donsamtex:

Don't mind sharing bro

Fire down,In the spirit of magic moment.

Damn...... This Is Dah Best ...... Kudos...... More Update pls..... U rock men..... *Sipz absinthe*

The rock... Pls update ooooo

The rock# wen I start shooting naija action movies, me and u go write 2geda# imagining- cigar btw ma fingers, finest red wine in glass on d oda hand, lying insyd ma jacuzzi, singing softly, dis is how we chill, dis is how we chill.... Ur rili rock abeg# hats off

I dnt wanna comment on dis thread and I dnt wanna ignore d thread.... Dis story is so touching and pls try 2 increase d numba of tym u update dis thread

The Liberian murder scene is not well constructed.....try and be more sophisticated next time......And dont forget you are stil TheRock555, abi u neva chop?? Lolzzz

Nice right up bro

Nice story . but how X take escape from that hotel in Liberia is so fake. U mean d magnetic field transferred him faraway from d hotel?

*Walks into thread with my long beards and white caftan, holding my chewing stick and quran with my bag hanging on my shoulder * "Woow!!! This is gonna be da BOMB!!! ALLAAHU AKBAR. Fire on za rock.

But like seeeriously, xavier needs more training. He is too amateur for my liking. And from my understanding, the moral of this story is that a night with a woman can destroy 10 years of training.

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I just dey observe ; waiting for d next chapter





#BEATS

wow! this story is so interesting ....thumbs up boss more grease to your elbow

Feyikemi12:
wow! this story is so interesting ....thumbs up boss more grease to your elbow

A girl will find it very easy 2 take xavier down, dat is his weakness...

Bros,come update us now....... Waiting 4 dis American movie

Ur story gave me sleepless night yesterday. Pls update oooo am waiting

Still waiting, update nah

bro ur tori make sense die aswear

Stillin ma jacuzzi#. D rock wetin apun# d suspense don too much nah#

am still sipping my one bottle of origin since chapter one, at OP you wan make i finish dis drink kwa?

The death of Mr. Sunday was way too simple. Xavier's escape begs for more questions. I hope you develop your plots more next time. Great story,very proud of the likes of you. Still waiting for updates,quench our taste please.

Religiously following

Nice observations from lots of you, Xavier's escape route was alittle wack, me sef no argue that one but for una wey no really understand, he was not teleported, Audrey/Rita room was directly beneath his, there is a magnetic field infront of her window which is invisible, the metal she gave to him help him to be sucked into the room when he jump. I hope una get me now.

Xavier was fully trained but u can't compare theories or field work versus practicals or field combat, u could see his improvement during the Estonia Mission.

I love the critiscms, its helps a lot. And please lemme point it out, am a very very very busy dude, I suppose dey sleep now cus the stress today no be here but I am trying my possible best not to disappoint, BTW I work from 8am-6pm hence u notice I updates at night only or early mornings which makes me late. So please make una sowfrey with me, if time dey I go type tire. Its not easy, I dey research first before typing, I don't just come and write whatever enters my small skull.


I love you all, the comments have been so so wonderful. The critics, bashers and encouragers. Sowey I can't answer all the comments now.

Lemme use this small remaining ba3 and type another suspence filled update

Still I Rock


BTW The Season 1 of Friday the 13th is on my Signature, you can't keep yourself busy with that. Its horrorfilled so grab una torchlights first o



Typing like locomotive engine

Its glad dens my heart to know that we have writers who can stand their own shoulder to shoulder among the very best. I've read a couple of write ups here on nairaland and I must add that I've been very impressed with the writers creativity and originality. The Rock, this your work is already striking me as a masterpiece. Thumbs up

Seriously watin ........

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Very nice work and nobody should say the Liberian job looked easy its almost always like that with first kills at least from all the movies I've seen, novels I've read and researches I've made. I'm hoping I'll be able to do something as good as this if I can in my own book too. That having been said the rock I like the way you discribe the romantic scenes becaise as far as I can tell its one of the reasons you're keeping your followership it one reason a lot of people can continue reading a book but could you try and make it less because if you continue with that it may seem like you're writing a romantic novel when in real sense you're writing a thriller. Very very good work sir. Hope to read more and soon

@rock55, hmm oga google searcher, abeg search hw assasins cn use banana and apple 2 kill..lol..nice update bro..rili missed u and ur story.bt wait oo,where is evry1 4rm d preachers son family.i cnt see dem oo..abeg kira dem bk jare..kip d updates rollin.

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Angel daniel Maria

Runs in with my agbada on my shoulder ....

No update yet ... I understand sha ...

Sits under the mango tree
Spreads mat...!!!
Na here I go dey

lekinz:
Runs in with my agbada on my shoulder ....

No update yet ... I understand sha ...

Sits under the mango tree
Spreads mat...!!!
Na here I go dey

*joins him on d mat*
guy..no upddate yet??nawa o