viexcey: I'm here too...carry on!

Thanks viexcey, em really glad u dropped d comment. God bless you!

MissSlimbody:

I'm actually a silent reader...
but since u said we should comment.


I don comment

Don't stop here oh... Please continue dropping comments... m glad u did! God bless uu!

God bless you with more knowledge

TemitopeDaniel: Thanks viexcey, em really glad u dropped d comment. God bless you!

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Lol... no blandishing oh! !!!!

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Thanks King! u 're LOVED!

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And bless u too

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Present sir...............

T.dan the boss himself!!!! Nice set of characters....
The wait was rewarding after all!!

samsondavid:

lyk seriously. what does it mean?

on your own

Nice beginning. I'm sure ds story ll make lots of sense.

NB: Pls watch ur use of big words. Use clear and concise grammar and big words only when necessary.

Here i am sir...........i dnt knw u've started anoda one.........i'm sorry 4 coming late......dis one is gonna be interesting....thumb up man.............

Present sir

Woow! God has given you a brain and he has also helped you master the usage of it! Wow! I'm impressed, so freaking impressed at your composition. Its indeed God's gift, may God continue to bless you.

jaymomma: Nice beginning. I'm sure ds story ll make lots of sense.

NB: Pls watch ur use of big words. Use clear and concise grammar and big words only when necessary.

Noted at once!

lol... but d only big word I used... DELIBERATELY was rambunctiousness na...

But noted! Thanks I appreciate u.

Mogenerous: Woow! God has given you a brain and he has also helped you master the usage of it! Wow! I'm impressed, so freaking impressed at your composition. Its indeed God's gift, may God continue to bless you.

Amen, I thank u oh. May God bless u too...!

snowprince07: Present sir

Thanks boss! Welcome

Holubunmi: Here i am sir...........i dnt knw u've started anoda one.........i'm sorry 4 coming late......dis one is gonna be interesting....thumb up man.............

Ma'am! I appreciate!

well come back oga t dan

Welcome back.ki oluwa pe emi na si ire o

TemitopeDaniel:

Noted at once!

lol... but d only big word I used... DELIBERATELY was rambunctiousness na...

But noted! Thanks I appreciate u.

Lolllz

Amazing come bk buh pls as some1 pointed awt pls use mild grammar on us oh.. No use am 4 pple lyk us wen still de learn... D beginning is inviting nd I trust u 2 always give us d best cos ure d best urself... Missed ur short brk though didn't knw u would b bk soon....
Salam

Nice comeback, am freaking impressed. But sha your grammer confuse me o

Jiteshell: Nice comeback, am freaking impressed. But sha your grammer confuse me o

Lol... Welcome Jiteshell

Hameenat94: Amazing come bk buh pls as some1 pointed awt pls use mild grammar on us oh.. No use am 4 pple lyk us wen still de learn... D beginning is inviting nd I trust u 2 always give us d best cos ure d best urself... Missed ur short brk though didn't knw u would b bk soon....
Salam

I write easy-to-read stories too... The first update was intended to be dat way for some reasons:

1) To make ppl knw I really went to read not to play!

2) To attract ppl again...

3) First impression lasts longer.


Future updates won't be dat way because mission accomplished!


Thanks Hameenat, u 're part of the change to my life... hope I improved..

seunviju: Welcome back.ki oluwa pe emi na si ire o

ati emi naa oh! lwkmd! How u sis!!

jaymomma:


Lolllz

abi na...

pricelesslove: well come back oga t dan

thank you Priceless love... buh ur signature always make me....


Not all 'boys' don't value what they have oh!


Iyam a gentle type...

having a headache... m gonna drop anoda update tomorrow morning. Come check it out.


till then, I remain TEE'DAN

HAPPY NIGHT REST!

"Now, I'm not sure about my safety." He sniffled. "If anything happens to me, make sure you keep this case as a secret because I see danger on the way. Please Pemisire, know the kind of person you put your trust in, if possible don't confined in anyone. I just got to know I've been confining in someone who do not wish me well. From all indications, Lawrence may attack me."

TDan, I think the appropriate word for the above word should be 'confide'
Also, 'confining' should be 'confiding' and that 'do' should be 'does' as 'someone' being referred to, is singular.

Best Regards.

TemitopeDaniel: Please try to drop a comment, Please! To sit and type isn't easy, appreciate me by dropping a comment. When you do that, it gives me d zeal to perform more.


I beg u in the name of God don't be a silent reader, criticize if any error has been found, Please! Encourage me by dropping a comment.


I beg again, PLEASE!