laykorn:
Did you compose this?

laykorn:
Did you compose this?

tohpahz:
Who says to love is to suffer
And that it has Nothing to offer
Who says to love is to cry
Until the tears come out dry
Who says to love is to age
And to lose our self image

We say to love is to mourn
And to lose all our fun
We say to love is to fake
Because we've had our past to rake
We say to love is to sorrow
And it has no Hope for tomorrow

But love

Love says it is to give
Without expecting to receive
Love says it is its place to endure
And to strive to give you more
Love says it is very kind
And it comes with Nothing in mind

Love says it isn't suffering, toil or labor
Like we were made to think
Neither does it scorn
or age or mourn
Or make you want to sink
You just have to know
That to love is to be free
And yes it does show
That weakness at the knee

It's just you giving yourself
And doing it wholeheartedly..

#tohpahz & joiy

asumo12:
i doubt 'it'

timpaker:
Erm.... now this is something I would wanna learn - love poems

Nice one Tops!

Just try and punctuate it appropriately.

tohpahz:


Most of it is me.
(First part exclusive )

So yeah..

laykorn:



Oh! It's great; the rhymes were awesome and the whole theme. Just remember to punctuate your subsequent works.

I wish to see more of your musings.

tohpahz:

Thanks a lot I'd try to punctuate next time..
You would see a whole lot of them.

forandy:
Nyz one  

AirborneLacer:
Since Tohpahz met me, she's turned a poet.

Good stuff babe.

tohpahz:


Lolzz. Oh yeah u wish

tunnamania11:
So u did copy and paste it here without my consent, I'm gonna sue you for plagiarism.

AirborneLacer:


Sincerely I really wish, how about making those wishes come true?

tohpahz:


See this one... lolzz..

You had better get better lawyer.