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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Winnie1950(f): 3:14pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Andyblaze: Wowhello!!! Mr Andy or whatever u call urself u better delete this nansense before i report u to the moderator 2 Likes |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 3:14pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Tying the next up date. Pls stay with me.. 255viewer and 102guest.. You all are highly welcome. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Warlord3000(m): 3:23pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
As much as I like the storyline.. I just wish prince will go back to the beginning of the story and modify or edit most of the post.. Not everyone is a big fan of typo or spelling errors.. Total turn off.. Keep up the good work and do that in your spare time.. Starting from the first update.. Good luck.. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 3:28pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
what a bunkum! heavy blow on my mouth again, whatta a hogwash |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Hardeluv(f): 3:36pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
He be lyk say, we wld start collecting gate fee money on dis thread. See as pple dey read prince story. Welcome 2 first page dear, n thumps up. Abeg, mak we pour somfin jere, n celebrate. Counting fingers n waiting patiently. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Ishuajoe(m): 4:07pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
360prince: ***CONTINUATION***U must be a good story telling, keep it up. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Ishuajoe(m): 4:10pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
360prince: ***CONTINUATION***U must be a good story teller, (novelist) keep it up |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Yahoogirl: 4:31pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
@op,you have the flair for writing but you need to improve your grammar and sentence composition. The ideas are in your head but you need a better way of getting it across to your readers. I think you should take a course in creative writing as it will go a long way to help you. The story is quiet captivating. I can't wait to get to the end of it. Keep it up. You could also get someone who is better than you in English to edit it for you before you post online. Keep it up. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 5:01pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
***CONTINUATION*** The moment i had walk in through the parlour door, the person sitting on the couch smile childishly at me, while i stood at the door entrance transfixed. "what the hell are you doing in my father house!?. Who brought you here ?. Who gave you the premision to visit me", i'd asked her so many question . " prince, can you pls calm down lets talk ?", precious mentions as she stood up from the couch to meet me. " just drop your yansh for that chair. Dont come any closer, if not am gonna smash your white face!". I threatened precious and she hesitated not. She walk angryly and sat where she stood up. My heartbeat ranged faster in anger wondering how she knew the road to my place. I wanted asking precious about the director or the person behind all this, the person who showed her where i lived. But i couldn't face her that moment. I swiftly dash in the corridor, as i approached my room door. Thereafter, i later came back to the parlour to check if she had gone home. But that munite i tried peeping someone tapped my shoulder and i jolted scaryly. Miss grace was the person tapping, i frowned my face in annoyance and away from her. She followed me, asking whats wrong with me " surely something is wrong with me. Do you wanna know what that is?", i'd asked when we entered a quiet place "yes!. Pls speak to me now. What is it ?", miss grace asked as she tried holding me to her body but i shifted away from her. I didnt want her touching to provoke my second, THE SILLY SMALL PRINCE in my trouser. " i came checking on you but you where not around. Where did you go ?, how did you manage to come in here?, Where is my mother ?", i asked some many questions because i couldn't remember inviting any of them to my resident. " i thought about telling you, but you were busy writing exams. Ermm, i actually came here to visit your mum and not you. Do you understand ?", she mentioned rolling her eyes, demonstrating her fingers too. " the only time i remember was when i under-slept. So explain yourself better. How did you get in here without my mum around ?" i asked. Miss grace sighed and walk away from me heading towards the parlour. I waited there, memorizing whats happening. For the fact that i spoke to miss grace didnt mean i had forgiven her. I exhaled heavily and barge into the kitchen. My mother was in the kitchen when i got there. Everything was just so confusing when i met her. "mum!!, Were you here ?. Did you hear my conversation with grace ?", i asked my mother as i swiftly moved towards where she had stood. " yes, i did", my mum answer " they are your friend, go and meet them and stop behaving like a father here ", my mother replied while backing me. I complaint about the way miss grace make friends with people i hated talking with. I told her about precious being my classmate, but i never wanted seeing her in my father house, because it was gonna complicate things. My mother later interrupted my mind thought speech, as she change the topic. My mum asked me about the exams. My mother made mentioned that i rushed to school without taking my breakfast. She warned me never to attend school whenever i refuse eating. Perhaps, as she made mentioned of food i immediate reached to the pot on the fire and opened it. " not again!!. Why always soup and fufu now ?". I lamented and walkout from the kitchen heading towards the direction of parlour. Miss grace sat silently when she sighted me approaching the parlour door. I sat on the couch beside her. Precious on the other hand was thinking i hated talking to her. But that wasn't my problem. " this one were una sit silently as if na mourning we gather here for, wetin de happen ?, Una husband die?", i asked sarcastically and miss grace change her frown face to smiling. I