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My Fresh Job by greenmouse(m): 10:06am On Apr 12, 2013 |
its freshly launched. http://www.vogueasooke.com/ Tried to make it different... Whats your review comments....
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Re: My Fresh Job by GraphicsPlus(m): 2:45pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
All ur images didnt have alt description. Instead of wasting time writing keywords in the head section, which search engines dont recognize again for ranking, u should spend the time and describe ur images in alt. Again, ur meta name="keywords" content="..." is double. It's more professional to reference ur css, images and links like this: http://www.vogueasooke.com/product.html, http://www.vogueasooke.com/images/slider-one-six.jpg, http://www.vogueasooke.com/css/style.css The color sense is kind of poor. <div class="heading">BEADS</div>, this doesnt make sense. You should have used h1 for semantic and styling purposes and more importantly for seo. BEADS, ASO OKE and HANDFAN writeups should align left with those thumbnail images. 'Read More' link should hav some breathing space from the white container. Your company name and admin mail written in green doesnt fit in at all. I know u want to proof that green is your company color, but u cant use it to spoil another's company color. Just put ur name in the dorminant color of the website, when one visits urs, he can then see ur own company color. 'Powered by:' doesnt sound good to me. Why not simply, 'Developed by:' You used too many inline style. It's not professional. The logo should be a link back to the home page. It's good for seo. Your markups are not profesional at all. You were just adding text anyhow and using <br> to break them. No <h1 - h6> or <p> tags are found. This is unacceptable. In the product page, u should use paragraph tag to write those texts for proper paragraphing. Your gallery link name doesn't make sense. Imagine: prodgal.html. Why not, product-gallery.html. Descriptive urls help in seo. There is no point having 'Home' and 'Back' buttons in the feedback.html since there are navigation links at the left. Finally, a simple website as that is not even responsive. You can use css3 @media query to quickly achieve this. Thank u. |
Re: My Fresh Job by cmespeak: 5:17pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
greenmouse fall my hand |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 6:56pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
The website is poor |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 7:49pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
Why are you guys criticizing this site, this is what it currently looks like and I think its great
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Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 8:52pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
GraphicsPlus: All ur images didnt have alt description. Instead of wasting time writing keywords in the head section, which search engines dont recognize again for ranking, u should spend the time and describe ur images in alt. Again, ur meta name="keywords" content="..." is double.Great!!! you sound like a pro can i see some of your website you have develop... |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 8:56pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
I wAnt to believe Nairaland Webmasters have a high taste when it comes to design. Average just wouldn't do. Let's keep learning because you may never or will hardly get praised in any review here. I learnt that the hard way. |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 10:05pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
fewj: Why are you guys criticizing this site, this is what it currently looks like and I think its great I saw somethng else! Don't let me post screenshot :-P |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 11:08pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
sisqology:I just posted what i saw with a screenshot, are you saying between when you saw it and when i did, greenmouse may have done some modification? |
Re: My Fresh Job by greenmouse(m): 11:14pm On Apr 12, 2013 |
@graphocplus, review this websites built by me so you will know that all I need to see is your best website http://www.genotypedatings.com/ http://toyinayindeassociates.com/ http://persecondnews.com/ http://bellazzibakery.com/ http://nappsanambra.com/ http://healthyliciousng.com/ They are all websites designed by me as well. |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 4:22am On Apr 13, 2013 |
greenmouse: Hmmh, welcome guys... i know a true critics when I see one.Please request for reviews with screen shots so it would be easier for members to judge without bias. Thanks. |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 5:45am On Apr 13, 2013 |
fewj: Why are you guys criticizing this site, this is what it currently looks like and I think its greatOnly Nigerian web Developers hate criticism, he's asking for feedback so do we lie to him, with the suggestion from the previous person, changes can be made to make it finer,also in some places Criticism of website is a paid job. |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 6:39am On Apr 13, 2013 |
Okay, on opera mobile.... Check the upper and lower part
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Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 6:41am On Apr 13, 2013 |
pc guru: Critiquing is not just about saying all the negative things about a thing, it also involves saying some of the good, identifying quaility parts, mediocre parts and poor parts, if you're critiquing a site and all you see is the wrongs and misappropriations, you're a bad critique, your criticism is incomplete. |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 6:46am On Apr 13, 2013 |
And on a normal browser on blackberry. The shot on a 10" screen is coming soon. And as graphicplus has pointed out, no "alt" tags, inline CSS used in a wrong way and many others.
