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Amateur Poem by Uju4eva(f): 1:39am On Sep 09, 2006 |
Weak Love Why did he leave me? Leaving me so weak, week after week. You made me feel so small, like I can’t do anything at all. It’s like I am at a cliff peak, destined to fall and let my blood leak. I feel so low, like someone punched my face blow by blow. Different emotions run through my head, as if I pierced my wrist and inserted lead. He was strong and confident, I was weak and liked a compliment. I didn’t know I was insecure, He was so positive, he was like a lure. I feel that he left me because of my action, actions of my obsessiveness is like a fraction. It’s a part of my twisted mind, which I thought was divine. Until he left me,left me, Feeling so weak. |
Re: Amateur Poem by gwatala(m): 1:53am On Sep 09, 2006 |
This reads like rap, with sweet but simple lyrics. This is good. And it is anything but amateur. Nice. I'm guessing that you are female right? |
Re: Amateur Poem by Uju4eva(f): 1:55am On Sep 09, 2006 |
oh yeah, I have lot's of some poems but yeah i'mmma female, check out da profile, but yeah, thanks, |
Re: Amateur Poem by Douzy(m): 2:10am On Sep 09, 2006 |
Ujunwa kedu? I mara mma nwanyi. Daalu! |
Re: Amateur Poem by Uju4eva(f): 2:12am On Sep 09, 2006 |
idinma, sorry, but i don't know much ibo, i know when i hear it, but u can teach me, |
Re: Amateur Poem by Douzy(m): 2:23am On Sep 09, 2006 |
Well, I'm naturally an artistic linguist but can't go beyond a few expressions in English and French, lol, though I can speak, read and write well in Igbo. Duh! I could teach you then, if you are ready to "follow the teacher" like one of my lecturers would say in those days. |
Re: Amateur Poem by franc1982(m): 1:27pm On Dec 05, 2006 |
if that's true life, that i hope u're now strong. show me that brother, and he'll pay for it. nice poem, keep it flowing. |
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