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Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 11:57am On Oct 22, 2014 |
Jeanfortune:Thanks, Jeanfortune. |
Re: The Village Girl by kingphilip(m): 11:59am On Oct 22, 2014 |
DanWrites:k boss I'll b very much around for it den |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 12:00pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
Queenxstar:Thanks, Queen! |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 12:03pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
Ciela:Thanks, Ciela. ezeigbo194: Thanks, Eze. Kassia: Kassia: Thanks, Kassia. |
Re: The Village Girl by pricelesslove(f): 12:04pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
I hail ooo. what a great finishing . may God strengthened |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 12:05pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
SexySapphire:Yaaah! We did. So surprised with the nominations! Thanks, guys. |
Re: The Village Girl by Feyikemi12(f): 12:22pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
nice work .....I love this story |
Re: The Village Girl by Fatalveli(m): 1:13pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
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Re: The Village Girl by Essyydiamond(f): 7:59pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
So Mma is already a city girl? I wonder why am not so much at home with a sequel, I think its becuz this Mma's pure heartedness and innocence may be corrupted n those were d things that endeared me 2 her. Forget d sequel, Vanessa shud go sef,afterall Mma will 4give her in the end and not let her suffer 4 her wickedness. That's one thing Mma has too. Mma was really a model. Danwrites darling,that was a masterpiece,u really gave me a lift,d story ended better than I thought it would. |
Re: The Village Girl by anasbeaut(f): 9:13pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
Luved it, Luved it, Luved it. It was really nice. I'd luving a sequel sha. Well done Oga Dan |
Re: The Village Girl by moseph(f): 10:43pm On Oct 22, 2014 |
what a lovely ending,kudos dan. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 3:03am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Feyikemi12:Thanks, Feyikemi12. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 3:06am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Essyydiamond:Thanks Thanks Thanks...for calling me darling 1 Like |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 3:07am On Oct 23, 2014 |
anasbeaut:I wan know if you no go comment before. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 3:08am On Oct 23, 2014 |
moseph:Thanks, Moseph. |
Re: The Village Girl by Jeanfortune(f): 3:12am On Oct 23, 2014 |
DanWrites:so u like darling things abi? |
Re: The Village Girl by kinwayne(m): 10:02am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Oga dan!! Kudos to you jawe, i didnt want to comment,but i cant just leave without droppinq a comment. Biq ups to you jare!! |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 10:10am On Oct 23, 2014 |
kinwayne:Thanks, man. I appreciate. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 10:11am On Oct 23, 2014 |
Jeanfortune: |
Re: The Village Girl by kinwayne(m): 2:06pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
DanWrites: u're welcome, you write maturedly and am enchanted by ur writinq prowess. I could vividly see the scenes as they unfolded. But the only thinq i noticed about your work is that it lacks continuity. If you work better on ur continuity rather than jumpinq from one scene to another,it would really take you places. #Kudos boss |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 2:33pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
kinwayne: Thanks again, Kinwayne. Please let me get your observation well. Do you mean continuity as in plot coherence, that is how logical the 'scenes' are arranged, because that's one thing I take very seriously. If however you are referring to the nature of the writing, brief episodes standing in for full-cooked chapters, I'd tell you it had been intentional. Thanks once again. If you have time do elaborate. |
Re: The Village Girl by Fareedha: 6:50pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
Trypa:.. dahz cool...lemme not derail the thread |
Re: The Village Girl by kinwayne(m): 6:54pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
DanWrites: Thanx aqain for qivinq me a listeninq ear. Earlier on, you mentioned,that the story was'nt qoinq to be used as a full fledqed novel,so i have that in mind and am not referrinq to the short episodes you posted. Now,what i actually mean is that,after readinq an episode and qoinq to the next one,you left me wonderinq if anythinq had happened before then. I'll qive a practical example: when switchinq between episodes,they should be like puzzles which should be placed and arranqed correctly inorder to qive meaninq to ur readers. It seemed like in every new episode,you were beqininq an entirely new story,which had no link to this story, but thank goodness for your writinq prowess which masked the some of the stains. But since you mentioned earlier on that the story was just for entertainment purposes,i believe you made those mistakes intentionally,but if otherwise,i'll challenqe you to improve on how u switch to a new episode on ur future writeups. God bless you sir. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 7:19pm On Oct 23, 2014 |
kinwayne:Oh...I think I get what you mean now. Of course it has to be that way if the story is going to move at all. Even in a fully-developed novel, such minute-by-minute description is rare. That's what back stories are for. Thanks again for taking the time to provide this review. It is bits like this that has brought me this far. |
Re: The Village Girl by Richiy(f): 10:57am On Oct 24, 2014 |
Danwrites, I have to admit that this is one beautiful story. More ink to your pen. I truly enjoyed it so much that I had to drop the John Grisham I was reading to finish up this one first. Well done. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 12:45pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
Richiy:Thanks, Richiy. |
Re: The Village Girl by doroallen(m): 4:27pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
Thanks. Gretta Brooker Palmer says it best - Happiness is a byproduct of an effort to make someone else happy. May happiness always be yours. |
Re: The Village Girl by DanWrites(m): 4:52pm On Oct 24, 2014 |
doroallen:Aww...Thanks, doroallen. |
Re: The Village Girl by Scapashini3(m): 9:58am On Oct 25, 2014 |
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Re: The Village Girl by Scapashini3(m): 9:59am On Oct 25, 2014 |
obasegun88:wetin you dae tok sef??you get sense??yhu no read where im bleep mma??if you don't know what to say, shut-up. Nonsense. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Village Girl by Essyydiamond(f): 3:31am On Oct 26, 2014 |
DanWrites:U r not serious.Lolz |
Re: The Village Girl by Onemansquad(m): 6:59am On Oct 26, 2014 |
Bros aw many years imprisonment 4 vanesa @ danwrites |
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