Thanks for d update, more mb and nepa light to your phone.

Thanks for the dedication dear, please fEed us more.

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"OMG!! This guy is so cute" Pearl exclaimed, showing her sister his pictures on instagram and smiling discreetly to herself.

"And he's hot too" Tessy replied, scooping a spoon of koopie icecream into her mouth.

A picture in which Nella winked nearly created a pit of fire in Pearl's belly.

"He's so refined and tasteful in his appearances here and i so much love his styles. Am sure almost all the ladies he knows would be looking at him with appreciation and enviousness" pearl said in a matter-of-fact tone.

"Infact, if the girls in my school have a single chance of seeing him, they would jutt their cleavages towards him willingly" she babbled and kept murmering and mumbling some words to herself that her sister she would go crazy if not distracted.

"Big sis, Look at this picture. Who is the lady beside him here?" Pearl asked with a her face morphed into curiosity. It was obvious she was jealous.
"Huh? That's his wife" Tessy huffed.
"They got married a week back" she suppressed an eyeroll and forced out a smile.

"oh my Goodness! This cute handsome pink lipped guy is married?" Pearl asked with a hint of disappointment evident in her voice.

Tessy squeezed her lips together to stop the laughter that was itching to come out.
"Oh, yes he is" tessy chuckled slightly to herself in a devilish manner.
"And am crushing on him big time tho" Tessy smiled sweetly.

"Oh, big sis. I wouldnt want you to ruin his marriage, please" Pearl mouthed pleadingly to her.
"And who said am gonna ruin his marriage? Just give me my phone and start preparing to go to your campus" Tessy said, putting on a poker face.

"Big sis, before I go, just let me have his IG name" pearl scratched her weavon slightly, waiting for her sister's response.

"I swear down, if I open these closed eyes and you are still here, you are done for!"

"I swear down, if I open these closed eyes and you are still here, you are done for!" Pearl repeated in a funny imitative tone.

She could say teasing her sister was one thing she enjoyed most anytime she spent weekend with her.
Tessy removed her left shoe. Pearl never waited to see the next line of action as she scurried to her room laughing with all the strength she could muster.

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"Dad, I want you to meet a friend of mine. My bestfriend and the only one that understands the way I feel" Jimi said sweetly and squeezed Elyme's hand to ease her off nervousness and fear.

"Good.. Good evening sir" Elyme stammered, she stared at the great icon before her. The fright on her face replaced the look of innocence.

The minister in a plain black Henley T-shirt and Armani jeans leaned slowly on the sofa the sofa made a creaking sound as it accommodated his full weight.
It had taken Jimi some days for Elyme to agree she was going to see his dad. She had been spending most evenings with the Kuti's and it was nice getting to know Sewedo and Viovenna Better.the duo had also grown fond of her and liked her with passion.

"Son,let me see you privately?" The minister said without taking his gaze from his i-pad on his laps.
Jimi mumbled some words to Elyme and she took some steps out of the room, looking inferior and scared.

"Violet called, she said she's coming for your valedictory service and would stay around for some weeks so if you are planning to have anything to do with this girl, back off now."

"Am very sure you still remember your mother's wish. Do it to please her wherever she is Son"He said in a finality tone.

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This story is getting better and it is suspense filled, m not a fan of suspense though but this is different. I wish i could write like this, nice job jeenah

Nice story u have here. Weldone @ madam jeenah

u made FP... Nice

make the minister no come pour sand sand for them jimi and Elyme garri jawe update more jeenah. Biko

OluwabuqqyYOLO:
I love your story, really. Every man is just perfectly made. Be more realistic. Nice job, by the way.

Exactly, u voiced my thought. No one is ugly in the story, it's far more fictional than realistic....nice story tho but I think the physical appearance of the characters should be more realistic and some ugly situations should be added...c'mon everybody can't be rich

Just spent some time reading ur stories and i must say i'm really impressed....would like to see more of this tho
Go Girl,You Rock!....wish i could write like this

jeenah:
Hello Nairalanders, I would really appreciate it if u can comment, air out ur opinions, critics and observations on my first piece(Memories of Cupid), Please don't just be a ghostreader, be actively connected.. thanks...#
Jeenah

just read through the first chapter and I think its a bit jam-packed as too many characters were introduced in such few paragraphs. readers prefer to be eased gradually into a story with new characters emerging as the story progresses, this creates added suspense and intrigue to your story.

