Taken down.

Stephen, Stephen, Stephen, how many times did I call your name?
Pls stop seducing the women in his forum with your poetic libido!
Anyway, the poem is wickedly nice and Playboy Magazine will pay you good money for it.

rotimy:

Stephen, Stephen, Stephen, how many times did I call your name?
Please stop seducing the women in his forum with your poetic libido!
Anyway, the poem is wickedly nice and Playboy Magazine will pay you good money for it.

LMAO!! I'm so sorry but I think seduction, lust and love are my strongest points because that is the only thing that seems to come to me. Thanks though I appreciate the comment. About that Playboy thing, yeah . . . I should probably try to holla at them.

*speechless*
officially ur fan from now henceforth
dang! its beautiful
i love the tempo
love the way u described the climax as an orchestra
love it!
ok now uve got my writing juices flowing
writers block for 4 months and u've got me thinking,
thanks a ton!

uuhhoooaa!!

datz wt i'm talkin about!!

dAt waz f.wicked!!!

9ze1!!

Can we have some more?


n hope diz aint from a novel or sumtin!!

bluespice:

*speechless*
officially your fan from now henceforth
dang! its beautiful
i love the tempo
love the way u described the climax as an orchestra
love it!
ok now uve got my writing juices flowing
writers block for 4 months and u've got me thinking,
thanks a ton!

Thank you too! I'm happy you loved it cause for a minute I was about to quit writing poems of this nature since no one reads them.

Moyola:

uuhhoooaa!!

datz wt i'm talkin about!!

dAt waz f.wicked!!!

9ze1!!

Thanks.

Moyola:

Can we have some more?


n hope diz aint from a novel or sumtin!!

No it isn't from a novel. You can check out my other poems

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-144486.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-143258.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-145952.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-147351.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-148881.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-155837.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-155487.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-161732.0.html
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria?topic=155783.msg2591288#msg2591288


I might post something this week or the next, so watch out! lol

Stuff you write on,ought to be illegal.
Deep!

Lovelace:

Stuff you write on,ought to be illegal.
Deep!

LOL!! Thanks.

I couldn't believe that something like this ever existed. To make my day, I started with Stephen's poem and got it worth the whole while. Frankly speaking, Stephen put down much more than my heart could contain. I had goose bumps and swollen head as I read down. This is fantastic!

But the big question is: how do we rate these poems? We need to know how well or badly we are performing. We got to get other great poets review our works and criticise them. For me, that's much more growing than reading for the fun of it. What do anyone say?

fantastik:

I couldn't believe that something like this ever existed. To make my day, I started with Stephen's poem and got it worth the whole while. Frankly speaking, Stephen put down much more than my heart could contain. I had goose bumps and swollen head as I read down. This is fantastic!

Wow!! Thank you so much. I truly appreciate it.

Damn. Way to capture the raw animal beauty of sex without making it just trashy. Especially loved the lines:

"As climax hits I hear the orchestra
I listen to the flute in her moan
The trombone enters smoothly to welcome her in
The trumpets blow at the quiver of her skin"

Thanks Candide!

Hi Steph, please I am inviting you to take a critical look at some of the poems I posted on this section. Please criticize them for me. The captions of the poems are: Midnight Blues, Nostalgia, In Love With A Goddess. Please let me know what you think of them.

I keep coming back to this forum just to read more of your super posts. You are a top poet friend.

olu77:

I keep coming back to this forum just to read more of your super posts. You are a top poet friend.

Thanks.