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Lets Be Friends by secretcerish: 7:26am On Sep 11, 2013
I really thought i needed you
I felt the need to be with you
It felt so good when am with you
But the real truth is that am on my own
Because you really where never there

All those thoughts where mine
Every of my feelings where me
You just liked the image of me, look of me and the brain on me but you never did love me

Maybe I should have called it out
I should have accepted what it was
I should have defined my place
Accepted what you offered wasn’t love
Just maybe, I would never have felt so used

On a brighter note, you never lied
At least not with your mouth
Because your actions where clear
You just liked me around, maybe not the way I wanted
But then, accepting it for what it was would have really helped

Maybe I fitted the kind of image you wanted
Maybe I was just the poster card, presentable and reliable
But truly it was never love, not on your part
I should have cleared that up
. And maybe then the lets be friends wouldn’t hurt

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Re: Lets Be Friends by Tinkybabe(f): 11:53am On Sep 11, 2013
Nice poem..tale of a friend zoned guy.
My critique;you used "where" instead of "were"..you should edit it and you're good to go
ndo
Re: Lets Be Friends by NwannekaUloma(f): 8:24am On Mar 27, 2015
cry this poem really captured my emotion and it expresses my inner thought right now...very sad..i felt the same way too..evryday i keep on wish we were just friends,maybe things wudnt be the way it is

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