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I Want You by Cayon(f): 4:16am On Oct 10, 2008 |
I want you I need you I eat, sleep and breathe you Through blind eyes I would still see you If you were a foreign tongue I would learn to speak you I'D seek you If you were gone Any day of the week boo Because I happen to love the mystique you Carry, and silly games are beneath you And that physique you Wear oh so well is beyond belief, you Are incredible And so unforgettable All the time, I want to freak you Let me enter your mind So that I could reach you Learn from and teach you You are my sugar And I am your sweet tooth And without you My future would be bleak, you Do something to me that makes me too weak to Think, my strength becomes meek through Canvas's unfinished for me to complete you I want to relieve you Touch your heart so that I could keep you With me, off your feet I want to sweep you Are my lyrics too deep to Go that steep through Mazes of pre-intimacy that you could never sleep through? I want to seek new ways to please you , ease your mind and tease you A full circle of pleasure, 360 degrees, you Make my fantasies come true And never make me blue, Your love is taking me to school But all your classes I breeze through Because you're the type of knowledge I seize boo Instead of Charmin, I want to squeeze YOU If you were a film I'D want to freeze you Frame by frame to analyze and appease you Your love is my truth But if you lied, I'D still believe you To get you into something That's a little more see through And soon after, you would Have me on my knee's, you Would cause my tongue to speak Swahili And your eyes would roll back and speak Hebrew And that look is like my favorite book I want to read you And change the way people perceive you, Your soul is like a stop sign That I could never speed through If I were a slave I would STILL try to free you Your heart is the lock That only I have the key to Like the brother that said, if I was cut I would bleed you I think he read my mind because He said that for me too Our love is so right That I couldn't even deceive you Or get stupid and try to leave you Cause if I could, I would be you But if you love me forever Like we agreed to I would never need to Because a part of me is what I want to feed you And nourish that body So that it can house your seed too All said and done boo, This is just another poem about, you By the Intellect |
Re: I Want You by Cristalz(f): 5:24pm On Oct 10, 2008 |
Love deeply felt; wholly embraced, totally absorbed, and completely reciprocated. The arrangement of your lines isn't properly done in some places; it kinda affects the verbal rhythm. . . otherwise,its a beautiful piece |
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