*modified*
I observed that you use real life brand names of products and service providers. brand names are only used when the brand(s) is a sponsor. abi you wan dae promote their brand for free?

you made mention of corolla camry. I don't think Toyota has ever made such a car. it's either a camry or a corolla.

Hmm! waiting patently and prayerfully for the day when the event that took place in life of Vera on last episode to take place in my own world. Lord please Hmm! waiting patently and prayerfully for the day when the event that took place in life of Vera on last episode to take place in my own world. Lord please

#Subscribed.. Beautiful one Ma'am..

Jeenah, your story is delightful to the heart. Wonderful work. Keep it up

i just red through and I must say ure unique.. although the storyline looks predictable,we could use a little suspense,a twist to make us the reader hold our breath waiting for the next episode... maybe a twist to Austins life with Cassandra or elyme..

OMG! I can't believe I could make FP.. When someone said I made FP, I had to go check cos I have never thought of making FP with this piece.

awwn... thanks to you all for the above comments but I am just new in writing.. this is my first Piece but I really appreciate the criticisms.. I promise to do better as I progress.. Thank you!

jeenah:
OMG! I can't believe I could make FP.. When someone said I made FP, I had to go check cos I have never thought of making FP with this piece.

awwn... thanks to you all for the above comments but I am just new in writing.. this is my first Piece but I really appreciate the criticisms.. I promise to do better as I progress.. Thank you!

it is worth making front page.. Keep up the good work but like the user before said, "more suspense pls"

jeenah:
OMG! I can't believe I could make FP.. When someone said I made FP, I had to go check cos I have never thought of making FP with this piece.

awwn... thanks to you all for the above comments but I am just new in writing.. this is my first Piece but I really appreciate the criticisms.. I promise to do better as I progress.. Thank you!

you deserve it...thumbs up girlll

Nice one still Expecting more

Oooohhhhh God! Where should I have been when u started this, Well thank God I didn't come too late well More Inks to ur pen waiting for the remaining update...

Yes! Jeenah I read through your story and it's commendably worth reading. Even though you're not perfect but you are exceedingly creative in the choice of words, description of personalities & objects and many more. Good adjectives, vocabularies and use of English. Amazingly, this is yr first story? Thumb up However, In the beginning of the story,you introduced too many characters more earlier. Kudos

hmmmmm

jeenah

nice story u ve got here.but I think this is three story in one and making the story more wider to comprehend.or is there a way all the characters in the story will be later linked together. m enjoying the story though

latbas:
nice story u ve got here.but I think this is three story in one and making the story more wider to comprehend.or is there a way all the characters in the story will be later linked together. m enjoying the story though

There's a link.. thanks and keep following

Eleniyan15:
hmmmmm

jeenah

hmmmm


sir

jjblues:
Yes! Jeenah I read through your story and it's commendably worth reading. Even though you're not perfect but you are exceedingly creative in the choice of words, description of personalities & objects and many more. Good adjectives, vocabularies and use of English. Amazingly, this is yr first story? Thumb up However, In the beginning of the story,you introduced too many characters more earlier. Kudos

thank u . keep following

Rapmaestro:
it is worth making front page.. Keep up the good work but like the user before said, "more suspense pls"

noted... thank u

jeenah:
hmmmm


sir

nothing ma, I wish you re an art student

Nice story Miss Jeenah..Waiting patiently for the next update #Following

Nice story....Good Job here. However, the plot is too lose and I can't seem to connect it together.

Contrabanned:
Nice story....Good Job here. However, the plot is too lose and I can't seem to connect it together.

Just keep following. all will sum up soon

Contrabanned:
Nice story....Good Job here. However, the plot is too lose and I can't seem to connect it together.

Just keep following. all will sum up soon, some characters would go into extinction tho

Op am already in luv with you. Can I know you better, inbox me ur number