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Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 6:48am On Apr 13, 2013 |
sisqology: Okay, on opera mobile.... Check the upper and lower part From your screenshot, its obvious the site didn't completely load and this is majorly caused by slow internet speed or lost connection, please refresh and view again. I've view it with the latest opera mini on my phone and it looks quite thesame. |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 7:04am On Apr 13, 2013 |
fewj: Lol, are you a learner? So, I won't know if my page didn't finish loading? I've visited the site like 5times. 9700/6.0.0.600 |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 7:51am On Apr 13, 2013 |
sisqology: I apologize, am not a learner, you are 100% correct. |
Re: My Fresh Job by greenmouse(m): 9:25am On Apr 13, 2013 |
Relax guys I will showcase more jobs soon for ur critics @few, just relax more jobs are coming. |
Re: My Fresh Job by GraphicsPlus(m): 9:58am On Apr 13, 2013 |
greenmouse: Relax guys I will showcase more jobs soon for ur critics @few, just relax more jobs are coming. It's not a matter of more jobs coming. Who cares if u design incompetent 100 websites in one week. The issue is that 90% of webmasters in Nigeria are below the average. With what we are doing right now, we are still far from standing out in the international community. I mean I cant imagine a webmaster coding his html without h1 and p tags. It's unimaginable. Web design is more than adding text, images and colors and uploading to server using filezila. We must start thinking out of the box. |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 10:29am On Apr 13, 2013 |
GraphicsPlus: I don't know o, tell them. |
Re: My Fresh Job by sisqology(m): 10:30am On Apr 13, 2013 |
fewj: Oh, have u seen the errors too |
Re: My Fresh Job by miracle4(m): 11:02am On Apr 13, 2013 |
GraphicsPlus:you didn't reply to my mail grappicsplus |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 1:04pm On Apr 13, 2013 |
GraphicsPlus: BROS SHOW US SOME OF THE WEBSITE YOU HAVE DONE PLEASE WE ARE WAITING. |
Re: My Fresh Job by greenmouse(m): 2:13pm On Apr 13, 2013 |
Check out for another thread on my new job. @graphicsplus show me ur job. Am waiting for your professional website. I won't talk bad at you for now until I see ur sample job. Don't decieve your self. |
Re: My Fresh Job by Allenbaba(m): 2:59pm On Apr 13, 2013 |
I think webmasters in Nigeria need to invest more time into reading more books. There are loads on books that will help us improve on developing with web standards. An example is 'Designing with web standards' by Jeffrey Zeldman |
Re: My Fresh Job by Snippets(m): 4:30pm On Apr 13, 2013 |
@GraphicsPlus : Yo assessment of the site shows clear professionalism buh u should know that this is a forum. The way u address issues or stress Yo Points are a Bit too Harsh. We know u are a Pro in designing department buh u should learn how to interact with people in a public forum. "Please kindly check yo Inline tags and Header stuffs" is a more professional way of responding instead of saying "Yo outline looks so poor, what were u thinking". Am still to see the websites u've worked on Brov 2 Likes |
Re: My Fresh Job by tabontabon: 6:45pm On Apr 13, 2013 |
What goes around comes around.i remembered greenmouse joining in running down a complete newbie that sought for encouraging review on a thread. |
Re: My Fresh Job by greenmouse(m): 8:18am On Apr 14, 2013 |
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Re: My Fresh Job by GraphicsPlus(m): 8:47am On Apr 14, 2013 |
greenmouse: my fresh Job Part 2 Well, you tried, but I know u know that the css doesn't belong to u. Adobe spry. It's ok. The links are jerking when hovered. Unless it's part of the style. If it's not part of the style, then add a hidden border-top to the link, so that when hovered, the border-top on hover will be smooth. You may also add a css3 transition. Again, the drop down menu of Services is delaying even when mouse is not on it. You have to make it such a way that it will wrap up immediately upon mouseout. Again, when the Services drop down menu drops, and you hover on the first item on the list, you will still see the dark gray background color. Find a way to make it in such a way that the orange color will cover it so that it will blend with the background orange color of the nav bar. The nav links should come down and logo and login inputs should move up. Try to power your gallery with jquery lightbox. Thank u. |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 10:04am On Apr 14, 2013 |
greenmouse: my fresh Job Part 2 You have nothing to prove, you are doing great bro, just keep improving. @ GraphicsPlus i am seriously waiting to see some of your website oh |
Re: My Fresh Job by Nobody: 12:56pm On Apr 14, 2013 |
@GraphicPlus: One of your Website pls?? |
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