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|**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Guykhena(m): 6:42pm On Dec 29, 2015 |
Season greetings to y'all. After the long journey up the mountain ,we are finally at the top,the finals of the 2015 edition of the NL-King-Of-Poets tourney. 16 fearless netcees took to the center stage,but just 2 of the bravest of them all made it to the finals. The Indestructible Llaykorn & The Unstoppable Jason21 Interesting Factoid : Both Finalists actually participated in the first edition of The NL-King-Poets Tourney (ironically,both didn't make it pass the first round). •Special thanks to the 16 Textcees who participated in this 2nd edition of the NL-King-Of-Poets tourney,and for being such a great sport. •Special thanks also to the Judges who found time in giving verds to the fixtures thus far . Kr0ne, Funlord, Sinizia, Reyginus, Alexpissu, Adanna28, Emaprince and my humble self Guykhena. •Also to the followers/viewers,we love you all.. N.B:This Tourney was hosted by yours truly Guykhena and My Brother in crime(erm,ok poor choice of words,but still .) The Great Kr0ne . Enough stalling,let's get on with it.. 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Guykhena(m): 6:43pm On Dec 29, 2015 |
[size=15pt]Llaykorn Vs Jason21[/size] Courtesy of Sinizia... Criteria Creativity - 2 points Entertainment - 2 points Rhymes - 2 points Flow - 1 point Consistency on Topic - 3 points Vocabulary - 2 points Metaphor/simile- 2 Points Emotion - 2 points Imagery - 2 points Your verses MUST be in line with the topic. *The maximum number of lines for each verse should be 30Lines . *Deadline is 7pm, 4th Jan 2016 *Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than the deadline date. *No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. *No complaining about votes. *A no show attracts a ban. *No unnecessary comments. *No arguments with established vets OR voters. *Only Judges and Vets are allowed to vote. Goodluck... 4 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Ewizard(m): 8:14pm On Dec 29, 2015 |
Ok!
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Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by llaykorn: 3:35pm On Jan 03, 2016 |
Checking... |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by funlord(m): 8:40pm On Jan 03, 2016 |
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Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Qaisar1: 6:51pm On Jan 04, 2016 |
Llaykorn: |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Jason21(m): 6:30pm On Jan 05, 2016 |
the day twinkles the sky, in the blink of an eye the future looks bright for the people alive you could be despised for the things that you like but what you think or believe gives you the meanin of life from birth…i’ve been cooped inside/ memories of childhood loops my eyes/ we could have been a happy group of five/ but family eerie practices pollute the hive/ i was raised among folks plagued with professed malevolence/ superstitious beliefs and demented sentiments/ where men are never hesitant….. to read the scriptures and still teach their kids to detest the testaments/ ……God bless their negligence!/ see, my dad loved repairin things and buildin bricks/ but my childhood he never chose to fix/ except by usin sticks/ he had me housed and groomed till six/ but his best gifts.… uduma's talisman and a crucifix/ he made me perch on two sides/ in the search for the light/ with each of my legs in the church and the shrine/ so i became a Christian with the mark of a pagan/ he switched my name from john to Jason/ told me white birds sing to God, the black ones to satan/ that's why when death came and mom was taken/ i spent many years killin and huntin ravens/ more nightmarish than halloweens/ are his tales of evil forests where shadows creep/ ...of monsters that howled and shrieked from dried up callous creeks/ and the trolls that would swallow me if i ever flirt with caroline/ "reflection in the night makes evil fall"/ he yells, no pacin the halls or makin of calls/ so before eight on the dot/ i’d have even my mirror facin the wall/ "son, i’ll never want your failure/ but while you kneel to God for prayer/ don’t forsake the laws of Mother Nature/ if you wish to enjoy the works of your labour"/ the true tyrants are beside us like titans to poseidon/ and the real riots leave the mind fukked/ unable to design a fight or fuss/ but truly.... i wish to be one load of talents/ so i acquire gold enchantments.../ omens of amulets for soul to manage/...... everythin i gather, whether sold or handed/ i place on my table a bible and human skull/ as i try to maintain the piety of jude and paul/ cos i'm scared of incitin uduma’s wrath or bearin the crisis of judas’ call/ i seek the freedom of a lesser slave/ but can't tell if it's mess i create/ adorin a carved image while feedin from celestial plates/ but i sure know that my fate lies between hell and heavens gate.... the day twinkles the sky, in the blink of an eye the future looks bright for the people alive you could be despised for the things that you like but what you think or believe gives you the meanin of life www.nairaland.com/attachments/3260797_bibleandhumanskull_jpegb3ee3ed69181d9e65b7fd016ae14dc41 4 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Guykhena(m): 10:50am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Thanks Airmark. Open For Votes... Judges: Kr0ne Sinizia Alexpissu Funlord Adanna28 Reyginus Emaprince Guykhena . |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by funlord(m): 11:13am On Jan 06, 2016 |
