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The Girl.. by Twaci(f): 8:19pm On Apr 04, 2015
I looked up and met her gaze;
A tall dark-skinned girl.
Eyes hard as ice;
Black diamonds filled with questions.

I smiled, she smiled too,
A little weaker I guess.
The amusement, the purity,
Her eyes belied it all.

I studied her face;
Her looks, her personality.
The lonesome angel,
Whose innocence seemed vague.

I felt her fears;
Her wants and her desires.
Her dark thoughts I could read;
A Dark paradise, it seemed.

I yearned to know more;
To relate to this persona.
But as I lifted my hand,
She did also.

A step closer I thought,
And as I moved, she did.
Then I tried to touch her,
Only to feel the cold side of my mirror.

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Re: The Girl.. by JeffreyJamez(m): 9:00pm On Apr 04, 2015
Hahaha.... Nice one.... beautiful piece Tracy wink
Re: The Girl.. by Twaci(f): 9:03pm On Apr 04, 2015
JeffreyJamez:
Hahaha.... Nice one.... beautiful piece Tracy wink
Thanks dear

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Re: The Girl.. by harffie(m): 7:34am On Apr 07, 2015
60%...its good!
Buh i believe you can get better!
Re: The Girl.. by Muzikluva(m): 10:22am On Apr 07, 2015
Sensual and captivating!
Re: The Girl.. by badinfluence: 12:05pm On Apr 07, 2015
Twaci:
I looked up and met her gaze;
A tall dark-skinned girl.
Eyes hard as ice;
Black diamonds filled with questions.

I smiled, she smiled too,
A little weaker I guess.
The amusement, the purity,
Her eyes belied it all.

I studied her face;
Her looks, her personality.
The lonesome angel,
Whose innocence seemed vague.

I felt her fears;
Her wants and her desires.
Her dark thoughts I could read;
A Dark paradise, it seemed.

I yearned to know more;
To relate to this persona.
But as I lifted my hand,
She did also.

A step closer I thought,
And as I moved, she did.
Then I tried to touch her,
Only to feel the cold side of my mirror.

Beautiful piece... tho I have to add..

Silently he watched
Stricken by such lovely sight
As the girl in the mirror smiled..
He hoped she could touch his heart
A heart colder than the mirror

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Re: The Girl.. by Nobody: 6:23pm On May 09, 2015
I love your poem.
Re: The Girl.. by Ghost01(m): 8:13am On May 15, 2015
A fine piece!

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