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A Poem For The Brothers (2) (3) (4)
Another One For The Brothers by Coco29(f): 2:25pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
this is also for the brothers, the lazy ones who can not be bothered with there duties at home, it is time to give us ladies a reason to submit (this is not about sex) although some may think so. Mr black man touch me with your magic stick so that i will submit claim back you position as it was told because you see as a black woman i was to bold. |
Re: Another One For The Brothers by diddy4(m): 4:26pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
COCO29: this is simple, got an indifferent emotion to it and passes across a clear message without having the readers thinking too much. quite lovely, i must say. do u work with rhyming schemes? |
Re: Another One For The Brothers by Coco29(f): 4:30pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
not allways, but i prefer to and it is not as easy as people think to to rhyme in poetry and still make sense |
Re: Another One For The Brothers by diddy4(m): 4:34pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
let me go grab some chinese, i will be back and i will turn dat poem to rhyme. gimme like 20mins. i will be logged off nl while im gon. to rhyme aint easy but if u can do it, it makes the poem easy to memorize and recall. |
Re: Another One For The Brothers by diddy4(m): 5:37pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
COCO29: i tried ryhming it up, but i cudnt do it. so basically dis poem has a blank verse. |
Re: Another One For The Brothers by Coco29(f): 5:45pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
it is open, i do not feel i need to tell men any thing more, i am very Strong headed and independent just like my poems, some times you may think that words are missing, but that is just how i want it to be, i want to leave the reader thinking about what happen after the poem is finished i want them to finish it according to their lives. ya feel me |
Re: Another One For The Brothers by diddy4(m): 5:49pm On Jun 19, 2006 |
yep, i feel year. good tactics. love it. |
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