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Lets Be Friends by secretcerish: 7:26am On Sep 11, 2013 |
I really thought i needed you I felt the need to be with you It felt so good when am with you But the real truth is that am on my own Because you really where never there All those thoughts where mine Every of my feelings where me You just liked the image of me, look of me and the brain on me but you never did love me Maybe I should have called it out I should have accepted what it was I should have defined my place Accepted what you offered wasn’t love Just maybe, I would never have felt so used On a brighter note, you never lied At least not with your mouth Because your actions where clear You just liked me around, maybe not the way I wanted But then, accepting it for what it was would have really helped Maybe I fitted the kind of image you wanted Maybe I was just the poster card, presentable and reliable But truly it was never love, not on your part I should have cleared that up . And maybe then the lets be friends wouldn’t hurt 1 Like |
Re: Lets Be Friends by Tinkybabe(f): 11:53am On Sep 11, 2013 |
Nice poem..tale of a friend zoned guy. My critique;you used "where" instead of "were"..you should edit it and you're good to go ndo |
Re: Lets Be Friends by NwannekaUloma(f): 8:24am On Mar 27, 2015 |
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