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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:23am On Feb 10, 2016
ChizzyMaris:
Wow, keep it coming baby!
tnx.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:35am On Feb 10, 2016
she held into the door for balance.

her head was spinning.

oh no!

this can't be true. she can't be pregnant.

she bit her tongue so hard she tasted blood.
the pain she felt was imaginable.

why her?

Maggie came over to her and held her shoulder.

she wept.

Maggie tried to console her but she was inconsolable.

how can she bring forth a child?
why is nature repeating itself?

she can't bring forth a cursed child.

Maggie told her not to lose hope,

not to cry.

she told her that there's nothing without solution. bringing up or birthing a child is a decision and if one is not up to it, she can easily flush it.

she raised her head when she heard the word 'flush'.

she understood what Maggie meant.

she knew without thinking twice that she would abort the child.

to kill whatever was growing in her.

she never thought of being a mother.

she can't and she won't.

if her parent had succeeded in terminating her, she would never have been in this condition.

she will never forgive herself if she ever brought a child into her world.

her world of misery.

her world of suffering and pain.

all she wanted to know now was when the abortion would take place.

that was her only solution.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:54am On Feb 10, 2016
she was restless all through the night.

Maggie had left the room for her to rest, she attended to her different client in the reception.

Maggie promised her to be calm, not to be fussy as the deeds would be carried out the next day.

she wished she could do it now.

she prayed and hope for tomorrow to come.

finally.
tomorrow came.

Maggie had asked her not to eat anything. she sneaked out and came back wit a bottle of squad give brandy and ten tiny tablets.

she asked her to take the drug with the brandy for a quicker action.

even though she was nervous to get rid of her pregnancy.

her conscience pricked her.

voices in her sneered at her.

"you re evil, after killing your siblings and dad you want to kill your own child, prostitute!, you re worst than Lucifer".

Maggie had excused her to go fetch water.

the voices grew louder.

she sat down, she confronted it.

"you don't know me, so don't judge me, just leave me alone".

"you will die, you want to commit abortion you murderer, you will die instead, hahahahaha" the voice in her head sounded like her late adopted father.


she stood up.

she felt a sharp pain.

she tried to stand up again and realized moist seeping down from her skirt.

it was thick and reddish in colour.

blood!

the voice became louder "hahaha hahahahaha hahahahaha, you re dying"

more voices in her head. all laughing.

she tried to walk and the bleeding increased.

she saw things double.

"Maggie, Maggie, she screamed as she fell into oblivion.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by chingylingy1(f): 8:19am On Feb 10, 2016
Please update more
Pls cry
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Ebenezerchimezi: 9:45am On Feb 10, 2016
Oh my God!!!! ......chaaai really interesting..... More of it please
......Mizquote.......
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Osman1996(m): 9:54am On Feb 10, 2016
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Chai omo dis no b joke
Keep it coming
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 7:17pm On Feb 10, 2016
she opened her eyes.

the bed was swirling. she felt she was floating.

she closed her eyes again.

and opened them. same thing.

she felt weak, couldn't move her body.

wait!

where is she?

she tried to recall.
the more she tried the more thoughts eludes her.

"mama you Don wake up?, aaah! thank God o"

she was lying there weak and bloated.

her stomach began to churn terrible.

she knew she wanted to throw-up.

to puke.

Maggie noticed and brought a plastic bucket she vomited in it.

until her jaw hurt.

she felt better.

Maggie brought water and panadol to her.

"mama. take this, drink two tablet, e go help with the headaches".

she collected the tablet and stared at it.

the memory came flooding like torrent of water.

she held her head to avoid it from swaying.

she became alert and tried to stand.

"calm down mama" Maggie said.

"you had too much of the brandy in an empty stomach, that was why you collapsed, I was scared something would happen o".


she touched her stomach as if to feel if the pregnancy was still there. she whispered.

"did it work".

Maggie smilled and nodded.

"when I came into the room, I met you laying down on the ground sleeping and bleeding, I was scared at first but I realized it was the effect of too much brandy, I cleaned you up and padded you, I'm happy you are awake now".

for the first time in her life she tasted love.

someone cared for her.

someone loved her.

two tiny drops of tears escaped her eye lid.

