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African Spiderman by Nobody: 1:05pm On May 09, 2015 |
[b]Prolo. |
Re: African Spiderman by Iolite(f): 4:53pm On May 09, 2015 |
Ok |
Re: African Spiderman by ninja4life(m): 7:58pm On May 09, 2015 |
Following thread.waiting for next update |
Re: African Spiderman by LarrySun(m): 8:51pm On May 09, 2015 |
Nice! Catchy prologue. Keep it coming, sir. |
Re: African Spiderman by Nobody: 8:53pm On May 09, 2015 |
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Re: African Spiderman by LarrySun(m): 9:05pm On May 09, 2015 |
Nice work, sir. But I think their dialogues sound too western. And the mail shouldn't have been placed in quotes, it should rather have been italicised. Placing the message in quote makes it sound like a direct speech. Lest I forget, in your prologue, you used the word 'cop'; I think that's a misnomer. We don't use 'cop' in Nigeria, we use 'policeman' or 'officer'. There is no dull moment in the story. Well done, sir. 1 Like |
Re: African Spiderman by ninja4life(m): 3:54pm On May 10, 2015 |
Nice update though short.still following |
Re: African Spiderman by shilery: 11:11pm On May 14, 2015 |
nice update......following |
Re: African Spiderman by Nobody: 9:25pm On May 29, 2015 |
D 1 Like |
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