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Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 10:45am On Aug 18, 2019 |
An ODE Have you ever expressed your thankfulness and admiration for something or someone you love? Well, one way that you can pay tribute to this person or thing is by writing an ode. An ode is a type of poem or song that is focused on something or someone that is praiseworthy. The word Ode comes from a Greek- aiedien - which means to sing or chant. Types of Odes Pindaric odes, named for the Greek poet Pindar, are characterized by their length, bold metaphors (or comparisons), and big transitions between topics. They have three major parts. Many Pindaric odes were written about religion or politics in a dramatic and formal manner. In ancient times, Pindaric poems were written for victorious athletes and performed with dancers and singers. Horatian odes, named for the Roman poet Horace, are less dramatic and pretty informal. They are shorter than Pindaric odes and consist of 2-4 line stanzas. They have an elegant, serene and more private feel to them. Horatian odes can be about almost any topic, like animals, nature or a beautiful person. Irregular odes don't have to follow a certain pattern. This means that they can be goofy or serious, long or short - its up to the poet! Many modern odes, or odes that were written more recently, follow a looser structure. Example of an Irregular ode: MY FAMILY by Inuwa Usman I see no changes in the water Because we all live sincerely We all live happily and comfortably That no one can separate us. We all share things kindly That no conflict can display We all have fun together Till sunset. Happiness flows around us That people envy us Charity is what we believe That we cannot stop. Fury is farther Love is near We all live joyfully And we all rejoice. Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by firestar(f): 3:57am On Aug 20, 2019 |
Guilty! noble4d: |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:31am On Aug 23, 2019 |
Good morning dear poets, I hope you had a splendid night? Have you ever wanted to write a long narrative poem about the heroic deeds of a person? Well, one way you can do this is by writing an EPIC poem. The word epic is derived from the Ancient Greek adjective, “epikos”, which means a poetic story. In literature, an epic is a long narrative poem, which is usually related to heroic deeds of a person of an unusual courage and unparalleled bravery. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:42am On Aug 23, 2019 |
Good morning dear poets, I hope you had a splendid night? Have you ever wanted to write a long narrative poem about the heroic deeds of a person? Well, one way you can do this is by writing an EPIC poem. The word epic is derived from the Ancient Greek adjective, “epikos”, which means a poetic story. In literature, an epic is a long narrative poem, which is usually related to heroic deeds of a person of an unusual courage and unparalleled bravery. There is no structure to the poem other than it tells a story. Example of an epic poem by youngwriters The man awoke upon the morn To the sunlight streaming down Down upon the bed through the window pane The curtains that swathed it having been Left wide open to the elements The night before in his haste To retreat to the land of Nod He squinted and raised a hand To shield his vision from the glare That had so recently disturbed him From his sojourn in dreamland. He lay upon the bed awhile Basking in the morning light Thinking upon the day before him He could delay it no longer The day must be commenced Despite his reticence and the comfort To be found amongst the bed sheets. But then the swirling dust motes caught his eye As they danced and twirled before him In the shafts of sunlight streaming down That had so recently disturbed him As they performed their ballet To music beyond his hearing He admired the twirling journey Of their dance upon the air And pondered awhile upon their beauty And perhaps if it could be used To aid the work that faced him. With this reminder he shifted He really must desist this lazing Around in bed for half the morn He had work to be commenced. He raised his arms above his head And with a crack stretched out long Dispelling the vestiges of sleep From their places in his weary limbs But as he stretched his gaze lifted To the roof above him And upon that roof he happened to spy A shaft of the morning’s light That had so recently disturbed him It sliced the roof in half up high Two halves of shadow ripped asunder By this line of blazing glory light Right above his head. The sight above him brought to mind Great canyons in the desert Or rivers cleaving land in two Or perhaps, a glimpse between two curtains As the light spilled from within Offering the unseen observer A glimpse into a world Thought private by its occupants Yes, he thought, that was good He’d have to note that down And remember to use it later Once his work had been commenced. He sat up and winced once more At the light that invaded his room And wished that he had had the foresight Last night to draw his own curtains across And then perhaps he would have been saved From the insistent morning glow That had so recently disturbed him. He swung his legs from under the covers And stretched once more up high Still he did not feel ready to face What lay before him, though he must His toes lighted upon the wooden beams Of the floor of his bedroom And he shuddered, for though the light Was fierce and bright and white None of its warmth had thought to reach The floor upon which he trod At times such as this (so every morn) He wished he were the type of chap To own a pair of slippers to put upon his feet And protect them from the frost of the floor It was a while before he found himself Descending the stairs to the