Corper died in sokoto, wamakko orientation camp
this morning.... Corper shun died due to the
harsh weather in Sokoto and
the drilling/ maching.... It was gathered that corper shun had kidney
disease, he took part in all the activities in camp,
this morning he slumped and died in the parade
ground.... may his soul rest in peace.... he has been buried according to Islamic rights....

Op are you sure it wasnt your grammar that sent him to his early grave. RIP to the corper and to English

Abiagirl777:
Op are you sure it wasnt your grammar that sent him to his early grave.
RIP to the corper and to English

english professor .the op was trying to pass a across a vital information. I tink d best u can do is to bid to departed soul farwell, not tryin to demean the op effort. If I may ask na u carve english

Abiagirl777:
Op are you sure it wasnt your grammar that sent him to his early grave.
RIP to the corper and to English

english professor .the op was trying to pass a across a vital information. I tink d best u can do is to bid to departed soul farwell, not tryin to demean the op effort. If I may ask na u carve english

Mr Nzeokafor, your sentence is riddled with wrong spellings and words and this makes me wonder the crop of young graduates our educational system is churning out enmass. However, I have taken the pains to correct the ones I can.

Nzeokafor:
corper died in sokoto, wamakko orientation camp this morning.... Corper shun died due to d hatch (harsh) weather in sokoto (Sokoto, its a place) and the drilling/matching (marching) .... It was gathered dat (that) corker (corper) shun had kidney disease, he took part in all the activities in camp, this morning he slumped and died in the parade ground.... may his soul rest in peace.... he have (has) been buried according to Islamic rights.

Please try to proof read your writings before you submit them.
Thanks.

Climaths:
english professor .the op was trying to pass a across a vital information. I tink d best u can do is to bid to departed soul farwell, not tryin to demean the op effort. If I may ask na u carve english

Lol... birds of a feather..

lomomike:
Mr Nzeokafor, your sentence is riddled with wrong spellings and words and this makes me wonder the crop of young graduates our educational system is churning out enmass. However, I have taken the pains to correct the ones I can.



Please try to proof read your writings before you submit them.
Thanks.

but do u know some people are poor in written and spoken english..but far intelligent and sound than those who claim to be masters in dis field.. so its all about what you have got upstairs.

espn:
but do u know some people are poor in written and spoken english..but far intelligent and sound than those who claim to be masters in dis field.. so its all about what you have got upstairs.

Mr, that's not an excuse, if you claim it is, I find it lame and disturbing for you to try so hard in defending an inadequacy especially when there's a way out which is to study recent articles, read wide and listen to good spoken English language.

lomomike:


Mr, that's not an excuse, if you claim it is, I find it lame and disturbing for you to try so hard in defending an unadequacy inadequacy especially when there's a way out which is to study recent articles, read wide and listen to good spoken English language.

StPete:

Typing from a touch sensitive device ..... I mistyped that... Thanks for the correction bro.

lomomike:
Mr Nzeokafor, your sentence is riddled with wrong spellings and words and this makes me wonder the crop of young graduates our educational system is churning out enmass. However, I have taken the pains to correct the ones I can.



Please try to proof read your writings before you submit them.
Thanks.

How I wish many people can learn from you the way you just corrected the young man, some times the way some people behave on NL to people who make mistake is always disheartening.

I tell you that when somebody get discouraged from what he/she write, rather than being appreciated, it would scare that person away from writing or posting a vital information next time.

You just gave the young man the courage to re-write his wrong and post a very vital information next time.


BTW: RIP to the dead

wunmi590:



How I wish many people can learn from you the way you just corrected the young man, some times the way some people behave on NL to people who make mistake is always disheartening.

I tell you that when somebody get discouraged from what he/she write, rather than being appreciated, it would scare that person away from writing or posting a vital information next time.

You just gave the young man the courage to re-write his wrong and post a very vital information next time.


BTW: RIP to the dead

Thanks

And oh...!
May the soul of the departed rest in peace, may GOD grant all who's affected by the demise of the young Nigerian graduate the fortitude to bear his irreparable loss.

espn:
but do u know some people are poor in written and spoken english..but far intelligent and sound than those who claim to be masters in dis field.. so its all about what you have got upstairs.

Yes, I quite agree with you on this, during my days in school the guy that finished overall best in our school then found himselfs in that same shoe, he's spoken English is very very bad and he's very intelligent.

