Wot a nice story line u got here. U kept glued frm page 1-46 since yestrday. Ur sense of humor,suspense nd d flashback re superb. U re superbly a gud writer bt i nid more update. U too gbaski chistar.

Saw dis on d frnt page nd av been reading since yesterday.well,more greese to u elbow.......lovely write up......kip it up....waiting for d nxt update

I'm slowly getting the drift on what it feels like to be a celeb.....

Two pages gone and no update?Chistar,where the hell are you?

Chistarrrrrrrr!!! I c u.. U dey here dey read comment, u nor wan upda8 abi

Not fair ooo

Chistar I will bottle ya head if u dnt continue dis gist o *in tayo's voice*

@chistar i must say u re a vry gud nd talented writer. . . Eva since i got addicted to literature section lik a month ago 've been seein dis ur thread buh decided nt 2 click it thinkin it ws jst anoda overhyped love story. Buh u proved me wrong wen i started reading 3days ago...since den 've been glued to my fone. . .nd i couldn't agree less but say dat u re a born-writer in d making. . .nw becoz of yhu, 've nt brush my teeth since morning. Lolzz... Hw i ws u'll agree we both swap our thinking-faculty. Ghen ghen ghen ghen. . .wat did i jst say. . .

Great story @chistar01 my 1st nairaland post goes 2 you man, take a bow

Lovely write up... Pls waitin 4 an update... Tnx

natkel1: Lovely, love you style of writing, its unique.

Unique is an understatement. This guy's style of writing is damn good

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The best literary piece I've read from a Nigerians for a while now. My respect to you @Chistar01. I'll like to make you a friend. This is my contact - 08097939269

Chistar y r u inceasin d rate of my curiosity nw..,i hate supense oooooh....IT'S UnFair oooooooooooooooooooooooooh

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**continuation**

'Don't make a mountain out of a molehill' that's all my mind told me as the annoying MTN programmed female voice said the number I was trying to call was busy.

So since I've always followed my mind and it had never failed me, I decided to follow my mind once again and just believe it was just a coincidence.

Funny enough, it turned out to truly be a coincidence, because few minutes later, I got a call from Chidinma while Urch was still in the room making his call, I gave a sigh of relief and gave myself a mental knock for even thinking that Urch and Chidinma could go at my back and stab me, or so I thought.

I picked the call and made the first statement in relief;

'Hi babes?'

'am cool sweedy, and you?' She replied.

'never been better' I replied.

'urmm.. Baby?'

'yea? Any p?' I inquired.

'Not really, I know I haven't been the best girlfriend of late and I just wanna apologise, its just that I'm scared of totally falling for you'

'Scared? Why?' I asked with an eyebrow raised.

'the last time I gave someone my all in all, he took me for granted, I don't want that to repeat itself'

'wow! But you of all people should know am different na, am quite offended that you saying such things' I replied.

'that's why I said I want to apologise, I'm going to let my heart take control from now on, no more games'

'No more game?' I asked.

'Yea, no more games'

I looked at my wrist watch to check the time, I saw it was just evening, as the time was about 4:21pm.

'Can we hang out now? Its been a while you know?' I suggested.

'Yes, sure. Where do you have in mind?'

'Lets go watch a movie at genesis' I suggested, I had to make it special, since it was sorta like a reunion,

'that one at G.R.A?'

'yea, sure na. How many genesis cinema are in PH?'

'hmm, isn't it too late?'

'nope, its just 4:30 na, if you not comfortable with that you can bring up a suggestion'

'ermm, lets not go anywhere fancy at all, when last did you go clubbing?'

'ermm, my birthday I guess'

'You see, that was like a month ago na! Lets go clubing tonight, you can invite your roommates too'

That sounded like a good idea, since I had long gotten over my fear for clubs and cultists so I agreed and we agreed I would pick her up by 11pm.

I suggested the clubing idea to urch and Tayo and as expected, they both agreed, whatelse can you expect from two party freaks.

