Oh! My mother land,
Once like the breeze of a gentleman,
But, now, like the heavy-footed

Oh! My mother land,
I remember how it started like a war ship
Heading to defeat the strong,
But,now, like the boat been paddled with a tea spoon

Oh! My mother land,
How has the mighty fallen,
Now like a sailor without a ship.


Cc: laykorn
Leki10

Lol. Harry you're murdering similies.

Just that, your punctuation needs some tuning. You forgot to punctuate a line or two.

Then in line two. 'Breeze of a gentleman'
Can you please explain it?
I am an olodo boy, I didn't really get it.
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:
Lol. Harry you're murdering similies.

Just that, your punctuation needs some tuning. You forgot to punctuate a line or two.

Then in line two. 'Breeze of a gentleman'
Can you please explain it?
I am an olodo boy, I didn't really get it.
Ayamlaykorn

at laykorn am not a literature student o, U should do the punctuations for me that why your the teacher

As for "breeze of a gentleman" means moving without trouble (wars, troubles, worries crisis etc) as gentlemen are tag as not been troublesome