That's why white men are better than us

lomomike:
Mr Nzeokafor, your sentence is riddled with wrong spellings and words and this makes me wonder the crop of young graduates our educational system is churning out enmass. However, I have taken the pains to correct the ones I can.



Please try to proof read your writings before you submit them.
Thanks.

Thanks.... Hope u are ok with the corrections?

you guys should stop talking about the stuff I wrote, some were mistyped n d rest misspelt .... correction made.... though am not good in written English, am working on it and I swear its not easy. LOMOMIKE don't blame the university I went to.... If u were in my shoes from day one u, won't know what is nairaland.
Thanks.

Abiagirl777:
Op are you sure it wasnt your grammar that sent him to his early grave.
RIP to the corper and to English

lol...

June24th:
Lol... birds of a feather..

its allowed...

Nzeokafor:
you guys should stop talking about the stuff I wrote, some were mistyped n d rest misspelt .... correction made.... though am not good in written English, am working on it and I swear its not easy. LOMOMIKE don't blame the university I went to.... If u were in my shoes from day one u, won't know what is nairaland.
Thanks.

Sorry for even correcting you. I should have ignored you.

Cheers!

Nzeokafor:
Corper died in sokoto, wamakko orientation camp
this morning.... Corper shun died due to the
harsh weather in Sokoto and
the drilling/ maching.... It was gathered that corper shun had kidney
disease, he took part in all the activities in camp,
this morning he slumped and died in the parade
ground.... may his soul rest in peace.... he has been buried according to Islamic rights....

Yes a corper died. but d rest of the details are so untrue. i doubt if u're at sokoto camp. if u are, then u were probably absent wen the state cordinator came around and the OBS report during 2day's morning parade. he didn't slump at d parade ground neither did he die as a result of the harsh weather. plz get your facts straight...God bless u!

[quote author=Henrolla post=33693098]
Yes a corper died. but d rest of the details are so untrue. i doubt if u're at sokoto camp. if u are, then u were probably absent wen the state cordinator came around and the OBS report during 2day's morning parade. he didn't slump at d parade ground neither did he die as a result of the harsh weather. plz get your facts straight...God bless u![/quote

You said we shouldn't agree he slumped! Then tell us what happened to the man. You gave an incomplete information. Pls tell us.

June24th:

Lol... birds of a feather..

mr or mrs who ever you are,for the record I don't tink the OP owes any body apology on how he/she chooses to express an information, in as much as the choice of words used does not Infringe right and well being of others. So why do folks like u take delight in focusing on gramatical blunders, instead of the details of the OP information. The likes of u, who tink u can correct other people grammatical blunders., Have blunders in virtually every sphere of ur lifes which u can't correct. So don't treat peoples post with so much disdain and disrespect, becus this grossly an act of childishness and callousness

@Op...pls dnt misinform people.
Yes a corp member died, but it was not as a result of the harsh weather condition neither was it as a result of the tedious matching/ parade. According to the report written by him(the deceased) in his file, he was suffering from a heart problem. Nobody knows if the cause of the death is related to his heart condition but contrary to the Op's report, He(the deceased) slump in the banking premises outside the camp while waiting to use the bank's ATM. He was rushed to Usman Dan Fodio teaching hospital where he was pronounced dead.

Climaths:
mr or mrs who ever you are,for the record I don't tink the OP owes any body apology on how he/she chooses to express an information, in as much as the choice of words used does not Infringe right and well being of others. So why do folks like u take delight in focusing on gramatical blunders, instead of the details of the OP information. The likes of u, who tink u can correct other people grammatical blunders., Have blunders in virtually every sphere of ur lifes which u can't correct. So don't treat peoples post with so much disdain and disrespect, becus this grossly an act of childishness and callousness

Bros take corrections when u're corrected..
I'm not insulting d op but d guy who failed to take corrections...
Pls correct ur errors too..
No offence!!

espn:
but do u know some people are poor in written and spoken english..but far intelligent and sound than those who claim to be masters in dis field.. so its all about what you have got upstairs.

sometimes,nobody would give u a chance to show what you have upstairs when the first thing that comes out of your mouth is a resounding "gbagaun".
I know we can't be perfect,but we can atleast try our best

having said that,Rest In Peace to the dead...

June24th:

Bros take corrections when u're corrected..
I'm not insulting d op but d guy who failed to take corrections...
Pls correct ur errors too..
No offence!!

mr please help me correct the error, Since that is your talent. No offence!!!!