rooms below For though his work must be commenced He was not eager to make a start He prepared himself some food Because he can’t work on an empty stomach He prepared himself a drink Because the mind needs liquid to function It was a hot drink, so took longer Because he couldn’t think if he was cold He returned upstairs for a jumper Because the hot drink might not be enough To keep him warm enough He opened all his letters And answered every one Because he would not allow his work To get in the way of his manners He washed and dried his dishes Because the imagination would not be freed If the shackles of chores lay upon him And then there was nothing left to do But work And so he sat down at his desk He adjusted his chair just so He took a fresh sheet of paper And smoothed it out before him He took a pencil from the pot And looking at it, frowned Then retrieved a sharpener And would not settle until It was the perfect sharpness With no risk of the lead snapping And interrupting his flow Such a happening had the potential To ruin a whole day’s work And close off his mind to his task Until the next morn when he would Be awoken by the sun once more. He was ready to begin The paper was blank and crease free The pencil was ready to scratch Its lead across the white surface Leaving behind its trail There was nothing left to do Within the house, it had all been done There was nothing to distract him From the hours that lay ahead And those hours did pass Slowly, sleepily, sloth-like They ambled on by Dragging him through the day One painful minute by minute Yet still the paper remained Blank and crease free Yet still the pencil remained Sharp and ready to scratch Its lead across the white surface Leaving behind the trail He racked his brain but nothing He half remembered fleeting thoughts From when he had first awoken From when the sun blazed so fiercely down Upon his sleeping form And disturbed him from his slumber Something about the ceiling And curtains, yes definitely curtains He was sure the words had flowed Easily into his mind Cascading waterfalls of words But the symphony that had Accompanied them when they first Had emerged fully formed inside his head Now sounded hollow and dull And merely a racket, no melody at all He picked up the pencil But still did not write He looked down at the lead And wood creation in his hand And threw his pencil to the fire As if it had been its fault For failing him He looked at the paper upon his desk Its blankness accusing him Mocking him He scrunched it up into a ball And threw it after the pencil He took a fresh sheet of paper And smoothed it out before him He took a pencil from the pot And looking at it, frowned Then retrieved a sharpener And would not settle until It was the perfect sharpness With no risk of the lead snapping And interrupting his flow (If he ever found his flow) He closed his eyes in concentration He meditated for relaxation He thrashed He wailed He begged the powers that be But all to no avail The words just would not come And then, in exhaustion, in submission He finally admitted defeat After hours in his seat with nothing achieved And days and weeks of the same He set down the pencil That was the perfect sharpness Upon the paper That was smooth and blank And tried to write no more ‘I am a lie, a deceit, a fraud’ He said to the empty air ‘For how can I call myself a poet When not a single word I write’ Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. 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Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 12:09pm On Aug 23, 2019 |
You can try it out. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by Angelina996(f): 9:31am On Aug 31, 2019 |
Wow!! I'm glad I found this thread. I'm a new poet, just learning to express my ideas, thoughts and feelings in stanzas. Kudos noble4d 2 Likes |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 8:40am On Sep 03, 2019 |
Angelina996: You are welcome poet 1 Like |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 8:23am On Sep 17, 2019 |
Good morning dear poets, I hope you had a splendid weekend? I've been busy with work and is really taking much of my time but I promise to post a lesson this week. Thanks |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by olatunyemi(m): 7:45am On Sep 20, 2019 |
noble4d:can you please drop your WhatsApp number, I need dome guide from you |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:26am On Sep 20, 2019 |
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Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 7:49pm On Oct 04, 2019 |
Hello dear poets, I bring to you another interesting kind of poem. Have you ever heard of HORATIAN ODE? A Horatian ode is a poem with meter and rhyme. It is devoted to praising a person, animal, place or object. The structure of Horatian poem is: Abab cdecde Example of Horatian poem Start of the school week (A)Trudging to school on a cold, dreary morning, (b) It's only Monday, this week is going to be long, (a) So tired, I'm still yawning, (b) This feeling hardly makes me break into song, (c) A week of learning stretches out ahead, (d) The teacher's at the front, the first lesson's art, (e) We make it to lunch and I still feel sad, (c) Really would love to go back to bed, (d) But Friday rolls around and it's time to depart, (e) It's then I realise, school isn't that bad. You can try it out. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by Britboy(m): 9:01am On Nov 04, 2019 |
Hey sweetnation... You good? If maynation doesn't reach out to Britboy, Britboy will reach out to maynation Just dropping by with lots of love. Have a great week... |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by Kingsteve(m): 2:45pm On Nov 23, 2019 |
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Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by maynation(f): 3:20pm On Nov 23, 2019 |
