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Re: The Most Wanted Maid by kingphilip(m): 2:59pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Joyous888(f): 3:06pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Ds one wey dem dey die one afta d other, mak angela n David no dieooooooooo. Hehh no say i no tell u ooooo. Nice update. Patiencely waitng fr d next one |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 3:11pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
As we draw close to the end,possibly tonight,i want to thank you guys for being there for me all these while. Thanks for your patience and for always sticking around. Oga zyzxx, Queen Jennimma, Aipete2,ciela,seunviju,jaymomma,kceemart,Onemansquad, Queenxstar,tshegs19, PrinceAdepoju,D9ty7, Bevy12,Frankenstein, aprilwise,blesoh, MuniratAbolanl,Trypa, DVMtuppence, Tunrayo75,getafe, Tolulopegeorge, Epathra,Missyetty, eneLight3,Funniez, Zikyke,Divepen,Kunzu,Fatalveli,pretydiva, Eliasog,myndd, ACHIEVABABE,Iffffffy, tushwitch,Joyous888,donkizzydaboss, donbrowser,adeh39, PinkObsession, FunkySilver,olerugod,noblekel,seyitanhep, lANDEX,Snowangel4, yettielicious, pricelesslove, kingphilip,chii8, REMMY12,Missmossy, temmylove28, Marynneka Bluestarry,miracle98, odufanabasa,mamziii,PrincessB1,daveP, boldndbeautiful, shayomi,Bagayouche, CLARIDA,Psalmology, ebohstepn,thoxyno,Dyoungstar, sebak,Ardehyemmie, ujuka,Peejayybold And so many others too numerous to mention. I say a very BIG THANK YOU to all of you. Your reviews,comments,critics,suggestions and corrections really gave me the strength and determination to continue. Daalu nu I also want to appreciate everybody who made out time to read the story and the guest readers too. And those who will read the story later God bless you all. 2 Likes |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Trypa(f): 3:31pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Calismart: Aww babe u r warmly welcome |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 5:14pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Calismart:(shouts) amen!!! When r u starting a new story? |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Joyous888(f): 5:49pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Amen n bless u too. Still waitng fr d next update......... |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by daveP(m): 6:02pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
More ink to your pen Calis! |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by blesoh(f): 6:20pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Calismart:u re welcome,as we look forward to a new story. |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Calismart(m): 7:46pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
EPISODE 42 ****::::::::::.**** *AT THE GRAVE YARD* The ground was wet with tears and mourning. David held Angela,comforting her as she stared at the grave,crying bitterly,wishing she could come back to life to spend more time with them.She had forgiven and forgotten whatever wrong she did her "I will never forget the good times we had.I have known you for a long time.You were my best friend.A friend like no other. Even in my next world,i would still want you to be my friend again and again. I love you Baby. We shall meet again to part no more"Angela couldn't control her tears as she dropped the flower she was holding in Ebere's grave. Mike was affected the most.Words were not enough to say how he felt.His precious pearl,had been taken away.He never knew if can ever find someone who will truly love him like she did.He blamed himself for abandoning her in the first place because of the rumours he heard. His eyes were almost empty from all the tears he shed. Sonia,with her bandaged wounds, sniffed at regular intervals.She feared Ebere still bore grudges against her before her death,though her sister Angela had told her Ebere bore no grudge against her. "For the short time i have known you,i discovered you did most of the things you did out of frustration.But you are a good person. Rest in peace Ebere"Sonia dropped her own flower on her grave. Mr.and mrs.uwa also expressed their goodbye message to their daughter's best friend,Ebere. They knew Angela would be greatly affected by her death because right from their daughter's school days,they were more than friends. Mike bursted into fresh tears again.David had to console him,telling him that God will provide her another woman. When everyone was set to leave,Angela squatted by the grave in tears,refusing to leave with them. Sonia walked up to her and helped her up. "It's okay sister.I believe she is in a better place now"Sonia dried her tears with her own clothes and embraced her. Half way to the car,Angela bursted into a new cry. "Oooh.Its ok now.Please stop crying.I don't want my baby boy to become a 'cry cry' baby when he is born"David said,smiling and bent his back in front of her,to the admiration of others.Mike was already gone"Enter my back let me carry you" Angela stopped crying.She soon found herself smiling,despite the tears she was still shedding. "Which baby boy? Don't start again o.Its a girl.My baby is a girl not a boy"Angela managed to say before entering David's back,who eagerly carried her gently to the car. "Aren't you going to open the door for me?"Angela asked,making a face. "With all pleasure,"David opened the door and she