RemenZack:
[color=#990000][/color] As my nostrils sucked in the thick smoke, and my eyes took in red thick blood, almost as velvet, I could feel my belly churn vehemently.

My partner, Essien had been shot, twice or three times, I wasn't sure. But I could feel my ears ring after the white police officer had plunged a bullet from his gun.

Essien and I were on our way to visit my parents, but his breathing was ragged, and my heart was beating, "Thump! Thump!!". He would definitely survive, but not me. I was watching my lifeless body give up its last breath, as Essien took his last as well.]

RemenZack:
As my nostrils sucked in the thick smoke, and my eyes took in red thick blood, almost as velvet, I could feel my belly churn vehemently.

My partner, Essien had been shot, twice or three times, I wasn't sure. But I could feel my ears ring after the white police officer had plunged a bullet from his gun.

Essien and I were on our way to visit my parents, but his breathing was ragged, and my heart was beating, "Thump! Thump!!". He would definitely survive, but not me. I was watching my lifeless body give up its last breath, as Essien took his last as well.]

donkross1:



Immediately I gave up my last breath, Suddenly out of no where a strange light shone so bright I had to use my hands to cover my eyes despite the fact that they were shut.

At that moment I began to hear some melodious voices singing in harmony, I was tempted to open my eyes to see where the song was coming from but I couldn't because of the bright light.


"Koffi Koffi" I heard a very deep voice call my name, the voice was so deep and strong that it could break down the cedars of Lebanon. "Who is calling me" I gathered all the strength in me to ask. "I am that I am" The voice replied.

RemenZack:

This is actually really nice. Thanks for adding more spice and ice to my work.

emazion:
when are you going to complete only any of you stories?we are waitin::::::::