Anyother rhyme i have put together! This one is more like a poem.
COMFORT TO THE BROKEN.
Though your heart may be as a fallen leaf
whose nutrient has all taken a leave.
Though you may be as broken bottles,
whose pieces are only seen with high tech goggles.
Though you may be a fish out of water,
headed to the place of slaughter.
Though you may be as a rot in the void,
so irritating that people do avoid.
Though you may be as a vulnerable beast,
in the thicks, and make for a sweet feast;
for your very strong enermies.
Though you may be broken beyound repair,
and it start seeming as though those part you've lost doesn't have a
pair.
Yes it does,and its with your creator who really cares.
These words are for you.
Take heed and know that JESUS has paid your dues,
worry no more cause you will find rest for your soul,
This hope lays in him who can console.
Come to JESUS,Oh ye hungry hearts,
and watch yourself grow healthy and fat.
As he can set even those tiny pieces of you thrown apart,
Together.and give you hope for eternal life.

Bravo!! Gotta some of these lines in my conversation.

GeneralQuamdeen:
Bravo!! Gotta some of these lines in my conversation.

i am highly elated!