@AudreyTimms, it wont make sense reading & enjoying this story without dropping a comment,at least. Daz wat oyinbo pple wld call "injustice". U'r really good at wat u r doing...d narration, d description, d suspense,in fact u r a bomb (not BH bomb o). Keep it up Sis...& am hungry for moooorrrreeeeeeeee!!!!


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Wow!!! Happy to be FTC @ pg 15
Audrey, u gaz dedicate an update to me oo

Wow wow wow, this update is so sizzling hot.
Chai! Jessica! the worst thing that ever happened to you was having a she-devil as a mother... no one to put you straight.
Audrey this your piece is "totorying" me o . I can't wait to see how it all ends and at the same time don't want it to finish ...
Thanks much for the update... Love you

wooooow!!!seems dahs all I can say for now...trust me aunt timms,u one of d few writers dat made me love lit section so much!!!thanks a lot ma...God bless ur brain!!!

kingphilip:
wow this is the Nkiru I fell in love with

Nah... You are mistaken

Am so so scared for Gio and Nkiru cos this Jessica and her wicked mother will stop @ nothing till they get what they want.

But I suspect the senator has something up his sleeve.

Oh my goodness! Felix and the mother, funny characters. If felix hadn't gone to showoff his new car, he woundnt have gotten into an accident.

Anways can't wait to see how this all turn out. Saturday tins

Welldone Audrey, am so enjoying your story.

kingphilip:
what's good about the day

kingphilip:
you know it's not true

We both know it is, "bro"?

kingphilip:
na so me self see am o

I just say make I come perch for here till she finish n she's taking all the time in the world o

I can see you're "perching" true true.

Seriously i don't know what to say am speechless but if i don't say something it will be a disgusting act by me.Hands down dis story has bin great from the first page and to think dat i could care less about my exams just to read dis story was the hieght of it all.THANKS ANDREY FOR DIS WONDERFULL PIECE OF ART YOU'RE AMAZING....

I can't just appreciate you enough for this great story... I've never bn dis engrossed in an online story/novel like dis before.
I've being on nairaland as a guest for the past 3 months and I was forced to open an account 'cos of you... Thank you for this amazing story.. Can't just wait for Saturday to come

Beautiful piece from a beautiful person.Audrey dis story is lovely.Gio & NK i dey envy dis una italian love o,4 d challenges u guys are facing dem plenty o but u guys fit cross i'm sha,jessica&mum u guys days of reckoning go soon show.

Been a silent reader for quite too long... can't afford to be stingy anymore... unfulfilled promises turned me into a lover girl and now this Gio and Nkiru's story has got cupid dancing over my head, not following Felix's story cause its kinda razz and I prefer 'ajebo' love, moreover Felix's dad is not bastardly rich like Gio's... My prediction on the story though is that Fi got pregnant for Tosin back in school while trying to spite her brother and probably lost the child or aborted the child and that is why she feels her brother ruined her life so its payback time, I'll hate to see a serious blood clash though, please Audrey find a way to blame it all on Jessica, let it be that Fi was manipulated, her character is too sweet to be disliked. I also think Oby and Gio's dad were in love then the late Gio's mum played small wayo, lemme stop my prediction and allow you finish Jaree... Thumbs up!!! More grease to your writing elbow.

Wow Wow Wow Wow Wow. What a lovely story!. This part made me giggle. 'afiamhen' - bird

great job Audrey.....first time reading your work and I'm loving it....though I'm no big fan of romance....I feel its unrealistic and exaggerated...but some other factors kept me hooked to your characters....great story

been a ghost reader since d first episode and I just created an account this noon.

Izyyblaze:
Nah... You are mistaken

I'm not o
I'm talking with clear eyes

Izyyblaze:

hws ur day going dear

Izyyblaze:
We both know it is, "bro"?

don't brotherzone me o

JeffreyJamez:


I can see you're "perching" true true.

what do u mean by that oga JJ

kingphilip:
what do u mean by that oga JJ

You know what I mean

kingphilip:
hws ur day going dear

You mean my night? . It's cool

kingphilip:
don't brotherzone me o

she's my sister o
I don't need to dear,you already did and I'm so loving it "bro"

kingphilip:
I'm not o

I'm talking with clear eyes

I don't think so

in westlife voice..........

This love is unbreakable...........
it's unmistakable.....................

Am feeling this. Ride on ma.

I dnt kno ao 2 criticise cos am nt a writer nor a story teller but i kno ao 2 appreciate; Audrey u ar d best. Kip it comn

Ermm lovebirds @kingphilip and @izyyblaze, you guys are somehow derailing Audrey's thread. Don't let captain Jonathan give you guys a fine

Wow, l finally caught up with you guys, what a beautiful story! I've almost lost interest in literature section until I stumbled on this masterpiece. Well done dear Audrey keep up the good work.

mitchyy:
Ermm lovebirds @kingphilip and @izyyblaze, you guys are somehow derailing Audrey's thread. Don't let captain Jonathan give you guys a fine

i just dey observe this king Phillip since he supported fi, i go give am red card soon

Anty Audrey we are here again ........ Thanks for the update it was...... Can't get a suitable word to describe it. "awesome" it is
Thanks for the update

Can we also get our Nkiru here too. captain Jonathan2787 I hail sir

yusufibrahim:
Can we also get our Nkiru here too.
captain Jonathan2787 I hail sir

i just shifted my oldie reading glasses, took a peek and nodded like a lizard

What next ??