chidiidika:


Badoo!!!!!!,so what made u think so?

If you notice the way he describes every scene, every action and expression of people...his description of places and environment...It just reflect on someone who's there when it happened...especially the Ehis part cos most of his scenes he gave an unusually extreme details of the events


So I concluded that it's either dicefrost's has a very odd sense of imagination (which I doubt very much) or Ehis is dicefrost!

I'm more inclined towards the last thou...available evidence suggest so *clears throat*

real86:
Dicefrost...i don't think the.story should end the way it did. After the were asked to work out of Ehis parents house,the pregnant young girl went to meet Ehis and told him he was going to look for the baby. The story can be much more better if you consider doing more work on her life after the pregnancy and probably going back to school and bringing their parts together somehow. What do you think?

Olamide1997:
well- i can say this is one of the best story i have ever read if not the best. If u continue like this-The sky is ur limit. The plot,the diction,the conclusion? Everything about this story is world class even dicefrost class. More power to ur elbow

I would av loved to push d story much further, but it seems everyone is tired of suspense

Crocz:


If you notice the way he describes every scene, every action and expression of people...his description of places and environment...It just reflect on someone who's there when it happened...especially the Ehis part cos most of his scenes he gave an unusually extreme details of the events


So I concluded that it's either dicefrost's has a very odd sense of imagination (which I doubt very much) or Ehis is dicefrost!

I'm more inclined towards the last thou...available evidence suggest so *clears throat*

Dude I know you've taken the story too personal but your evidence proves nothing..
Firstly if Ehis was dicefrost..how did he explain Ella's part whenever she's at home with her parent perfectly?
Secondly if Ehis was dicefrost..how did he know that hannah slept with one of the staff in the school when the backpack containing new clothes and phone was seized?
Thirdly if Ehis was dicefrost... How did he knew everything that happened at the psychiatric hospital?
The list goes on and on..all you just need to do is read the perfect story and enjoy.

jimohibrahim:

Dude I know you've taken the story too personal but your evidence proves nothing..
Firstly if Ehis was dicefrost..how did he explain Ella's part whenever she's at home with her parent perfectly?
Secondly if Ehis was dicefrost..how did he know that hannah slept with one of the staff in the school when the backpack containing new clothes and phone was seized?
Thirdly if Ehis was dicefrost... How did he knew everything that happened at the psychiatric hospital?
The list goes on and on..all you just need to do is read the perfect story and enjoy.

Lolz...dude, I was actually trying to make a joke

Crocz:


Lolz...dude, I was actually trying to make a joke

He do got u

Welldone ma bio pheww finally completed it

dicefrost:


He do got u

Yeah...he has more point I guess

Aipete2:
Bitter fact, oga squeeze well

love you too

Aipete2:
Shut up oga ade. We've forgotten about that, God will heal you sha

that's quite rude my dear Aipete2. surely youre mentally incapacitated

Crocz:


Lolz...dude, I was actually trying to make a joke

Oh ok..

ladej:
that's quite rude my dear Aipete2. surely youre mentally incapacitated

Lolz. God will heal you sha, cos you caused it

Aipete2:
Lolz. God will heal you sha, cos you caused it

God bless you always

Dnt mind them, when the story was going on smoothly with the suspense, they where screaming too much suspense and delay as if they asked you to start the story now they are saying it didn't end well.I thought they said it getting too long...

dicefrost:


I would av loved to push d story much further, but it seems everyone is tired of suspense

Hmmm, some people really digested this story!Amazing!I hope you read and digest your academic or professional books like this.

jimohibrahim:

Dude I know you've taken the story too personal but your evidence proves nothing..
Firstly if Ehis was dicefrost..how did he explain Ella's part whenever she's at home with her parent perfectly?
Secondly if Ehis was dicefrost..how did he know that hannah slept with one of the staff in the school when the backpack containing new clothes and phone was seized?
Thirdly if Ehis was dicefrost... How did he knew everything that happened at the psychiatric hospital?
The list goes on and on..all you just need to do is read the perfect story and enjoy.

ardel:
Hmmm, some people really digested this story!Amazing!I hope you read and digest your academic or professional books like this.