Kingsteve: It was supposed to be a gossip about NLAnders I know and it in no way means I needed a connection outside this forum. It's good you reacted to my comment about you, but if you expecting anything outside this honest observation then you are sleeping on a bike. Whatever happens here ends here. Got no biz with the people of Nairaland outside this forum regardless of how awesome they are. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by Kingsteve(m): 3:25pm On Nov 23, 2019 |
maynation: . 1 Like |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 5:20pm On Nov 30, 2019 |
Hello poet, I hope you are having a wonderful day? I'm so sorry for my absence all this while, its due to my job. Anyways, I'll be dropping another fascinating type of poem soon. Thanks for your Patience and keep on writing. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 6:04pm On Nov 30, 2019 |
Hello dear poets, I'm back again with another fascinating type of poem (Romantic poem). Romantic poem can help to spark romance in a relationship. Talking about romantic feelings can be difficult. However,this is one of the best ways to let your feelings out. I do remember back then in school, I used to woo lots of girls in my class with my poem and it works. . You can also help others who might not know how to express their feelings. Example: I NEED SOMEONE I need someone to hold me tight in silence of dark, Who won’t go ’way At break of day. Someone whose love will mend the seams Of broken dreams, And give me back The trust I lack. For love, it holds the magic key To set me free, To heal my soul And make me whole. Example 2: LOVE LETTER I am here at distance Imploring heaven with your name. Death is easier Than these months without you. I am suffering, suffering so bad From a most exquisite form of madness, yearning to have you by my side In mornings and nights. I have become your shadow In those secret moments when you dance alone Or when you bathe in candlelit fantasies. Above all my angel, I yearn to make your eyes a torrent of rain And have your chest heaving in happiness. You guys should try it out... Noblecares Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 1 Like |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 10:31pm On Dec 21, 2019 |
Hello poet, have you ever heard of ABC poem? An ABC poem also called Alphabet poem is a poem where the first letter of each line is the subsequent letter of the alphabet. The first line starts with A. The second line begins with B, and this continues for the rest of the poem. Each line focuses on building upon the central topic of the poem, creating a specific mood, feeling, or picture in the reader’s mind. There are various types of ABC (or Alphabet) poems. Some use all 26 letters, while others only use 5-6 of the letters in alphabetical order Example: CHAOTIC PLACES by Britney After everything is said and done Bad dreams and nightmares Chased away by the coming dawn Demons stashed into nightstand drawers Everything the same routine Fight to fall asleep Get only maybe an our or two Half way making it through both night and day Instead of being away and alert the next day Just barely keep my eyes open Keeping up with daily demands Leaves me even more exhausted Making sleep the next night even more impossible Nightmares creeping back into me Overly vivid dreams making me crazy Pray that they go away soon Quit messing with my head Resting my eyes has turned to hell Sleepless, sleepless nights Tortured by what seems to be a plague Unable to rid myself of them Visiting chaotic places While laying in my bed Xanadu for me would be a peaceful sleep Years without one is Zero in 730 days. You guys should try it out. Best of luck. Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 1 Like |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by megasamuel(m): 11:27pm On Dec 24, 2019 |
noble4d: Dedicated to my childhood Here goes all my little dreams. You left me with but heavy burdens You claimed to move with the time But your leaving me felt so sudden The places you promised we’ll be The times have taken you far from me . Oh my childhood, I miss you already my dear friend. Rest well, you’ll be part of my story at the end 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 10:24am On Jan 01, 2020 |
Happy new year poets 2 Likes |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:54am On Jan 23, 2020 |
noble4d: What is a Ballad? A ballad is a type of poem that is sometimes set to music. Ballads have a long history and are found in many cultures. The ballad actually began as a folk song and continues today in popular music. Many love songs today can be considered ballads. Literary ballads are often written in the form of poetry, with some consisting of quatrains and others consisting of couplets. They generally tell a story in a very direct manner, and they do not have to be about love at all. Ballads often use vivid and expressive imagery in a detached manner to relay the tale. A prominent characteristic of ballads is that they can often easily be put to music. Examples: Whitney Houston is famous for singing the ballad “I Will Always Love You,” which tells the dramatic story of timeless love a person holds for someone. Similarly, the movie Titanic includes the ballad, “My Heart Will Go On” sung by Celine Dion. This ballad tells the story of the infinite love the speaker has for someone. This ballad tells the story of how this love is everlasting no matter what situation life brings her. Furthermore, the band Journey is famous for the ballad “Don’t Stop Believing’,” which tells the story of simple people in search of achieving large dreams. It emphasizes the importance of preserving in order to achieve our goals. More lessons coming soon. Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 5:09pm On Feb 02, 2020 |
