret thing and final destination( A movie about people who cheated death and it was coming after them in form of various accidents.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XPPglUzoh_0

zubike01:

[quote author=DNA1]hahahaha...that should be Nike..

Yeah Nike is very likable but my favourite though is Ogunshola he is a rich kid, a lover boy and he has honour, courage and he has no choice than to be the bad guy

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Just read ur last two updates. It was really superb. Cant wait for the next line of action.

@Zub I'm not serious at all wt my professional exam and na u cos am(lol) because if I study as much as I've been reading ur update, I'll definately get qualified this year. More energy to ur fingers.

bee-y:
@Zub I'm not serious at all wt my professional exam and na u cos am(lol) because if I study as much as I've been reading ur update, I'll definately get qualified this year. More energy to ur fingers.

lol no be my fault oh what exam is that? Who knows i fit be your professional colleague, but not to worry this is the 2nd to the last chapter, so very soon you would have enough time to study.

Clemzy16: Just read ur last two updates. It was really superb. Can't wait for the next line of action.

Don't worry Clemzy am sure i'll meet all your expectations and beyond. It good fans like you that give us hope.

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*In will smith's voice, i say 'GOOD JOB! Is it true that the next update marks the end of this beautiful story?

Clemzy16: *In will smith's voice, i say 'GOOD JOB! Is it true that the next update marks the end of this beautiful story?

No we are still in chapter 5 "Ogunshola Quest". We still have chapter 6 "Tears of a Loved One" and it would definitely take more that one update, a chapter is like 8 updates plus or minus . After that the epilogue.

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@ Zub baba I just dey over gbadun u. now I've kept My books away till either I --------or I'm thru wt ds

zubike01:

No we are still in chapter 5 "Ogunshola Quest". We still have chapter 6 "Tears of a Loved One" and it would definitely take more that one update, a chapter is like 8 updates plus or minus . After that the epilogue.

ailt...i get it now. Tnkz 4 d explanation, ws confused in my thoughts.

Ask me to rate this story, i will give a five star rating. The best i ve come accross, it meets the standard of likes of wole shoyinka's works. Good one there

So far i'm happy and glad to have been part of this journey, from chapter1 now in chapter 6, it has been wonderful all the way.


If this story finds it way into the market i believe it's going to sell. Don't you ever get discouraged of the thought that people might copyright your works when posted online?

Also, what does the curse/spirit of IKU do?

jlee: Ask me to rate this story, i will give a five star rating. The best i've come accross, it meets the standard of likes of wole shoyinka's works. Good one there

Thanks Jlee am happy you think highly of my work.

Clemzy16: So far i'm happy and glad to have been part of this journey, from chapter1 now in chapter 6, it has been wonderful all the way.


If this story finds it way into the market i believe it's going to sell. Don't you ever get discouraged of the thought that people might copyright your works when posted online?

Also, what does the curse/spirit of IKU do?

I have measures in place that prevent that so i am not scared. You can't steal my intellectual property without getting into a fight its every writer's responsibility to protect his or her work.

As for what the curse and iku does i refer you to this quote from chapter 1

zubike01: Little does Nike know that Iya has placed a curse as old as history on her, called KASALA. Kasala is a spell that creates a bad aura around the individual it is placed on. It makes things of doom happen all around the individual but shields the person from its effect.

bee-y:
@ Zub baba I just dey over gbadun u. now I've kept My books away till either I --------or I'm thru wt ds

Priorities man try and find a balance i need you to smash your professional exam...

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d last update was wow....

Thanks man @ Zub actually I read ur update only when I'm either tired or bored...u are one of the main reason I make comment on NL. Also wish u success in ur Professional exams. Peace.

I started ds piece today n finished it,it kept me glued to my seat 4 hours,u've gat great talent o

U r now added to d list of my great writers on NL.. Weldne

bee-y:
Thanks man @ Zub actually I read ur update only when I'm either tired or bored...u are one of the main reason I make comment on NL. Also wish u success in ur Professional exams. Peace.

You would be fine then nothing do you...

Candis009: I started ds piece today n finished it,it kept me glued to my seat 4 hours,u've gat great talent o

U r now added to d list of my great writers on NL.. Weldne

Thanks for having the patience to make it past the 1st chapter. Most people get bored initially because of the numerous characters and simultaneous events but if they could get past that and see the linkage they love it.

DNA1: d last update was wow....

Hurray ! DNA said my update was wow

I don't like the fact that there are two angry mobs scenes one with Tunde and one with Ogunshola. Would like to change the Tunde scene to something more dramatic any ideas people.

"She goes over and sees Tunde. He asks her to give him the statue but she refuses. He comes close to her, pushes her, and grabs it. Instantly an angry mob attacks him and begins to beat him. She shouts at them to stop but they just continue. He lets go of the statue and she picks it up and the crowd stops."

Thats the scene i want to change...

zubike01:
You would be fine then nothing do you...



Thanks for having the patience to make it past the 1st chapter. Most people get bored initially because of the numerous characters and simultaneous events but if they could get past that and see the linkage they love it.


Hurray ! DNA said my update was wow

I don't like the fact that there are two angry mobs scenes one with Tunde and one with Ogunshola. Would like to change the Tunde scene to something more dramatic any ideas people.

"She goes over and sees Tunde. He asks her to give him the statue but she refuses. He comes close to her, pushes her, and grabs it. Instantly an angry mob attacks him and begins to beat him. She shouts at them to stop but they just continue. He lets go of the statue and she picks it up and the crowd stops."

Thats the scene i want to change...

I can imagine that will add another twist to this KASALA thriller. I'm learning a lot from ur writing Mr. Zub

zubike01:
You would be fine then nothing do you...



Thanks for having the patience to make it past the 1st chapter. Most people get bored initially because of the numerous characters and simultaneous events but if they could get past that and see the linkage they love it.


Hurray ! DNA said my update was wow

I don't like the fact that there are two angry mobs scenes one with Tunde and one with Ogunshola. Would like to change the Tunde scene to something more dramatic any ideas people.

"She goes over and sees Tunde. He asks her to give him the statue but she refuses. He comes close to her, pushes her, and grabs it. Instantly an angry mob attacks him and begins to beat him. She shouts at them to stop but they just continue. He lets go of the statue and she picks it up and the crowd stops."

Thats the scene i want to change...

i don't think there is anything wrong with the scene. You can go ahead writing it...besides we are not complaining. Also, they are no longer in nigeria but america where the tolerance of woman-beating is at level zero.

Clemzy16: i don't think there is anything wrong with the scene. You can go ahead writing it...besides we are not complaining. Also, they are no longer in nigeria but america where the tolerance of woman-beating is at level zero.

Clemzy there is no woman beating scene in the whole story. I am talking about the scene after Iya's death when tunde arrived and took the statue from her and people attacked him. i want something different.

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