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Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:18pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
I have been charmed? Pray give a name for this ailment this constant soaring of the heart and constant straying of the mind to a face so sweet and strong. Eyes so deep you could get lost so beguiling, pulls you in smile so warm it heats u up belonging to a face so dear. How i long to see that face, feel that warmth and hear that voice, as they speak of something more an intense soul buried deep. Who knows what the future holds or How tomorrow will unfold for that face resides in there this heart it has chosen to dwell. 12 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:21pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Honest opinions will be appreciated, pls. |
Re: Charmed! by Mynd44: 5:31pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Charmed I call myself trapped I find myself drawn I keep feeling and pull back back I can't i see the face when I close my eyes I hear that voice in the wind I smell the breath around me and the warmth always envelopes me Even though deny I do even when I fail to admit it My heart knows the truth and my eyes betray me the sun shines brighter with the presence the air smells fresher life is more beautiful with that person perhaps my senses are just heighten even though I fail to make that call even though I close my eyes for fear of it betraying me even though I hide the goose pimples in fabric two things cannot be hidden.... Love and a cough. 7 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Mynd44: 5:32pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Shuga, you really nailed this one. You nailed it so well I could not help but do some solo run with it |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 6:02pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Awwl.. Niceeeeeeeee.. Thanks dearie. Mwuaah Stl waiting for others..they might burst my bubble. 1 Like |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 7:41pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Shuga shuga this is sweet Mynd.. Nice flows |
Re: Charmed! by Obinoscopy(m): 7:47pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Je suis charme The french would say For I'm charmed Charmed in a poetic way I've known u, shuga But I still shudder As I read ur poem For I've been charmed Charmed by ur talent Charmed by ur gift The gift of poetry As composed by you Now I've known u more U're a charm to all A fact know by all A charm forever more! 3 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Mynd44: 7:52pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 7:55pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Obinoscopy: Je suis charme Thank uuuuuu! @brend, thnks babe. 1 Like |
Re: Charmed! by jhydebaba(m): 8:05pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
Shuga, I may not be good But 3 people can't be wrong Not at the same time I endorse this too 2 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Deiok(m): 8:05pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
you try. Na your career thing be that? |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 8:14pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
^^ Yes oo.. E no reach? jhydebaba: Shuga, I may not be good Thanks darl. |
Re: Charmed! by Beync(f): 10:27pm On Apr 29, 2013 |
shugamania this sugary |
Re: Charmed! by HARDDON: 1:12am On Apr 30, 2013 |
Like a lamb Numb I follow I follow the music of мч heart The rhythms of my rhymes The essence of my psalm The leading of his light Come ruin or rapture Him still i will Take my food and freedom Take my wealth and wisdom Him still i will S gurl!!!!! Told you , if only you will, you'd thrill! Burn them, blaze them .... But ehmmm I'm kinda jelos .... Whoz da lucky bastard? NB: tis high Time you stopped seeking reviews! Just follow your heart and pour your soul. The only true reviewer you could ever get, is that joyous satisfaction you feel when in words, you've emptied your wine ! Forget d politics, just flow Forget d quality, just roll Spill reel spin And God willing, you would take on wings and be buried in d clouds of words ! Cos thatz all we could ever really hope ƒoя ! Shot to a height where upon you play god to dis weak world Ma hat I duff 3 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 8:58am On Apr 30, 2013 |
Lolll.. Thanks a milli dearie. Cool rhymes too.. Mwuah! I keep seeking reviews cos i wanna know if am getting better, regressing or just stagnant. It's only natural.. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 9:05am On Apr 30, 2013 |
Beync: shugamania this is sugary Hehe.. That's d idea, thanks. |
Re: Charmed! by HARDDON: 10:33am On Apr 30, 2013 |
Shugamania: Lolll.. Cool rhymes? Nah! I left it hanging hoping you would lead it home Make it fume Don't fail me now. Τaικ to me in verses Help you take your classes 'Mwauh' ? Now you made ma cheeks wail And ma sea swell Still I'd sail Ενεη if dem no hail I no fit fail Na my tïmee to reign On dis plain Still i maintain The only true review you'd ever get Is from your soul Seek that Just like you ĸпoω d feelings after a great rump (lol) Need no colour coating Nonetheless Your wåys Your world 3 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 1:10pm On Apr 30, 2013 |
Haaa... Harddon don gimme work o! Aii..i'll be back |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 9:14am On May 01, 2013 |
So here i am Picking up my pen Trying, striving struggling to be heard. I put the words down The music of my heart Yearning to be heard Convincing in their sound They take control of me Gaining their own life They spill across the sheet Rejoicing in release. Now, i try to make them stop I struggle to resist But my hands betray me Surviving in the heat Until the beat is taken And this melody stops Unless the music ceases These words shall be written. Sorry, got home quite late yesterday and took my lazy bum off to bed. Just penned this this morning. 2 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by jhydebaba(m): 9:27am On May 01, 2013 |
Shuga, ur poems are highly shugaristic. |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 9:39am On May 01, 2013 |
jhydebaba: Shuga, ur poems are highly shugaristic. Thanks! |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 11:12am On May 01, 2013 |
What can i say? Fantabulous!!! |
Re: Charmed! by Obinoscopy(m): 11:32am On May 01, 2013 |
C'est Shugatastic! Magnifique! Super! Tres bien! |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 11:48am On May 01, 2013 |
Br3nd4: What can i say? U're a darl.. Obinoscopy: C'est Shugatastic! Magnifique! Super! Tres bien! Merci beaucoup, monsieur. |
Re: Charmed! by firestar(f): 11:04am On May 02, 2013 |
[size=16pt]Glittery heart motes Twirl round her form as she utters... ...Kind of like Pokahantas when she sings her mind ...and sets John Smith heart and soul... ...aflutter. How charming Shuga! How charming...[/size] 2 Likes |
Re: Charmed! by Shugamania(f): 5:47pm On May 02, 2013 |
Thanks darling. |
Re: Charmed! by Deiok(m): 12:23pm On May 03, 2013 |
woww front page. You are good to go shuga. |
Re: Charmed! by vizboy(m): 12:29pm On May 03, 2013 |
Charmed to these poem couldn't stop thinking about it. Said to myself what a lucky guy to have a girl like u hoping someday to find luv same way u did. |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 12:31pm On May 03, 2013 |
Waka Pass |
Re: Charmed! by Obinoscopy(m): 12:36pm On May 03, 2013 |
Deiok: woww front page. You are good to go shuga.Yes she's good to go Her charm made frontpage A charm for the single The married and the aged Her charm is my muse Her poem is what I use To drink my daily juice And make my body loose... Shuga congrats, ur poem made it to the frontpage. |
Re: Charmed! by Lilimax(f): 12:45pm On May 03, 2013 |
Shugamania: I have been charmed?Very poetic. Me likey |
Re: Charmed! by Nobody: 1:24pm On May 03, 2013 |
Charm charm charm, Oh thou charm of a daughter of eve Charm and chain is all you do evrybody has been charmed even in NL But I refused to be charmed B'cos anything that charms must be a winch 5 Likes |
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