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I can't say this poem is perfect but I just wrote is some minutes ago. someone challenged me to write it within a stipulated time. please, i need to make it better and your suggestion and editing is welcome. Thanks The women conscience Are we but nothing to say Her mordern conscience,nothing but nay Eve realized but compromise But this llater,nothing, a negligence Your pride even now, worsen Even this act inflaming But we read she's mind broaden Every step into civilization path Maketh this later one, sociopath Yet she claims feminism Belay! This, nothing but vague egoism All sparkles and self- loathing Your conscience, dead as doornail And an agradisement of yard sawmill ...... yeah its sonnet. dedicate it to BENEDICTA who challenged me to this and all Nairalanders cc: Seun Lalasticlala From Drabeey 2 Likes |
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