faced the direction where precious sat and I winked playfully at her, and she smiled back. **** settled, right ? **** We chatted for a long time forgetting that we had a misunderstanding some moments ago. My mother brought food and we all gathered round the table to eat. After the meal, miss grace and precious appreciated my mum's cooking. I later escorted them and came back to prepare for the next examinations. I promised to start reading, as soon as i had returned from escorting grace and precious. But before i grabbed my school bag, i decided checking my time table first. Suddenly, a thought leaped to my mind as i tried bringing out the list for exam time table. " chai!!. Tomorrow na wahala, what will i write in the examInation hall ?. MATHEMATICES no be my friend 00oo! ", i complained to myself Perhaps, maths was the only hardest subject i hated so much. whenever the maths teacher entered my class. Sometime i do walkout and never return untill when the teacher goes out. it gonna be a bloody stressfull tuesday... **TO BE CONTINUED** |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 5:04pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Warlord3000: As much as I like the storyline... Thanks my main guy. I promise to do as you directed. Your comments are encouraging and i promised to keep up the good spirit. 1 Like |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by dedarks(m): 5:08pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
What a collection of phrase |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by mimifavour(f): 5:19pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Prince u made front page. Drink to dat |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by fishmakas: 5:38pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
C com u no fit hit d point abi na watin |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 5:50pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Yahoogirl: @op,you have the flair for writing but you need to improve your grammar and sentence composition. The ideas are in your head but you need a better way of getting it across to your readers. I think you should take a course in creative writing as it will go a long way to help you. The story is quiet captivating. I can't wait to get to the end of it. Keep it up. You could also get someone who is better than you in English to edit it for you before you post online. Keep it up.. I'll do as you say. Thanks for the warm encouragement |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 5:52pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Ishuajoe: U must be a good story teller, (novelist) keep it up. Thanks sirrr. Thanks for your inspirational comment |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by linpok: 5:55pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
ehn!!! prince u don finali mak front page o....wetin we go use celebrate nau.. I dey wait o! |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 5:55pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Hardeluv: He be lyk say, we wld start collecting gate fee money on dis thread. See as pple dey read prince story.. Thanks my dear. Am so much glad for everything. Dont worry we go pop lakasara |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 5:58pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Emzybrown: what a bunkum! heavy blow on my mouth again, whatta a hogwash. Good evening sir. I de salut you with my two legs up thanks boss |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 6:00pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
dedarks: What a collection of phrase. Good evening sir. Thanks for clicking in |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 6:02pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
mimifavour: Prince u made front page. Drink to dat. Thanks my dear. Thanks for your kind support. Is like you are someone familiar. Right ? |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 6:03pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
fishmakas: C com u no fit hit d point abi na watin. Pls make your point clear sirrr |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by 360prince(m): 6:06pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
linpok: ehn!!! prince u don finali mak front page o....wetin we go use celebrate nau... Chai!!! Finally! Finally !! You come enter online. Bros me happy too oh. Thanks for your comment |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by shogz89: 6:50pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Nice 1 |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by linpok: 6:51pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
360prince: . yes o! I go outside since morning..I return na I'm I see ur thread for front page...congrats bro! |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by humblesteve(m): 7:05pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Thumbs up bro keep it up! |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Nobody: 7:10pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Jumizie13(f): 7:17pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Oya efery body take 1 eggroll each with a chilled bottle of zobo. Na celebration we dey do o. |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by linpok: 7:17pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
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Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Jumizie13(f): 7:21pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Shai, 58 + 88 guest. Shey dis eggroll go sufficient 4 us lyk dis? |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by IAMBREEZY: 7:25pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Nice one op you tried just keep updating,thumb up |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Littleflicky(f): 7:35pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
hmmmm,cnt believe i missed diz story 4 a long time... shall,thumbs up 2u dearie,,fabulous job u did...@360prince welcm bck dear,duo i was not here 2call u@Linpok |
Re: My Complicated Love Story With My School Mum by Cutepessy(m): 7:40pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
nyz one..... Buh, still keeping us on suspense ooo. Wats gona b d possible outcm?? |
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