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OH! World. by frenzybest1(m): 10:11pm On Oct 27, 2013

Oh! World
You were made to be clean and bleamless
You were made to be a place of joy and peace
You were made to be free of sin
Oh! World
How did you get stained ?
How do we clean the stain ?
How should we , How?
Oh! World
It was written our fathers did wrong
It is written the ate the forbidden furit
It was said,Oyes it was !
Oh! World
Yet we sitll eat the same furit
Yet we eat it for pleasure
Yet i'ts nourshing to the body and soul.
Oh! World
Is it still the cause of sin ?
Yet we cant stop
Should i stop
Yet somone some where will continue
Oh! World
Now we had you will soon come to an end
How can you ,a giant holding all nation and seas.
Oh! World
If you can free us from sin please do.
(i want to know how you feel about my poem)

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