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Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:58am On Feb 12, 2020 |
Hello dear poets, let me share with you some fascinating tips on how to write a beautiful Romantic poem. 1. Before you start writing a romantic poem, you need to pick one person to be your audience. Is it the woman you just met? The man you have been craving for? Your spouse? Your boyfriend /girlfriend? I don’t know. Just pick one person. 2. Its highly important to know specific details about the person. What do you like about this person? Is it his body structure ? Or her pretty smile? Maybe how he talks with his hands or her good sense of fashion ? Including a specific detail or three about your audience will increase your chances of making his or her heart flutter. 3. Include those specific details and remember to write in the first person. Make your poem “from me to you” personal. This is how “I” feel around “you.” 4. Be earnest. You can get poetic, but don’t overdo it. In a “real world” love poem, being earnest is way more important than being literary. Sweep your audience off his or her feet with your intentions, not your literary conventions. 5. Write in a simple language. Do not try to show your audience that you are very good in English by boring him/her with vocabulary. Writing in simplicity will make it flow and make your audience feels every word your wrote. 6. End with call to action or pronouncement. Okay, what kind of call to action? Something as simple as “will you be mine”, would work. You can also pronounce your affection to your audience like " I love you", " I'll love you forever" just something simple. Though it should be obvious from the rest of the poem.Sticking your landing at the end will remove any doubt. Thanks for reading and I hope it helps. Happy Val. Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 1 Like |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 12:59pm On Mar 03, 2020 |
Hello dear poets, I'll post a new lesson soon. Thanks. 1 Like |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:58am On Mar 04, 2020 |
Good morning dear poets, hope you had a splendid night? Today's lesson is on EPIGRAM What is an Epigram? Epigrams are short, witty, and often satirical poems that usually take the form of a couplet or quatrain (2-4 lines in length). Example of an Epigram An example of this poem is provided by Samuel Taylor Coleridge: Sir, I admit your general rule, That every poet is a fool, But you yourself may serve to show it, That every fool is not a poet. Another example is provided by INUWA USMAN Everyone wants to live life to the fullest, But deep down in our heart, We all know that, Every soul shall taste death. Epigrams are not exclusive to poetry. They are also commonly used as literary devices and in speeches. John F. Kennedy’s famous quote, “Mankind must put an end to war, or war will put an end to mankind” is one such example. Tags: OMA4U, Adeola, Philtrum, niftyrules, okwutency, princesa, timpaker JigsawKillah,gottoboy, harddon, poeticjazco,dtito,isaiahogodo,paulaok4, basille,krystalxxx,richommie, Chuksemi, Texanomaly, divepen, michaelok, giyazz, nickz, firestar, Bamibor, osiawa, kagari, elvisosho, maxwellbaba, tjkdzyanju, AmiableJay, lordidol, mrwhat, davep, firestar,TemitopeDaniel, repogirl,vonn, Royver. Cc:Seun, lalasticlala,mynd44 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 12:01pm On Mar 04, 2020 |
Please if you have any question on any lesson here, kindly ask me. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by Zither(m): 7:23am On Mar 10, 2020 |
noble4d: When is the semester exams? Is sorting allowed? Nice job, man. Much appreciate your efforts. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 9:17am On Mar 31, 2020 |
Dear poets, please stay safe during this global crises. Wash your hands thoroughly with soap and water and avoid social gathering. In my own part to support the fight against covid-19, I will start a new lesson soon. Stay healthy, stay safe. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 3:45pm On Apr 28, 2020 |
Hello poets, sorry for the delay. More update coming soon. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 9:51pm On Jul 02, 2020 |
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Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 3:39pm On Sep 23, 2020 |
Hello poets, I hope you are having a wonderful day? I've been busy but it's good to be back. I'll post a new lesson soon anytime I'm free. Today, let's revisit Lesson one. What is a Kyirelle Poem? A Kyrielle poem is structured so that all the lines have eight syllables and each stanza of four lines ends in a refrain. It takes on a rhythmical form very much like a rhyming couplet . What is the structure of a Kyirelle Poem? A Kyrielle poem is made up of 4 lined stanzas of eight syllables each. The capital being the refrain: aabB ccbB ddbB eebB An example of a Kyrielle Poem Pollution Pollution rising in the sky, People wear masks as they walk by, It's about time to turn the bend, For all this pollution to end. Animals are losing their homes, To make way for buildings with domes, What message do we have to send, For all this pollution to end. We're all guilty we must confess, Guilty of making such a mess, It's time for action, find a friend, For all this pollution to end. If we don't act the world won't last, Breathing fresh air will have long passed, This is the message that I send, For all this pollution to end. I hope you all understand the structure? If you have any question, kindly ask. |
Re: Rudiments Of Poetry by noble4d(m): 11:57am On Oct 15, 2020 |
Hello dear poets, if you have any question to ask from all the lessons in this thread, kindly ask me. |
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