Lol..you got me...
I think my academic is on high grade..
I just wish I can just read my books once and understand it perfectly the way I did with this amazing story..actually this is the first story I read on here and I'm hoping to read more..I'm not really into stories like this before(I face my academics fully) but now i feel like reading good stories like this everyday..I hope you enjoyed it too.

dicefrost, I guest maybe the story can still continue, I mean if u can work harder on this story. you tell us what happen to Ella, did she abort the baby?or she keep it. did Ehis later go and collect his baby back? so u see there should be part two of this lovely story which I believe ur readers will be very happy to know the ground total of this story. thanks

Aipete2:
Lolz. God will heal you sha, cos you caused it

Sweetie, where have you been?...miss you o

you just gotta continue @dicefrost..
I just can't get the image of the story of my little head..lol
What happened to Ella at last?
Was the bad boy who drugged Ruth caught at last?
Did Hannah and her new crew later fall victim too?
And I have some questions about the already told story
Why is Ella so dumb,I thought she is a smart girl from a well disciplined home, one of her friend was gang raped on her first outing with them and she still insist on going out with them again..
She(ella) knew that boys like that use girls of her kind for money rituals and yet she ignored that fact...huh?
I knew Ehis is a bad boy right from the start, and he and his cousin has initially plan to sleep with Ella..that why few minutes after he find Ella at the hotel,he himself is already with another girl..and this Dumb Ella is still begging him.
I rest my case before somebody ask me again if I'm doing well academically..lol

ladej:
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Dicefrost. Just call this season 1. Season 2 should follow but please the lag in between shud not b like that of season 1. Consult with ur fellow writers to entangle the story some more so it can b fired up to like say 5 seasons. I feel u shud give ur fans that. Ha ha.... it's just a suggestion. the final say is urs. Thank u for the very thrilling and educative story. MD45.

@dicefrost thank you for this lovely story. What a sad ending. I have learnt a lot from this story.

One wrong turn that actually destroyed Ella's life
Dicefrost you rock

Crocz:


Sweetie, where have you been?...miss you o

Just too busy nowadays. Missing ya too

Crocz:
All of you that pressured Ehis, oh sorry, dicefrost to finish the story abruptly should bear it on your conscience that you gave the story an awkward ending...given the time and patience, I know Ehis (dicefrost) would have come up with better ending


Mors certa hora incerta e ab imo pectore

spot on bro, I thought I was the only one that noticed an awkward end to the story. Lovely story diefrost but somehow I think it was rushed. I guess d fans couldn't wait any longer.

Thanks for d captivating story diefrost, God bless you. I'm sure there's a lesson or two to learn from ds story by parents and d females.

JulieEarth:
This is very nice. I recommend that u publish this, as it will be useful to our teenagers in JSS and SSS.

I saw ur mail notification,dat mail is dormant,reach me on this timitaf9@gmail.com

Itzshaxee:
i guess i should meet you one on one bro! Just tell me where you're in my area, since we're from the same tribe!

I smell foul play!!!

Equado:
really...dice frost aint d sole intellect bhynd dt story...ah v proof...s

This guy is right...

ityP:




This guy is right...

Are we still on this? Please provide proof

dicefrost:


I would av loved to push d story much further, but it seems everyone is tired of suspense

U shuldn't av done dat. If u still av a grt picture in mind to continue d story. U can do dat n tag it #one wrong turn 2. Buh u gatto add more cast n eliminate some. Does dat sound like nollywood??
For me d end of d story depicits d name n itx reali ok. Weldone!

whizqueen:

U shuldn't av done dat. If u still av a grt picture in mind to continue d story. U can do dat n tag it #one wrong turn 2. Buh u gatto add more cast n eliminate some. Does dat sound like nollywood??
For me d end of d story depicits d name n itx reali ok. Weldone!

I also feel the place it ended is the right place to end... If it ends rosy, it becomes a cliché cos most stories end rosy

jimohibrahim:

Lol..you got me...
I think my academic is on high grade..
I just wish I can just read my books once and understand it perfectly the way I did with this amazing story..actually this is the first story I read on here and I'm hoping to read more..I'm not really into stories like this before(I face my academics fully) but now i feel like reading good stories like this everyday..I hope you enjoyed it too.

Sure I did.

dicefrost:



Are we still on this? Please provide proof

Pls just ignore them, you know some Haterz will always have something to say...

And by the way,can you sign my autograph by following me on my profile..lol
Plsssssssss.