entered,"Yes! The queen is in" He shut the door,entered through the driver's door,waved her inlaws goodbye and sped away. Sonia and her parents watched the car speed off till it was out of sight. They got into their own car and slowly drove away. The better days are still ahead. The new rains will come down soon. Sometimes,destiny has its own ways which we find questionable but time comes in this life when we are left with no options than to accept the things we can't change. Que sera,sera. *THE END* 9 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by ogunholla(m): 8:11pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Calismart: 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by zyzxx(m): 8:22pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Calismart:Woa. So sweet bro. U be my main man. so we are close to d sea shore? It as if it should not end Thanks for d time u take to type, to think, and everything, Thanks for d sacrifices u made just to be there for us. We can't appreciate u enough, but I believe God will do dat on our behave. Thanks once again. God bless u Oga mi sir. #Onelove 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Onemansquad(m): 9:35pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
U want make i cry abi calismart bt 4 whr e no go work ..u don kill and bury her shey weldon Infact clap 4 ursef chai sweet story bt i no dy like bad endings sha *no 4gt 2 alert me 4 ur next story oo* 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Olaooni88(f): 9:37pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Ghost mode activated# am really impressed where d Story ended. Welldone calismart 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by seunviju(f): 10:22pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
What a lovely story,keep up with the Good work and I pray God grant you more wisdom,knowledge and understanding to excel in all ways.Thanks for the story,I learnt some lessons from it and looking forward to read from you soonest 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by martin98(m): 10:50pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
Ghost mode deactivated# Ghost reader since 2000BC. Great job sir. Thanks for the wonderful piece. Looking forward to more from you. God bless. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 11:40pm On Nov 22, 2014 |
nice story . no 4get to call me when u start new story o 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 2:28am On Nov 23, 2014 |
Great work and story. Nice. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by boldndbeautiful(f): 3:28am On Nov 23, 2014 |
Job well done calismart, may the good lord continue to bless all Ÿ̲☺u̶̲̥̅̊я̲̅ efforts. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by PrincessB1(f): 7:56am On Nov 23, 2014 |
What a wonderful story. More grease to ur elbow 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Kassia(f): 9:31am On Nov 23, 2014 |
So far I've been silently reading this beautiful story and I earnestly enjoyed it. Well done Calismart! 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Trypa(f): 11:47am On Nov 23, 2014 |
AwW. So sweet dear tnks for a lovely story to touching dear may God give u d wisdom to keep dis rolling 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Queenxstar(f): 1:44pm On Nov 23, 2014 |
Thanks for sharing this story packed with lessons. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Tolulopegeorge(f): 2:55pm On Nov 23, 2014 |
Thanks for the story Calismart.more grease to ur elbow 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by kingphilip(m): 3:05pm On Nov 23, 2014 |
wow calismart this piece was one in it's kind it was beautiful thanks for putting this up for free n the sacrifices u made to get this to this point I pray ur labor won't go unrewarded BTW when r u starting ur nxt story |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by sexuential: 6:58pm On Nov 23, 2014 |
just like Ebere did, never make path with d devil. a lesson too grave to handle as it cost her, her life. thanks for d story Calismart 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 11:45pm On Nov 23, 2014 |
**Sniffs** RIP 2 Ebere..., Mike, sorry u hear *pats him on d head* Angela nd David, congrats *shakes their hands* Sonia *hugs her* , Calismart...., u are d one of d best.. Nice ending. 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by andyblisstar(f): 12:54pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
@calismart.......more ink 2 ur pen......& more strength to ur hand 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Nobody: 3:22pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
Welldone Calismart. Chim gozie gi! 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by thoxyno(f): 3:46pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
I really luv d story......thx for sharin d story bro 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by MzOG(f): 7:12pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
Really interesting.. It almst made me cry. Kip up d guwd wrk 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by PrettyAngel22(f): 9:26am On Nov 25, 2014 |
Nice story calismart. Thumbs up 1 Like |
Re: The Most Wanted Maid by Alicapapaya(f): 12:28pm On Nov 25, 2014 |
Beautiful story with a good ending. keep it up calismart. god bless you. 2 Likes |
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