Maggie went over and hugged her.

she was thankful to her friend, all she could do was sob softly.

this time it was a cry to celebrate being loved.

she didn't in her wildest imagination knew that the foetus growing in her was unaffected.

it was determined to live.

to taste life.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Missmossy(f): 9:06pm On Feb 10, 2016
Ewww abortion failed cheesy

Really nice piece.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Dfrenzy(m): 2:15am On Feb 11, 2016
Stories like this, make me wonder, why was this world created? For humans to suffer endlessly?
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by sameesyd(m): 10:33am On Feb 11, 2016
sadEyaaaa, jst keep d baby koh
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Psamist1759(m): 8:55pm On Feb 11, 2016
More update pls...ur story make 2much sense ;DMore update pls...ur story make 2much sense
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Yousuf4sure(m): 11:11am On Feb 13, 2016
I feel like ...OH MY GOD""

I'm so inlove with this story.. I mean I so much love this story ...
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Yousuf4sure(m): 11:12am On Feb 13, 2016
More power to your elbow .....
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ritababe(f): 4:14pm On Feb 13, 2016
am I late?
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Kunzu(m): 6:28pm On Feb 13, 2016
Abortion.
Kai, dere is God oo
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pulsa(m): 7:05pm On Feb 13, 2016
ritababe:
am I late?
not in connection to this thread; but I carried out more research and have realised that no one even knows for sure where he came, whether from Benin, Egypt or Ethiopia.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ritababe(f): 7:20pm On Feb 13, 2016
pulsa:

not in connection to this thread; but I carried out more research and have realised that no one even knows for sure where he came, whether from Benin, Egypt or Ethiopia.

u can't be crown king in Benin if u don't have a Benin blood, so no need to research use ur medulla dear.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pulsa(m): 7:35pm On Feb 13, 2016
ritababe:


u can't be crown king in Benin if u don't have a Benin blood, so no need to research use ur medulla dear.
this is me using my medulla"what if his son conquered Benin". cool
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ritababe(f): 8:24pm On Feb 13, 2016
pulsa:
this is me using my medulla"what if his son conquered Benin". cool
Benin people called him to claim his throne, he refuse thus sending his son.
dig deep.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pulsa(m): 8:27pm On Feb 13, 2016
ritababe:

Benin people called him to claim his throne, he refuse thus sending his son.
dig deep.
okay o, let's let sleeping dogs lie wink.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by ritababe(f): 8:28pm On Feb 13, 2016
pulsa:
okay o, let's let sleeping dogs lie wink.
okay, i will share the book with you anytime I enter B side again.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by pulsa(m): 8:33pm On Feb 13, 2016
ritababe:

okay, i will share the book with you anytime I enter B side again.
will love that.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by amzy4real(f): 8:49pm On Feb 13, 2016
Go girl,u rock.av bin a ghost reader,u re really good dear,more write up.cnt wait smiley
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:39am On Feb 14, 2016
Dfrenzy:
Stories like this, make me wonder, why was this world created? For humans to suffer endlessly?


such is life dear.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:41am On Feb 14, 2016
amzy4real:
Go girl,u rock.av bin a ghost reader,u re really good dear,more write up.cnt wait smiley

thanks dear.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:46am On Feb 14, 2016
Kunzu:
Abortion.
Kai, dere is God oo
lolzzz.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:47am On Feb 14, 2016
Yousuf4sure:
I feel like ...OH MY GOD""

I'm so inlove with this story.. I mean I so much love this story ...
tnx.
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 10:48am On Feb 14, 2016
Missmossy:
Ewww abortion failed cheesy

Really nice piece.
tnx dear
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:47am On Feb 15, 2016
even though she was completely overwhelmed with guilts, she tried to assure herself that whatever she did was for the good of the child growing inside of her.


its one thing giving birth to a child is a different thing securing the child's life and being a mother to the child.


she learnt to rise against the voices in her head, to shut them up.

to respond to them.

they have no right to question her. if they re actually her deceased family she accused them.

in every accusation they was an equal counter accusation.

the voices say " forsaken human being, such worthless trash, I wonder why a human being is filled with such bitter bile.


she would respond.
"
Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by mizquote(f): 9:57am On Feb 15, 2016
even though she was completely overwhelmed with guilts, she tried to assure herself that whatever she did was for the good of the child growing inside of her.


its one thing giving birth to a child is a different thing securing the child's life and being a mother to the child.


she learnt to rise against the voices in her head, to shut them up.

to respond to them.

they have no right to question her. if they re actually her deceased family she accused them.

in every accusation they was an equal counter accusation.

the voices say " forsaken human being, such worthless trash, I wonder why a human being is filled with such bitter bile.


she would respond.
" I know I am bitter but fate made me so, I was born a mistake, I rather die a mistake than repeating this misery. I will never allow a child pass through the agony I have passed.


she used to say that in her mind but to prove a point she say it out loudly usually behind closed door.


she was beginning to win against them.

to shut them out loudly and fiercely.
***********""""#********************************
Maggie had told her she would bleed for at least five days to a week.

but she was surprised the bleeding stopped the next day.

she decided to continue her work.

she went out to the reception to get customer in less than an hour she had gotten three customers.


the days slowly crawled.

she noticed something.

her period had ceased.

she waited disturbed for the next month to come to be certained before relaying her fears to her dear friend.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by fransho(f): 4:54pm On Feb 15, 2016
Nice work u're doing Dear. Oliver Twist want some more, thanks.

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Re: why my blood is black. extremely 18+ by Yousuf4sure(m): 9:00am On Feb 16, 2016
Mizquote ..you're indeed a great writer

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