We all played the JACKPOT game till later on in the evening.

***

After much contemplating on what club to go to out of the many options we had in PH, we all agreed to go to 'Illusions Night club' at 'Orazi' since we had never been there.

Tayo somehow got a ride from a friend of his, a 'Range-Rover sport', and after we took hours to freshen up an prepare, we started the journey to the club, we dropped by Chidinma lodge to pick her up.

Sandra didn't agree to go, claiming she had a class test early the next morning, so we left her and the rest of us left.

If there is one thing I've observed about Nigerian clubs bouncers, it that they are really rude and partial.

***

I could remember when I was a broke äss nigga, and the day when I and some friends decided to go small night club in Ire Akare estate in Lagos state (name withheld) and after planning for a whole week, the D-day came and for reasons untold, we were bounced at the entrance. The fact that we were bounced wasn't what pained me, it was the stupîd request the bouncer made, he said;

'Make una show me the money we una wan use buy drinks and I go let una enter...' can you imagine? What concerns him with the money?!. Anyway that was quite a long time ago.

***

As we arrived at the club and parked our borrowed Range Rover which we handled like it was ours right at the front of the club, we majestically bounced into the club without the bouncer looking at us two times.

I smiled and a Yoruba phrase crossed my mind; 'Owo lon soro' simply translated to as 'Money Talking'.

The club in itsself wasn't half bad, unlike other clubs I had been to which was mostly small and had little grounds to dance, Illusions was rather big and really spacious, we all looked at around and after admiring the club, we gave ourselves an approving nod.

Urch Money! Was with us so we all headed to the V.I.P section as usual, I was already getting used to it as a matter of fact.

Drinks were ordered and the main clubing started as we drank and at some point Chidinma who was fond of whispering in my ears, whispered;

'come and show me how good you are on the dance floor'.

I knew it was going to be a fun and long night, little did I know that fate had a different plan in stock for me.

TO BE CONTINUED

wtf!!!!
33 guests and 16 others!!!Nawa oooooo,i swear that fbk piracy was a
blessing in disguise,its surprising how God uses one's enemy to promote
one's work. Chistar you don popular gan ooooo thumbs up.....keep it
up,by d way,I was born on the 25th of october a day after your
birthday.

Dapo777: it seems they are plenty chicks here in nairaland,add me
on 2go @ brainydaps.....if you are hot,preety,sexy and fun.....I promise
you,you wont regret it.

WTF?

Good story line. Keep it rolling

Too short joor,

wow at last I caught up with u guys. this is a really nice story ,keep. it up.

First time commenting since crossing from Fb. Nice write up. Impressive, suspense filled, captivating and educative to ladies! I hope? Keep it up! Keep it coming!

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I luv diz ur short suspense filled update bt am pleading with you to come and continue o. Nice write up..

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yemi2plus2:
WTF?

whats your own

Dapo777: whats your own

nothing really. Just suprised.

Hmmmm,chistar ur username sounds like mine,and am also a handsome dude,a student of Ebsu,and a medical student.i luv ur story and ur composure,but u really need 2 learn how not to play with every babe that comes around.i get advances from the female folks as well cos aside being handsome,am also a potential doctor,but at each point in my life,i have just one girl.

chistar01: Really wish I could reply you all comments but it would take another page or more, so I just want to say a big thank you to you all for reading and droping comments, thanks alot! They are all really appreciated.
You guys are the reason I write.

-chistar01

Update naw, am wating plssssssss

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Oo°˚˚˚˚˚°chistar is no doubt a STAR already, buh y e be say na so so females dey view dis page pass. . . ??!

Chister u r jox too gud. I cant evn read d stories on fp again because of dis story. Wishin u additional 5minutes b4 u 'cum' anytym u v sex

Accipetex: Chister u r jox too gud. I cant evn read d stories on fp again because of dis story. Wishin u additional 5minutes b4 u 'cum' anytym u v sex

nice