True life story

Finally..finally,i am here.
Actually,this is my first time of writing any story apart from the one i wrote during my ssce wassce,i red through flow1759 stories and had this ginger i should be able to write some of my stories too.
Here i am,contructive criticism is highly appreciated as well as ur thoughts and comments...your support is all i want and i promise i wont disappoint you guyz.....flow baba...i trowey salute

I woke up and stopped the alarm clock buzzing for close to two minutes,i looked up at the wall clock and saw 7:15am,i yawned and stretched my leg and my hands simultaneously....the house was already busy as my siblings were already preparing for school,my mum sells provision right in front of the house,we live in a 3bedroom bungalow,i have 3 siblings including myself to make up 4 childrem(2boys & 2 girls).my dad on the other hand is a 'jack of all trade' in the sense tha he sells motor spare parts,sells 2nd hand vehicles and also he is a building contractor,had it been i was allowed to select a father before leaving heaven for planet earth,it would surly not be him,thats because he is very strict an he over does it most times,being the first child of the family,we often quarrel alot so i do everything possible to avoid his wahala like sleeping before he comes back from work and making sure he leaves for work before i come out of my room.

nice story dear. keep it up

nice one hommie..keep the ball rolling

I quickly jumped out of bed and saw my sony ericsson phone lying on the floor,it must have dropped when i slept off the previous night, i picked it up and saw i was having an unread text,i opened the text message as i tried adjusting my erect d*ck in my boxers,the mesage was from hopezy(azagba hope),i dimmed my eye because of the light coming from the phone screen but my eyelids gradually madeway for my eyeball as i saw the of the text,'rhoseti our waec result don come out',i checked d time i received the text,it was 10:16pm the previous day,'o boy i quick sleep o'i said to mysef but i was still happy i didnt get the message the d previous night because it would have murdered my sleep,i called him to confirm if the message was one of his stupid pranks.
Hopezy is a good example of a perfect friend,we lived together in the same compound as kids until 2007 when we reloacated to our respectives permanent site,he is a year and few month older than me but we look very much like agemates and i was even taller than him maybe because he has a bow leg that makes him look like plyer,he is handsome,easy going but very lazy maybe because he is the last child of his parents.

I quickly jumped out of bed and saw my sony ericsson phone lying on the floor,it must have dropped when i slept off the previous night, i picked it up and saw i was having an unread text,i opened the text message as i tried adjusting my erect d*ck in my boxers,the mesage was from hopezy(azagba hope),i dimmed my eye because of the light coming from the phone screen but my eyelids gradually madeway for my eyeball as i saw the text,'rhoseti our waec result don come out',i checked d time i received the text,it was 10:16pm the previous day,'o boy i quick sleep o'i said to mysef but i was still happy i didnt get the message the previous night because it would have murdered my sleep,i called him to confirm if the message was one of his stupid pranks.
Hopezy is a good example of a perfect friend,we lived together in the same compound as kids until 2007 when we reloacated to our respectives permanent site,he is a year and few month older than me but we look very much like agemates and i was even taller than him maybe because he has a bow leg that makes him look like a plyer,he is handsome,easy going but very lazy maybe because he is the last child of his parents.
I dropped my phone because i seriously needed to hiss myself,i headed straight towards my bedroom door,i walked straight to the bathroom,i didnt meet anybody on my way except for the splashing of water i heard as i drew closer to the bathrooms,i held on to my d*ck so as not to pee on my boxers as i asked who was their and my siblings responded simultaneously,the two girls occupied one bathroom while my brother from the other bathroom asked 'kilode?','ito gbon mi oo'i complained,,'E lo sita naw',i quickly ran towards the backyard door to pee;gboaaaaaaaaa,i fell down & hit my head on the wall,my ankle was a bit mangled as i managed to get up,fortunately,no nobody saw me,i quickly removed my d*ck from the boxer,'shhhhhhhhhhh'i released the urine that almost took both my bladder and my ankle.

rhoseti1:
Finally..finally,i am here.
Actually,this is my first time of writing any story apart from the one i wrote during my ssce wassce,i red through flow1759 stories and had this ginger i should be able to write some of my stories too.
Here i am,contructive criticism is highly appreciated as well as ur thoughts and comments...your support is all i want and i promise i wont disappoint you guyz.....flow baba...i trowey salute

rhoseti1 You be correct! i promise to read your story

flow1759:



