Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / NewStats: 3,180,314 members, 7,910,625 topics. Date: Sunday, 04 August 2024 at 01:27 PM |
Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor (3648 Views)
Casual Musings From The Mind Of Samguine / Words and Imagination of the mind / Random Ramblings From The Mind Of Tex (2) (3) (4)
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 10:10pm On Jan 14, 2015 |
mayapop:Thanks 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 10:21pm On Jan 14, 2015 |
FrancisTony:keep the ball bouncing! 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 9:15pm On Jan 24, 2015 |
keep the ball bouncing!Mayapop has deactivated? |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 1:23am On Jan 29, 2015 |
FrancisTony: Why did she? |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 6:57am On Jan 29, 2015 |
Amefrica:I don't even know because she didn't update it.... But in one of her updates, she mentioned how boring Nairaland is/was. |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 8:29am On Jan 29, 2015 |
FrancisTony: Eeyahh! It's well sha 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 12:05pm On Apr 24, 2015 |
Life Of An Agony Life filled with sadness, Life filled with boringness, In pain I writhe, In sorrow I urge Many obstacles, inconsistency and unexpected has embedded the earth. I mourn and cry for help, I'm stuffed with pains that has weighed me down. The children of Mother nature, scold, scoffs and scorn me. What else am I gonna do? Fighting the sorrow and agony, with weapon I knoweth where it cameth from, Above my imperfections, may I be favoured. We all came through sand, and in sand we would go back, The thought of after-life, leave us in sober. Cc herald9 Laykhorn Texanomaly Missmossy Missterious Standd UjSizzle Mynd44 Pr0ton Kizmarty VictoriousVic 5minsmadness - I tagged you because I have seen a poem you wrote. MzNelly Kumpharm Please, rate this poem 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by 5minsmadness: 3:25pm On Apr 24, 2015 |
FrancisTony:Sonofabich is a darn good poet, who woulda thunk it?! The poem has depth and feeling, I can sense your soul within the lines. Very good work. However... Life filled with sadness, Life filled with In pain I In sorrow I Even though there is no such word as 'boringness', poetic licence allows you to play about with words a bit to pass a message across. I give this a 7.0 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 8:07pm On Apr 24, 2015 |
5minsmadness: nice assessment... @frank, nice work...keep on composing,keep on getting pissed and keep on putting those things that struck your heart in words... that's the way of life of poets ... very boring huhh? but I love it... kudos |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Pr0ton: 9:30am On Apr 25, 2015 |
FrancisTony: Nice one. But there are spelling errors. 2 Likes |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 12:14pm On Apr 25, 2015 |
Pr0ton:If it's the one 5min's pointed out, it has been edited. |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Pr0ton: 6:17pm On Apr 25, 2015 |
FrancisTony: The thought of after-life, leave us in sober 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 7:05am On Oct 22, 2015 |
Like the ambrosial dew that moistens the earth, You leave the dissimilar gender's mouth agape yearning for your unlimited affections.. You seem like the best mother nature could give.. You match the beauty of Greek Goddess Aphrodite; emboldens the love of Venus... Every man's dream! L'femme extraordinaire.. Wishful harmless thoughts of mine. The virtuous woman that every other wishes to be. Folks would view you as haughty, yet you are piety.. Heart races simultenously each time I scroll and view pages of your photo album; you made my heart skip in milliseconds. In the utterly ridiculously state, you strike dazzling. Your unrentlessness perches and decorates environments where your sweet aroma scents! Your sparkling eyes, shinning teeth and flawless beauty remains unfazed. You are undaunted by the haters opinion. You are my Itunes and I am your mayor! cc Pr0ton UjSizzle Llaykorn Herald9 Texanomaly MzNelly et al Wha'ya'think. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 7:06am On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony: Is this yours? |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 7:07am On Oct 22, 2015 |
MzNelly:Yup! |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 7:40am On Oct 22, 2015 |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by herald9: 8:07am On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony:Are you in love? |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 8:11am On Oct 22, 2015 |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 11:00am On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony, um... It's nice. A little overly casual though... But nice. 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by texanomaly(f): 11:32am On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony: FrancisTony:You've got some great stuff here. Grammar and spelling need work, but other than that...you are golden my friend. Impressive! Some grammar mistakes can be chocked up to "poetic license". It helps bring character and personality to a piece, but choose carefully where you use it. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 11:57am On Oct 22, 2015 |
Thanks, Texanomaly. Great analysis MzNelly, thanks. 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Pr0ton: 6:53pm On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony: Your curves and edges are out of this world cc Pr0ton Superb! I loved it. And who's this gurl you're trying to take down? |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 7:07pm On Oct 22, 2015 |
Pr0ton:Jesu! Your lines mhen. SMH. Anyway, that gehl you added by name Dolly. |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Pr0ton: 7:19pm On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony: Say that again... [img]http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcT7uKurz4pGKsc8LCuUBkXe9XjCYVB5RDJlmR4aESr2PzwTgRxblMjCLQ[/img] 1 Like |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by llaykorn: 7:34pm On Oct 22, 2015 |
FrancisTony: I made a mental note when I got the mention to edit it later, but when I got here to do that, I noticed that Tex had done it. You should be careful, though, when you add that 's' to your verbs. Verbs that comes after You, I, We and They never get the 's'. In the second line of the last stanza, therefore, the correct word should be 'remain' without the 's', since the pronoun that would stand in place of those things you mentioned would be "They". FrancisTony, if I were a woman, I just might melt at this; your lines are awesome! |
Re: Scribbled Thoughts From The Mind Of A Mayor by Nobody: 7:51pm On Oct 22, 2015 |
llaykorn:New thing learnt. Thanks so much! |
... / Beyond The Darkness : A Poem By Pat Ashinze / Twenty Years, Twenty Children
(Go Up)
Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 60 |