Good final showing from both chaps! Its also been a great tournament overall in my opinion and I hope to see this level of class, maturity, concepts and rhymes maintained in this section in 2016! No need for any sort of extensive critique about these 2 guys final poems because they were both solid and they are both certified 'hip hop poets' already and understand the 'p game' in and out! Alas their must always emerge a victor @ every theatre of war so kudos to whoever comes 2nd! MVGT; JASON21!!! 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Emaprince: 11:21am On Jan 06, 2016 |
The only superstitions that i can spot from both verses are: Butterflies in the garden and Mom wouldn't let us whistle Cos she thought whistling would attract spells of evil I can relate with this. "reflection in the night makes evil fall"/ he yells, no pacin the halls or makin of calls/ so before eight on the dot/ i’d have even my mirror facin the wall/ Though i cant relate with this, but its good. There are several other childhood superstions which y'all coulda delved into. Eg, putting a lil broom stick on one's jaw, move your face around in the direction of all the peeps present to find out who stole a particular thing. Whoever the stick falls in his turn will be held responsible. All in all.. Nice work!! My verd... Creativity - 2 points - jason21 Entertainment - 2 points - jason21 Rhymes - 2 points - jason21 Flow - 1 point - llaykorn Consistency on Topic - 3 points - Tie Vocabulary - 2 points - jason21 Metaphor/simile- 2 Points - Jason21 Emotion - 2 points - llaykorn Imagery - 2 points - Jason21 MVGT - Jason21!!! 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Nobody: 3:09pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Guykhena:Seen. Will drop verd before eight. |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by sinizia: 5:42pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
Creativity - 2 points - Tie Entertainment - 2 points - Tie Rhymes - 2 points - jason21 Flow - 1 point - llaykorn Consistency on Topic - 3 points - Tie Vocabulary - 2 points - Tie Metaphor/simile- 2 Points - Jason21 Emotion - 2 points - llaykorn Imagery - 2 points - Jason21 MVGT - Jason21!!! |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Nobody: 7:42pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
I don't really know why Llaykorn choose the style he used. If I have to wait for about ten bars to get a point then every of the bars leading to the final bar should be composed of gun powder. The idea was solid but the way it was delivered made it fluid. Jason, though took long too to deliver that point we are looking for, his lines not only keeps you interested but also paint pictures of a setting marked by the final bars. I also enjoyed his Philosophical opener and closer. I never believed he will do better. Maybe the edge he got was from posting his verse late after displaying yours for hours. Jason Wins. 1 Like |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Guykhena(m): 9:01pm On Jan 06, 2016 |
The Judges have said it all,may I just add my bit. I think what really made Jason stand out was the way he tackled the topic to the fullest,he did something laykorn failed to do,he showed the "Impact" it had on him,utilizing it to bring the reader to a compelling state. The below from Jason is a perfect summary of this part of the topic "The positive or negative impact it had on them and if possible, still has on them till this day. The fears it brought to them, the good things they lost while clinging onto them," [my dad]told me white birds sing to God, the black ones to satan/ that's why when death came and mom was taken/ Perfectly well executed,Jason made us visualize the impact it had on him.... The only criticism I have is both Netcees not using bunch of known Superstitions in their respective verses,it was more like a tidbit of it was touched. Which is sad considering Sinizia basically gave a long list of superstitions for both netcees to work with. Anyhoo,base on preference and the fact that Jason owned majority of the criteria. MVGT-Jason21 1 Like 2 Shares |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Guykhena(m): 4:44pm On Jan 07, 2016 |
Voting Closed..... I am pleased to give y'all the Crowned [size=15pt]NL_King_Of_Poets[/size] of the Rap Battles Section(2015), [size=15pt]JASON21 CONGRATULATIONS......[/size] . 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Nobody: 7:10pm On Jan 07, 2016 |
Congrats Jason. |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by Jason21(m): 11:59am On Jan 08, 2016 |
thanks to everyone who contributed to make this very tourney a successful one....it's not easy to start a project and follow it up to the end. i'm very grateful adanna28 krone guykhena funlord sinizia emaprince alexpissu airmark @llaykorn.....i read your verse and i must say you're a very good poet. nice battlin with you....and we can always always have a topical battle...just c/o me when you're ready. cheers.... 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: |**|NL-King-Of-Poets[2015]-Grand Finale- Llaykorn Vs Jason21|**| by llaykorn: 10:44pm On Jan 09, 2016 |
Jason21: Ccongrulations, Jason. You were a better poet. I'd really love to have a topical with you as soon as I'm free enough. Enjooy, bro! 1 Like |
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