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Till Dawn Do Us Part. . . by Dojo(m): 12:23pm On Aug 31, 2006 |
[center]Eyes meet, Thoughts transferred, Big smiles. Happy inside, Love shines, Hands touching, Senses awakened, Pulse racing. Pupils dilating, Lips touching, Sweet taste. Whispers softly, Loving words, Pulls closer. Feels excitement, Our clothing Falls away, Each caressing Hands stroking, Exploring, Slow pleasuring. Sensuous movements, We make love till dawn do us part, [/center] |
Re: Till Dawn Do Us Part. . . by FactorChic(f): 6:57pm On May 15, 2007 |
One word, BEAUTIFUL ![]() dat poem was really nice good job ![]() |
Re: Till Dawn Do Us Part. . . by profade1(m): 7:18am On May 16, 2007 |
Hi Dojo, It sounds like twas written in the heat of the moment; breathlessly. Like the words and the arrangement. Nice. |
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