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Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 5:04pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
--continuation-- "Is it true that you love my princess?" the man asked. "We are just friends sir." Segun replied. "Friends? I heard your good deeds and the way you saved her from that rascal." he said. "I just did what anybody in my shoes will do." Segun explained. "But you took a great risk by standing up against those guys and i must commend you." he said extending his hands for a handshake. "Thank you sir." Segun said shaking hands with him. "But i'll want you to think about dating my daughter because she has been disturbing me and i get my daughter the best things." he explained. "Okay sir." Segun replied. They both continued discussing until the celebrant showed face. "Dad. Excuse me i want to dance with him." Nike said smiling. "Oh! You are free to." her father replied. She took Segun by the hand and dragged him to the dance floor despite Segun pleading to be freed as he doesn't know how to dance. Immediately they got to the dance floor, everybody left for their seats to watch the celebrant dance. "Nike, please i don't know how to dance." Segun whispered. "Please just shake your body in line with the beat." She pleaded. "I will just be making a fool of myself." he stressed further. "Segun please." she pleaded. "Okay." he replied. Segun tried his possible best to dance in line with the rythm while Nike danced perfectly as if she was born to dance. The rest of the guest joined them in dancing and when the dance floor became rowdy, Segun had to pull out and he walked to a seat without notifying Nike. He sat down on an empty seat and brought out his phone. "Hey!" she called. "Hello." he replied. "Can i sit with you?" she asked. "Why not?" he replied pointing to another empty chair. "My name is Mercy and you?" she said sitting down. "My name is Segun." he replied. "So you are my cousin's boyfriend?" she asked smiling. "No, am just a friend." he replied. "Don't tell me that. You need to see how Nike talks about you every now and then." she told him. Segun kept mute trying to digest what he just heard. "Tell me, don't you feel something for her?" she asked. "I do but that doesn't mean i'll make it known to her." Segun lied. "Be right back let me get you something to drink." she said and ran towards the main house to get him a drink. Nike walked towards him with a angry face. --to be continued-- 1 Like |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by ehmasjet(m): 5:28pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
U r realy a suspence inculcant....dese r type of stories i love so much...stories dat heep me on suspence....... |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by christejames(m): 6:03pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
I love the last update, it just got me laughing. I am still following bro, looking forward to seeing new update. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by SexySapphire(f): 6:10pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Yaaaaaaay #dancing# am so happy to be following dis story cos its great. Nice work u've got goin here D9ty7, buh I av a question, I tot u wrote earlier dat Segun's mum told Nike dat Jummy isn't the right gal for her son, so how come she's now liasing wit Jummy? Anticipating the next update |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 6:40pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Sexy Sapphire: Yaaaaaaay #dancing# am so happy to be following dis story cos its great.Its nt yet the end of the story. There ar still more to come. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by lolabridget(f): 7:35pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Segun u ehnnnn...let's c what happens nxt |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by heywhykum(f): 7:39pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
O ga oh.. Still ere! Thanks for the dedication man! |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 7:41pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
heywhy.kum:U deserve it ma'am. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Yemxy005(m): 7:54pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Following........!...e be lyk say i go soon change name 2 segun ![]() |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 7:59pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Yemxy005: Following........!...e be lyk say i go soon change name 2 segunLol.. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by TemitopeDaniel(m): 8:35pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
1 Like |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by ehmasjet(m): 9:44pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Boss wen is d update comin na...? |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Queenxstar(f): 10:11pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
christe james: I am following while eating my hot delicious OKPA waiting for the nxt storyThat brought back memories, couldn't help but smile. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Queenxstar(f): 10:20pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
D9ty7: --continuation--I'm sorry I just joined the train. love the humor here. 1 Like |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Queenxstar(f): 10:23pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
A feather to my crown. I got a dedication in here. Thanks dear. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by tmamuda(m): 11:14pm On Nov 22, 2013 |
