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My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by makavele: 1:03am On May 05, 2008 |
makavele is back on da scenario~making hits like two brothas at a game of mario~gambling's sweet there's alot on my mind~am going to let it go hit me wit the music~ and let me start to flow da industry aint easy as you people think am spitting out lines to make ladies wink jumpin in and dashing out~like TITANIC, you're sure to sink am tarzan and wit a length of rope i could swing motherfcukerz said my name shouldn't be up here but nairaland's worst nightmare is right here i've got lyrics with canines that could tear your bone marrows, wats all over u,? its called F-E-A-R i'm climbing higher up nairaland's rap tree its going to sweep you all like katrina's wind you niggaz 'bout to hit the graves like PAC versus BIG it's a touch of difference when am handling the M-I-C Love y'all! |
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by Shaz(f): 3:40pm On May 05, 2008 |
Nice to see your staying active on this rap section, so i might as well help out in a few things. Noonebody has been born with the rap skills and all, it takes things to make things work. Usually on other rap forums, you get people to analyse your verses - also known as 'feed'. No one does that here which is a big shame, thats why the talents here keep dwindling. Anyhoo, I'll try 'feeding' this one. . makavele is back on da scenario~making hits like two brothas at a game of mario~gambling's sweet the rhymes are there, but whaddu mean 'back' when you never were here? and what does the 'game of mario' and 'gambling' have to do with 'making hits'?? there's alot on my mind~am going to let it go hit me wit the music~ and let me start to flow just a filler. . nothing spectacular da industry aint easy as you people think am spitting out lines to make ladies wink not a strong line either jumpin in and dashing out~like TITANIC, you're sure to sink am tarzan and wit a length of rope i could swing the first line really din't have a meaning, sorry have you ever tried multies?? eg. like titanic, you are sure~to~sink i'm leaving pricks smashed with no drugs to cure~this~sick something like that. . it gives your verses more reps than single rhymes motherfcukerz said my name shouldn't be up here but nairaland's worst nightmare is right here why rhyme with the same word, 'here'?? i've got lyrics with canines that could tear your bone marrows, wats all over u,? its called F-E-A-R when you separate words like 'F-E-A-R', then it's meant to be pronounced as single letters not a word. and if that's what you intended, then, those things don't rhyme i'm climbing higher up nairaland's rap tree its going to sweep you all like katrina's wind nice sim - the katrina wind thing- but still you haven't worded that bar well you niggaz 'bout to hit the graves like PAC versus BIG it's a touch of difference when am handling the M-I-C the end?? that was not even close to a good closer. . i doubt Hybrid would even take this for a 1 Star rating, not to talk of two anyways, that's just ma 2 cents. |
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by FLOWSHOW: 4:09pm On May 05, 2008 |
nice analysis shaz, can u pls analyse my own verse. its right here under @MARKOLINI AKA MACARONI. HERE IS UR FINAL BURIAL! i aint trying to win this battle ~ because am already declared the very best am just here to show everyone~ that your the wackest among the rest i come from naija land ~ where flowshow is blazin hot u got a draw and u think u stinkin hot~ we all know u simply nut (not)(0) even with your bullet proof vest on~my slugz will shatter your fcukin chest off face first ~ stab your breast~cut your throat~ to make your lungs rest multis and metaphors no other rapper can flip those you is a fake 'drug' cus you lack 'dose flowshow is the winner~ macaroni is the loser i drop more beats than fruity loops producers my flowshows come in convoys ~like punches delivered by oliver mccall like dry lands on wet rivers ~ macaroni's punchlines 4ever lie fallow u couldnt spit ill ~ because chocolate is the only bar u swallow your rhymes are shallow~cus u grew horn like bufallos my punchlines severe~ makes u catch cold ~ to make ya body shiver flowshow is the soul reaver ~ you is the gay mister~ the queen of sheba throwin punchlines for u is harder than nigerians flashin text messages asking of u is like asking bout a boxer~ who never knew ali existed your style might be fly ~ but am an eagle ~ your a fcuckin penguin stick ya head into your mothers pussi ~ send u back to your origin they call me flowshow the cobra~ but i think i am the stingin viper markolini rhymes are nasty~ like uncleaned poops from his momma diaper they said am the illest~ but i think i surpassed that cut u to bits ~zip you up like mp3s in ipods squeeze ya neck till u give up~turn your lungs to gizzards because me beatin you ~ is easier than chinese eating lizards** I want hiphop heads to record the time and date markolini turned to macaroni with one single line i will have him shaking hands with makavelli, u wonder why? dam nur u ekam lliw that enil a tog I esuaceb <<<-read this backwards*** |
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by Shaz(f): 4:18pm On May 05, 2008 |
I would, but prolly not on this thread, cuz itz meant for Makavele |
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by makavele: 7:44pm On May 05, 2008 |
i wanna thank shaz for the rap analysis what more could hold us together~if not symbiosis its great to know~ there's someone to always count on practice makes perfect, so this rap battle would be won no one else deserves that lyrical highness but makavele am about to go platinum, bout' to hit the TV am trying to change the way the game is played i aint a mutha bleeper~ aint like a LovePeddler dats' always getting laid june 23 brought about the birth of a hero i'm like genie, its time for some mirror mirror i think it time to hit ma bed, clock says nine-fifty nine will talk later~been long i saw alexpissu~ tell him i said hiiiiiiiiiiiiii |
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