I see
Clear visions of you and I,
Aligned in time and place,
Going through a continuous phase
Of a love race that love plays when we freely fall.
I see visions of us,
Closer in mind than in body,
We sync intellectually,
Knotted to the point where our thoughts flow as one,
No one can fathom or mimic the love we have sprung
From understanding.
Your pores leak information into these lips,
And so I study the language your body speaks,
Speaking it fluently,
As if it were my native tongue,
You are embedded in me.
I see
A clear vision of what we can become,
If we give in to our desires,
Relying on faith, trust and hope,
Risking it all,
We float and let the sea carry us to our destiny.
I see
A clear vision of forever,
The wisdom of age sweetens the taste of this love,
And we,
Old and gray,
Still find beauty in each other,
We stay hand in hand,
Heart in heart,
With a clear vision of everlasting.
I see
You
I see
Love

Awww, Stephen, I loff _you it. jk
On a serious note, that was lovely!!
Such Imagery and figurative language. . . . ^{sighs and faints}

"I see you I see Love", my new slogan

*Morenike:

Awww, Stephen, I loff _you it.  jk
On a serious note, that was lovely!!
Such Imagery and figurative language. . . . ^{sighs and faints}

"I see you I see Love", my new slogan

Thank you . . . I loff you too.

See, I don't mind love poems much, alright? But I think your poem is tight.

StephenP:


I see visions of us,
Closer in mind than in body,
We sync intellectually,

StephenP:

And we,
Old and gray,
Still find beauty in each other,
We stay hand in hand,
Heart in heart,
With a clear vision of everlasting.

Not bad. Not bad at all.

Thanks Kay

You're welcome, amigos. _{Now, how much r u going to pay for that resounding commendation?.}

Oh Stephen (deep sigh), You and these poems did bring some light to my day.
The Hurricane and its destruction had me really depressed but when i read. . . .
"And so I study the language your body speaks,
Speaking it fluently,
As if it were my native tongue,"
It put a smile on my face.

onyinye2:

Oh Stephen (deep sigh), You and these poems did bring some light to my day.
The Hurricane and its destruction had me really depressed but when i read. . . .
"And so I study the language your body speaks,
Speaking it fluently,
As if it were my native tongue,"
It put a smile on my face.

Just say "I love You", jeez.

onyinye2:

Oh Stephen (deep sigh), You and these poems did bring some light to my day.
The Hurricane and its destruction had me really depressed but when i read. . . .
"And so I study the language your body speaks,
Speaking it fluently,
As if it were my native tongue,"
It put a smile on my face.

Aww . . . thanks.

*Morenike:

Just say "I love You", jeez.

LMAO!! Eventually, she'll come around and say it.

Stephen, this poem is so beautiful. I can almost imagine you whispering this in my ear. When I see you, I see God's gift to women and I must win that gift. *sigh* Since I have not officially wished you a happy birthday on Nairaland, here it is: Happy Belated Birthday Love!!

Another of your wonderful poem, I enjoy this also and also like the picture of the eye watching the flower. You are such a great poet.

olu77:

Another of your wonderful poem, I enjoy this also and also like the picture of the eye watching the flower. You are such a great poet.

LOL!! I think I have a new #1 fan . . . thank you very much.

Na wa o
See how d guy just get fans sha

*sighs* ahhhhhhhh
yeah i think im begining to understand wat this love thing is about

StepehnP. . . . .

@ Post, Kudos, that was amazing. Hi, Y'all i'd like you to check this out.

She Walks in Beauty
She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.


One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
Or softly lightens o'er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling place.


And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent!

Exstar:

@ Post, Kudos, that was amazing.

Thanks.

Exstar:

Hi, Y'all i'd like you to check this out.

She Walks in Beauty
She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes:
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.


One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
Or softly lightens o'er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling place.


And on that cheek, and o'er that brow,
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent!

Hey, this is really good. Did you write this?

Thanks, StephenP. Yeah! I wrote it. Have a wonderful day, y'all.

Exstar:

Thanks, StephenP. Yeah! I wrote it. Have a wonderful day, y'all.

Damn! Why did you have to lie about the poem? You know you didn't write it.

Exstar:

Thanks, StephenP. Yeah! I wrote it. Have a wonderful day, y'all.

U liar
Lord Byron wrote it

tope2000:

U liar
Lord Byron wrote it

asiri ole ti tu

yawa don gas

MrCrackles:

asiri ole ti tu

yawa don gas

The girl too dey lie jare, not orginal at all

why people dey lie up and down naw?

trying to claim credits for other people's work?

awon ole barawo!!

MrCrackles:

why people dey lie up and down naw?

trying to claim credits for other people's work?

awon ole barawo!!

Heheheheehehe . . . . during uni days, she for don miss one semester st8
seun should ban her for plagiarism

lmao!!!
i didnt want to ridicule her but i knew i had read that piece b4

Hey prettie,how u doin?

Hey prettie,how u doin?

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, see me see yawa!!!
why all of una wan crucufy me na? Wetin i do

StephenP:

Damn! Why did you have to lie about the poem? You know you didn't write it.

I said i did, whats your problem with that?

tope2000:

The girl too dey lie jare, not orginal at all

For the fact that you cant compose a poem does not mean any other person cant.

Damn you haters!!!

MrCrackles:

why people dey lie up and down naw?

trying to claim credits for other people's work?

awon ole barawo!!

Write yours and stop criticizing my wonderful work ,
you need not abuse me you know ! Just go get a life!!!

Exstar:

For the fact that you can't compose a poem does not mean any other person can't.

I am glad u admitted that you didnt write that poem

tope!
thanks for the help jare