Mr lover lover |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 7:35am On Nov 23, 2013 |
Hello guys, am veri sorry for being unable to update yesterday. I typed and submitted only for mtn to start telling rubbish and evritin got wiped away. I woke up early this morning so as to suprise you all. I type for about an hour only for mtn to repeat their madness. I had to subscribe on my etisalat to make it up to you guys. Once again am veri sorry. Signed: d9ty7 |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 8:39am On Nov 23, 2013 |
--continuation-- Nike approached Segun with anger written all over her face. "Why did you leave me alone on the dance floor?" she asked. "The place has become over crowded." he explained. "And that made you leave without telling me?" she asked. Mercy returned with a bottle of wine and two glass cups. "Guess you guys have met yourselves." Nike said. "Yeah." Segun replied. "I think i should leave you guys to your discussion." Mercy said taking her leave. "What about the wine?" Segun asked. "You two use it and step down." mercy replied laughing. "Naughty girl." Nike said. Silence took over the atmosphere between them. "Segun." she called. "Yes." he replied. "Do you know you suprised me today?" she asked. "No i don't. Why?" he replied. "I never believed you'll come." she replied. "Nothing can stop me from coming to your party." he replied. "I really appreciate your coming." she said. Segun unhooked his bagpack and brought out a parcel wrapped with a gift wrapper. She collected it and opened it in his presence. "Wow! This is beautiful." she said smilling. In her hand is a wristwatch and a necklace. She held his hands in hers and looked into his eyes tears dropped from her eyes. Segun was suprised seeing her cry. She quickly removed her hands. "Am sorry." she said wiping the tears with her hands. They continued their chit-chat until Segun announced he wanted to leave. "How i wish you don't leave." she said sadly. "Me too. But i have no choice." he replied. "Come and inform daddy that you are going." she advised. They both stood up and headed to the main house. They entered the sitting room and found her parents watching a news programme on channels. "Daddy, am leaving.." he said. "So soon?" her mother asked. "Yes ma, i have some things to attend to." he explained. "Okay." she replied. "Let me call someone to drive you home." her father said. "I'll sort my self out sir." Segun replied. "Nike go and get him a take away." her mum commanded. "Don't bother ma." segun replied. They both walked out of the house into the street heading towards the bus/stop. Some minutes later, Nike's phone rang and checking the caller, she discovered it was Emmanuel. --to be continued-- |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Nobody: 9:09am On Nov 23, 2013 |
The one thing i like about this work is that it captures, aptly, the antics of teenagers. Their rash decisions, acute jealousy, and of course, their tendencies to love carelessly. Morealso, is the simple writing style that matches suitably with the subject. Kudos. 2 Likes |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 9:12am On Nov 23, 2013 |
Nkpume Iko: The one thing i like about this work is that it captures, aptly, the antics of teenagers.Thanks boss. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Nobody: 9:16am On Nov 23, 2013 |
Na ehhh...come and update nah |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Queenxstar(f): 2:56pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Emmanuel ke? what will I not see! |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 4:38pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
--continuation-- She removed her phone and checked the caller. It was Emmanuel, Segun urged her to pick it and activate loudspeaker mode. "Hello." she greeted calmly. "You have just drawn the battle line. I promise you that one of us gats to cry at the end. I dated you for a whole year without cheating but because you have found a guy of your social level you jilted me and clinged unto him. I tell you are gonna regret it." he shouted from the other end. "Emma what nonsense are you saying? I thought you have broken up with me." she asked. "Me saying nonsense? I broke up with you doesn't mean i have cleared you to have another relationship." he replied. "Mr man shut up and stop saying rubbish." Segun said. "Wow! So you are there with her? I promise you'll cry." Emma said. They continued in their hot verbal exchange before Segun angrily cut the call. "This guy is a beast." Segun said irritatedly. They got to the bus/stop and Segun hopped into a waiting cab. "Thanks for making my day." Nike said. "Its nothing." Segun replied. THIRTY FIVE MINUTES LATER SEGUN GOT HOME "Welcome bro." Mary greeted. "How are you?" he asked. "Am fine." she replied. "Is mummy back?" he asked. "Yes. Where did you go?" she asked with concern. "A friend's birthday." he said and left for his room. He got to his room changed his clothes and took a shower. He laid down to take a nap then he started reminiscing of the incidents of the day. Ranging from the way Nike introduced him to other guests, Nike's dad's questions, their(Nike and him) conversation. "What could have cause this girl to shed tears?" he asked himself before nature did his work by taking him to the wonderland. TWO HOURS LATER HIS MOTHER WAS BACK. "Bro Segun." Mary called knocking on his door. He woke up and opened the door for her. She stood at the doorpost and delivered the message. "Mummy wants you downstairs." she