Good morning everyone
Please kindly review ...thanks in advance

KingJB:
It is an eclipse! He screamed!
No! Morning it isn't, says another!
But the cock goes cuck a doodle!
And the old church clock chimed 6!

Why is the sun so dull?
Why are the birds not chirping?
The whole world stood still
In the magic of the moment
Aye! Aye! Master here she comes!

Softly Softly she gently threads
Here comes she that overshadowed-
The sun cowed to a dark corner
Aye! Let the fairies do a headcount

One fairy less, One angel less
Here comes the queen of fairies
Gently gently my priceless jewel
I will pronounce your name- Ewa!
I will declaim you Ewa!

Lovely eyes as two sparkling rubies
Eyes golden, face shining
Ha! She smiles
And the wailing wailer forgets to wail
Beautiful princess! Classic diva
Looks do kill, oh I'm dead!

God bless the day you were born
God bless the womb you were formed
Ewa! May I worship you for ever?
Let me adorn you with Golds nay Diamonds
Let me wake and sleep in the holiness of your laps
Let me taste the sweetness of your smooth lips
Smooth lips, smooth skin, as velvety as satin
Let me hold you on the night of the moon
I will love you to the moon and back

I will praise you till you smile at me
My words lifeless, my looks harmless
I am just a wandering wanderer
I will forever do your bidding

The princess of Venus!
Let me be your prince

And the whole world shall be our stage!

To all the ladies on this thread...forgive my dry lines

Originally Posted:
https://www.nairaland.com/2161676/prospective-nysc-2015-batch-b/2577#38731660

A verse in adoration of the fruity beauties
Who bejewel our harem

Their beauty flourishes for eternity
We are like lizards basking in the sun of their love
Bards will write of this
Griots shall rhyme with it



My own dry rhymes for our ladies. Thank you KingJB.



Your poem reminds me of sunset and the stories told therein. It's a long poem and I think you should put some sort of structure. Except it's a free verse.

theSpark:
A verse in adoration of the fruity beauties
Who bejewel our harem

Their beauty flourishes for eternity
We are like lizards basking in the sun of their love
Bards will write of this
Griots shall rhyme with it



My own dry rhymes for our ladies. Thank you KingJB.



Your poem reminds me of sunset and the stories told therein. It's a long poem and I think you should put some sort of structure. Except it's a free verse.

You are endowed man

You are great

And your lines are irresistibly stimulating
....
Make I dey my dark corner

I dey learn..