from the first day we met
i found love in u
u re the only one that makes me smile
you are my only, my best friend
you are my life
you re my sunshine
you re my world
without you my life is worthless
my heart yourns for ur love
our love will never die
no one will  ever come between us
cos we re ordained to be

babygirl, i envy ur bf tell'im to keep up or risk competition from my end too,

By the way,

Ur poem reads like fine aged wine poured from a silver chalice
into a willing mouth
Warming the heart and giving place to hope and all those other stuffs that makes the heart feel so secure;
like a warm glow bordered on edges by promises of romance and a lovefilled night
and what's more, a hand in yours always to stay when morning comes;
It reads like that winding trail leading to your favorite spot quietly overlooking the lake where
the first kiss was shared
and the picnic that fused two gladdened hearts
and the solemn oaths were traded and meant by hearts even the minds behind them had not yet known the ways of life yet
It reads like its gonna be worth trying for
with each realistic step nearer it making it worth dying for
it reads like "oops!, i've gotta stop b4 ur bf comes after me in my dreams "

anyway, go gyrl, like ur poem and wont mind liking you too