rhoseti1 You be correct! i promise to read your story

thanks for the inspriration pappy

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i redialled hope's number because it was switched of when i dialled it earlier,gruuuuuuun...gruuuuuun,it rang this time,my heart beat increased at d sound of each gruuuun,'aw far rhoseti,shey u see my message' he said,'ehn naw,na why i call be dat,shey u serious?'i asked,'y i go dey take result dey play nah,na to go buy scratch card ooo and i hear say na #500 be the scratch card'he replied,'wetin we go take the card do'i asked a dumb question because i was'nt thinking straight again,i was already painting a picture of how the result will look like in my mind,'if i fail this waec na to begin gce tutorial when my mate go dey do jamb tutorial'i thought,'na your papa mouth we go slot the card now,him go come dey vomit money'he replied my dumb question','come slot am for him mouth naw,him still they house if him no go kill you this morning,no worry i go find the money come meet you for house make we fit go together'i said as i dropped the call,the conversation lasted 1min:02secs so i checked my balance to see if i still have enough balance to call him when am on my way to his house.
I limped to my mums room,'ekaaro ma'i greeted,without waiting for her reply i begged her to please borrow me #500 without stating what i wanted to use it for,after so much pleading,she gave it to me after i have promised to return it later in the evening of which i lied.
I left her room heading towards my room happy because i got the #500 and still in great fear because i dont know what the next one hour holds for me,i took my towel lying on the door of my room then walked towards the bathroom,d pain in my ankle had already subsided,all my siblings had already left for school,i stumbled on my dad as i made for the bathroom door,'e kaaro sir'i murmured,without replying my greeting he said 'se o ti gbo pe result waec ti jade?','iro oo'i lied,o boy this one wey my papa don know na die be dat ooo if i fail'i thought,i heard my name from my dads room,that brought me back to reality,'gba' he said,behold,he gave a waec result checker scratch card accompanied with #500 naira to buy time at the cybercafe,i already knew the guy running a cybercafe in the shopping complex where my dads office is located must be responsible for this,'chai..Devil is a big liar'i murmured.
Am used to playing music from my phone while bathing but that morning was diffent,i had a light shower and was through within three minutes,i quickly brushed my teeth,i didnt bother rubbing cream,i gently applied air cream and brushed my hair to brighten my sporting waves,i wore a black round neck complementing my dark skin colour with a ama kip kip written boldly on it and blue jeans correspondinly.
'Six sitting in the corner.....dont dull
wearing dolce and gabbana......dont dull'was the music blasting from my phone,i checked to see who the caller was as i was wearing my chelsea wrist watch,it was hopezy.....'where you dey naw?he asked,'i don almost reach your side'i lied.
As i walked down the street,i was trying my best to make sure the look on my face does not compliment the amount of fear in me.On getiing to his house,i knocked,his mum opened the door,'Gud morning ma'i said,she replied with a smile telling me your friend is in the bathroom taking his bath,on a very good day,i would have gone straight to the bathroom and drag him out with his d*ck for lieing to me that he was already prepared.
I sat for close to 10mins wen he came to join me in the sittingroom....'u know say ur papa dey craze'i whispered,'no vex jare,i think say i go don finish before u reach here,i could'nt believe my eye when we got to the cafe.

bizzle109:
nice one hommie..keep the ball rolling

oshe my nigga,u sef go still feature for my tori ooo....watch out

Marynneka:
nice story dear. keep it up

thanks..and i hope you will follow till the very end

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You need to paragraph your work to make it less stuffy ... Nice story still..waiting for update...

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'Good morning', i said to the cafe attendant, 'how can i help you' he replied,i looked around the whole cafe hall,it was crowded with students that also came to check their waec result,before i could say WAEC,a girl slid from her seat to the floor, 'water ooo,water ooo' the cafe attendant screamed at the top of his voice,everybody had already gathered around her,i managed to check the computer screen in front of the girl to see what could have triggered her unconsciousness,una wan know wetin i see? she had f9 parralel except for yoruba where she had c6,i opened my mouth lyk i wanted to swallow something,before i could say 'buhari' gboaaaaaaa!,water was dripping from my cloth,the idiot that went to fetch water slipped and emptied the container of water on me, 'na me faint abi u know see who faint for ground' ,i screamed, 'hahahahahahaa' hopezy was laughing hard at me,shame swallowed me up,the unconscious girl coughed back to life and everybody's attention was shifted away from me; 'nobody dey check result again for here before una go come die finish for my shop' the cafe attendant announced, 'abi God wan punish you,after dem don baff me finish with water,you no go come still check my result for me' i almost said but i dare not say it because the guy in question looks like an olympic medalist in weight lifting. We walked down to another cybercafe,instead of buying browsing time, we decided to give the cafe attendant our details to help us check the result on his system and also print it,he asked if we have our scratch card,i replied saying i have mine with me but my friend here has the money with him,he handed hopezy a scratch card and collected his money,he decided to check mine first since i have my card scratched,my heart started beating at the rate of 5beats per seconds as he kept punching the keys on his keyboard,'i am done you can pick it there', the cafe attendant said pointing at the printer opposite him,i moved towards the printer,my legs began to fail so i told hopezy to help me get it,'o boy na 2credit u get oo' he said, i thought it was one of his jokes,so i moved closer to him and collected the piece of paper containing my hope of becoming a university student that year.

I came,i saw but i didnt conquer because what hopezy told me was nothing but the truth,his result was printed almost immediately and he had good grades.

I felt very weak as i walked back home, i was replaying the events of the previous three hours in my head,i was also thinking of how to present this kind of result at home.



*******2 weeks later*****