They were long and beautiful, i didnt feel envious

i was in awe.

It was dark and i could barely see his face but

i was enthralled.

He spoke and even though i had turned away from him,

i was taken.

i looked at him and saw the most beautiful thing,

i was falling.


Suddenly, i heard the bus conductor say "Mobil!"

i was saddened.

Goodbye, he said and i could only sigh

i was going to miss him.

hmmmm , its kool but not that kool.
nice try though.

its not meant to be "ok"

anyways

u would miss d conductor eh ?

LOL

no be conductor ooh!!!!

The driver?

Na only them two wey dey for hinsyd bus ??

You should have collected his number.

LOL, follow indeed!

Nansense.

4 literature dats was Crap. . Crap. . . try to post dis somewhere else, not here, i bet it will soon be moved. .

See hw dis girl just dey trip 4 inside bus. . . na wa ooooo. . .dats weird. . . d guy get time dey scope chick 4 bus upon dat a dark bus. . na mumu. . u sef dey trip. . thank God u did not listen. . . u shuld hav missed ur stop!!

I sure say all dose times wey i dey bus . . enough girls go don trip 4 me tire. . i would neva notice. . cos i'm always think of hw to to get d hell out. . . and collectin ma f**king change. . .

who send you?

go jare!

no probs. . . .  i go leave u and your DANFO Love

DANFO Love!!! nice name 4 ur poetry. . . .don't u think. . . .

Geez, give her a break.

Those kind of writing are normally written in like two seconds, no two thoughts, just ordinary drabble, I'm sure it wasn't meant to be a big deal.

@ Gamine

y u no jack am follow urself?

lost

@Nella,
lol, leave the guy make him bust hin head over dis 0.0001 sec drabble.

Omo, i no fit jack the guy ooh, my weight no fit carry.

@Stannesi,
may you just carry go e don do

btw, thanks for Danfo Love

you would have opened your pussy for him to have a look before you got down from the bus - ,

@Gam & @Nel
r u sayin dats just a fan fiction. . or wat

@mosun_ade
I go like jam ur type 4 bus,

@Mosun

Just cause you would, dosnt mean everyother pesin would.

@Stan,

@Gam

@Stan

@Gam

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`"` `"` hhmmmmmmmmmmmm,

stannesi:

4 literature that is was Crap. . Crap. . . try to post this somewhere else, not here, i bet it will soon be moved. .

See hw this girl just dey trip 4 inside bus. . . na wa ooooothat is weird. . . d guy get time dey scope chick 4 bus upon that a dark bus. . na mumu. . u sef dey trip. . thank God u did not listen. . . u shuld hav missed your stop!!

I sure say all dose times wey i dey bus . . enough girls go don trip 4 me tire. . i would never notice. . because i'm always think of hw to to get d hell out. . . and collectin ma f**king change. . .

Oh shut up will you?

At least your poem has meaning. Good job jare.

LOL

Seun

thanks sweetie

@spikedcylinder
awwwww. . . . .  thanx sweetie . . . . i will because that is d best thin i read today, 
(but its seems kind of strange. . . . why criticize ma own view of d poem. . . wats urs)

Confession: honestly i was kind of jealous, i never meet an admirer on da bus. . .

@Seun
awwwww. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . sweet dude. . . .  awwwww. . . . . . .   

Jealousy

Ever so Green

I like it. Simple, straightforward, all in the moment and best of all, realistic. I can imagine it happening to me. . . if it hasn't already happened before

Oh i see


I had another, on the bus moment today though

but it was shattered by my skirt getting stuck on the door as i tried to get down