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Image Of A Man Called Shadow by quietswagg: 9:08pm On Nov 17, 2015 |
In the wilderness he was willed A lonely world he lives No fEeling of despair A ghost with a faint mind Reflection of the human body Promiscuous its, in our actions In the light its a treasure In the dark its a paralyze soul In the mirror its our unclothedness In the world its our salvation With happiness and harmony he dine with us Among thorns and obstacles he fight with us With his sweat he shall be glorified A shadow shall be celebrated in struggles Light of the world it becomes Celebrity he was seen in the vacuum With young age he's an entity of euphoria In old age he was frail with sinews The shadow never leaves the owner At the end, the soil becomes it homes His memories shall be clustered in the minds They shall be read in books to the coming generation To be celebrated, paint the shadow with stars A martyr it will become in the known and unknown |
Re: Image Of A Man Called Shadow by opeaceo: 9:53pm On Nov 17, 2015 |
Lovely piece you've got, you used the word "is" instead of "its", and in the last quatrin, you crushed it. |
Re: Image Of A Man Called Shadow by quietswagg: 3:45am On Nov 18, 2015 |
opeaceo: Thanks ma'am |
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