berbajiday:
“He sells what he
steals and steals what he sells.” Ds got me rolling on d floor laffin, nice plot and suspense Kingzpen, u just won urself a fan (not ceiling nor standing lol). More ink to ur pen and more feathers to ur cap. Keep up d gud work.

Woooow... Glad you enjoyed it... More to come...

Keep It Locked...

God Bless You...

charijee:
See as you twisted my brain KingzPen.....had to read it over again to fathom it was a dream....
I must say you're good KingzPen....
Appreciation to the guys that pushed for FP

I never meant to twist your brain that much... Pardon me. Looool...

Thankz so much Dear...


God Bless You...

Sunak:
d tory almost confused me at d 1st place bt later got it.
thanks Kingzpen, wen shud we b waiting 4 anoda upd8.
BTW well done 4 fp

Thank God you escaped confusion... Loooool...

Dropping another update today by God's Grace...

Keep It Locked...

veraiyke:
Very impressive n captivating

So happy you found it so...

Keep It Locked...

God Bless You...

macpetrus:
Kudos...

KingzPen

Thankz Bro... God Bless You...

morsadh:
9ce writing. Abeg how you dey update, biko?

Thankz Bro... For the update, it will drop as often as possible... Work and all are the factors behind my late update...

Keep It Locked...

God Bless You...

As you wait for the next update, visit: www.kingzpen.com to read featured short stories...

kingzpen congratulations On The fp thing u really worth It

Thank God It's a dream afterall
u r really gud keep up da gud work

kingphilip:
kingzpen congratulations On The fp thing u really worth It

Thank God It's a dream afterall
u r really gud keep up da gud work

Thankz so much bro... You made it happen...

Yh, It was, but don't you think the dream will affect the way Sanmi feels about Salewa?

KingzPen:


Thankz so much bro... You made it happen...

Yh, It was, but don't you think the dream will affect the way Sanmi feels about Salewa?

It depends
If his dreams always comes true then It might but if otherwise then It might not

I think he has a little trust on her so he might dismiss the thought too

kingphilip:

It depends
If his dreams always comes true then It might but if otherwise then It might not

I think he has a little trust on her so he might dismiss the thought too

Hmmm... Nice analysis...

Let's see...

Nice one kingzpen, kip it up..

KingzPen:


Hmmm... Nice analysis...

Let's see...

Ok boss
when is da nxt update

I'm a new reader here.nyc story kip it up.pls Kingzpen wen is d nxt update.I've been seriously waiting

Onemansquad:
Yeeh!!! Ghost mode readers are plenty in dis thread oo
av caught all of u 2da nd u guys mst comment


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Just booked my space, sir.

morsadh:

Just booked my space, sir.

have you voted?

chibwike:
have you voted?

Will do shortly. Send me the link pls

morsadh:

Will do shortly. Send me the link pls

thanks sire..here is the link


www.nairaland.com/newpost?topic=2009154

just type i vote chibwike'

thanks alot

Nice piece,more energy to type.hugz

Nice Story. Keep it coming!

Kingzpen,u re doing a great job,
ur story is very captivating and enriching.
I would like u to clarify my curiousity with this question.
Sanmi is a soldier,is he not suppose to be residing in a barracks as all soldiers do,,cos am just wondering how the rebel leader find his way so easy to his house,would ve been difficult if it was in d barracks except u want to paint a livid picture of what d BH boys does in the north east,,frgive my sarcarstic thought,knowin u been a soldier.

With all sincerity of heart, I intend updating this evening but my laptop is down due to lack of power supply in my area for 2days now...

Just charged my phone a lil just to drop this and let y'all know I have you at heart, and I won't take you for granted...

ThanKs for understanding...

KingzPen:
With all sincerity of heart, I intend updating this evening but my laptop is down due to lack of power supply in my area for 2days now...

Just charged my phone a lil just to drop this and let y'all know I have you at heart, and I won't take you for granted...

ThanKs for understanding...

yeppppeeee. hurrrrrrayyyyy. we are waiting. every power that comes against ur way which also says u won't update. I bind them in JESUS name.
am waiting

SaintBJ:
Kingzpen,u re doing a great job,
ur story is very captivating and enriching.
I would like u to clarify my curiousity with this question.
Sanmi is a soldier,is he not suppose to be residing in a barracks as all soldiers do,,cos am just wondering how the rebel leader find his way so easy to his house,would ve been difficult if it was in d barracks except u want to paint a livid picture of what d BH boys does in the north east,,frgive my sarcarstic thought,knowin u been a soldier.

You have missed it up somewhere... Did you read from episode 1? Cos if you do, you had know Sanmi is in Sudan...
And the Rebel-Leader wasn't in Sanmi's house nor in his dream. The Rebel-Leader was the person who interrupted his dream... Every sentence has its picture... Try to form them, you had enjoy it better...


Hope I cleared that?


God Bless You...

codedbaby:

yeppppeeee. hurrrrrrayyyyy. we are waiting. every power that comes against ur way which also says u won't update. I bind them in JESUS name.
am waiting

Looool... Amen Ooooo... It's always my joy to bring smiles on your faces...

ThanKs Dearie...

SaintBJ:
Kingzpen,u re doing a great job,
ur story is very captivating and enriching.
I would like u to clarify my curiousity with this question.
Sanmi is a soldier,is he not suppose to be residing in a barracks as all soldiers do,,cos am just wondering how the rebel leader find his way so easy to his house,would ve been difficult if it was in d barracks except u want to paint a livid picture of what d BH boys does in the north east,,frgive my sarcarstic thought,knowin u been a soldier.

hahahahaha rotf

chai kingzpen see d way u almost twist evrybdy brain wit jst d piece ..

Ogbeni u ar d king

kingzpen .......this piece could sell a million copies in a day....bravo

KingzPen:


Thankz so much bro... You made it happen...

Yh, It was, but don't you think the dream will affect the way Sanmi feels about Salewa?

it won't but I bet he will be watchful n vigilant now and if salewa doesn't give up her game, she will be caught in d act.

Nice story

Nice write-up kingzpen!
I hv been reading from d 1st page and I must say I like d twist nd turns..its not an easy task cooking up all dis stuffs.

I tink Sanmi's trust for Salewa started dwindling after d general's comment abt trusting one's wife as a Soldier-dat also influenced his dreams too

Thumbs up bro!!