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When You Can't Recall My Name by devimcy: 1:58pm On Jun 17, 2009 |
I laid the foundation you needed to grow I established the path you needed to follow I built the institution where u obtain your school of thought all your early life crises i stood and fought I got all my neighbourhood candles burnt so i can have u smile but now that you have gotten all you wanted you cant even recall my name if your memory is quick and if you care to think then you may recall how i crucified my freedom to save u from prison I broke protocols to have u smile but now that you've gotten what u wanted you can't even recall my name I have tried many times to access your number but my voice like u can't remember this tends to make me sober n wants to expose my fragile heart to danger oh! how i wearied my body in my quest to make you smile but now that you've gotten what u wanted you can't even recall my name |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by origina9ja(f): 3:53pm On Jun 17, 2009 |
pele ma binu |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by devimcy: 1:41pm On Jun 22, 2009 |
origina9ja: moti-gbo, abi |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by nex(m): 2:45am On Jul 07, 2009 |
Hmmm, this is very real. Very personal and your style in direct and slaps the face. I like this. |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by devimcy: 5:28pm On Jul 07, 2009 |
thanx MR. nex |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by nex(m): 9:18pm On Jul 10, 2009 |
y'all can check out my Lagos Traffic. It's the most recent I've written. |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by jgberg: 5:16am On Jul 14, 2009 |
I like this alot too. It reminds me alot of what I have felt in the past, and sometimes still feel. How ungrateful some people are. Maybe they dont understand how much we care, or they dont care that we care so much. either way, people you love can be real jerks |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by minute(f): 1:58pm On Jul 24, 2009 |
Its a wonderful but sad poem.Very well put together. |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by devimcy: 7:39pm On Jul 28, 2009 |
@ minute thanx a million times |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by pchima: 7:14pm On Aug 10, 2009 |
@poster a very nice piece. kudos |
Re: When You Can't Recall My Name by devimcy: 5:58pm On Aug 17, 2009 |
pchima: thank you my friend |
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