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Abeokuta To Lagos (my Story) by DahtzFestjayz: 10:30am On Apr 02, 2015 |
Good Day, Nairalander. This is a fiction story. Abeokuta To Lagos My First Story on Literature Section. The Story unfolds |
Re: Abeokuta To Lagos (my Story) by DahtzFestjayz: 10:34am On Apr 02, 2015 |
“Iam going to lagos, Iam going to lagos”. **Sweating like a valentine’s goat**.. I jumped up from my bed like I just received a call from barrack obama telling me to come to white hood. Ohh my people, guess what? It was a dream. I didn’t remember what I saw in that dream but something was just telling me “Go to lagos, go to lagos” Asif someone is waiting to give me money. I then told myself I will go to lagos even though that was my 1st time of going to that place called LAGOS. Should I tell my family members about this new plan? Should I tell my best friend Anjola?Should I tell my gf Bisi? All these questions kept coming to my mind but the best answer I could give was “Iam going to lagos”. I decided not to tell anyone because they wouldn’t help by giving me money or follow me to lagos. Different thoughts about this lagos unplanned journey started popping up even though I wasn’t listening to “POP” by Drsid but I knew God will win so I played “GodWin” by Korede bello because even if enemies throw “Kataput” it won’t touch me. I couldn’t stop being anxious and curious about whatever I was going to meet in lagos, don’t know where Iam going in lagos but I just wanted to go so I decided to pick a Thursday for my unplanned journey to lagosand didn’t tell anyone about it. Thank God I knew where my mummy put her money, I rushed inside her room on Wednesday night to pick ( not steal, anything for my mum is for me, so? ) I picked up 2000k from her purse ( will she know about this? Mscheww I didn’t even care) all was on my mind was lagos. To Be Continued |
Re: Abeokuta To Lagos (my Story) by Divepen1(m): 9:11pm On Apr 02, 2015 |
You need to restructure this story. It make too much sense than you allowing some rules to make people not comment. Oya, work on the lapses and gbam story go dey sweet us for belle. |
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