informed. "But why can't you tell her am sleeping?" he asked angrily. "I told her but she wouldn't listen." Mary explained. "Okay, tell her am coming." he said with a tone of dismissal. He shut his door and went into the bathroom to rinse his face. He came out minutes later and headed for the sitting room. "Welcome ma." he greeted as he descended the stairs. "Where did you go today?" she asked. "I went to a friends place." he replied. "So because of a friend you refused going on a proposed date with your girlfriend? You are a disappointment." his mother said angrily. "I have told you times without number, it is over between Jummy and I." he explained. "It is a must you date her." she replied. "But mum, why are you so concerned about me dating this girl? Moreso, you once told me, she doesn't fit me." he asked his mum. "You want to know why?" she asked. "Yes." her answered. "I'll tell you." she replied and clearde her throat. <FLASHBACK> --to be continued-- |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 4:54pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
The next update which is the flashback marks the end of PART 1. Kip ur comments coming. |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Hameenat94(f): 5:22pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
D9ty7: The next update which is the flashback marks the end of CHAPTER 1.chapter 1 or part 1? Nyc job all d same |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 5:27pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Hameenat94:Sowie i mean Part 1 |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Yemxy005(m): 5:41pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
D9ty7....i dy feel u oooo........ |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Queenxstar(f): 5:54pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Hmmmm mmmmh … |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by hebenz(m): 5:59pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Guy dnt keep me waiting o... Ah dey feel u |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 10:48pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
--continuation-- FLASHBACK Mr Akinola was walking on the street very close to the secretariat. He walked past a black Nissan Altima. "Akin." Rose the occupant of the Nissan altima called. "please i don't know you." he replied. "It's me Rose Bolakale." she explained. "Oh! Now i remember. Rose, Magaret's sister." he stressed. "Yes." She opened the door to the passenger side for him and drove off. She discovered that the man who helped her pass her exams is in dire need. So she fixed him up a capital to start his own business in partnership with her husband's business. Akinola thrived and made a name in the business. *TWO YEARS LATER* Rose was on the sickbed with Beatrice by her side. "Beatrice, can you do me a favour?" Rose asked. "Anything for you my sister." Beatrice replied. "I want you to unite your family with mine." Rose replied. "We are already united." Beatrice replied. "Let's become inlaw. Let your son Segun and my only daughter Jummy be made one." Rose said. "Consider it done but first you have to get well." Beatrice advised her friend. "Beatrice. The only way you can repay my kindness to your family is by doing what i asked for. I'll forever be unhappy with you if my desire is not made possibe." Rose explained and gave up the ghost. "Doctor....doctor....doc....d..d." Beatrice called on the doctor. *BACK TO PRESENT* "You can now see why i am concerned about you dating Jummy." she said. "But mum why can't you tell me all these before." Segun said sadly. "I never knew you will meet so soon and moreso, she was adopted by a family member when her mum died because she was still a baby then." she explained. "So what do you want me to do now?" Segun asked. "Break up with whatever girl you are dating now and stick with you wife." she advised. "That's not possible." he countered. "Make it possible son." she begged. "Okay i'll think about it." he said and left his mother in the sitting room. He got back into his room and sat down on the bed with his face buried in his palms. "What sort of promise is this. I can't afford to loose Olanike after all i had gone through. But come to think of it i can't disobey my mother but i don't love Jummy." he thought. "Then there must be a solution somewhere." he concluded before laying down on his bed to sleep round two. AND THIS MARK THE END OF THE FIRST PART OF THIS STORY. Lets kip our fingers crossed and see how things goes in the second part. 1 Like |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by D9ty7(m): 10:58pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
Questions to my dearest readers. 1. Who do you think Segun will go for <a.> Jummy <b.> Nike. 2. Will Emma carry out his threats? 3. The next chapter will involve their resumption back to school. What do you think will happen at school? 4. Considering the distance and individual differences. Do you think Segun and Nike will have a blissful relationship. 5. Considering the family ties between Jummy's and Segun's family do you think they can actuallize their dream? More questions to come. And i hope to find answers to these questions. Failure to answer these question brings the thread to an indefinite strike. Part two will commence on Monday, i'll be glad to entertain your questions and answers before then. Signed: d9ty7 |
Re: TEENAGE LOVE Naivety¤¤¤¤part 1 & 2 by Pinkiedearie(f): 11:12pm On Nov 23, 2013 |
*silent reader*!...thumbs up!! |
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